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Angels angels
09:30:40 [1k+ brindles] Angel
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What item would you guys use on this? Do I go for filly sven or do a filly med?
Eagle Creek
09:23:06 Eagle
Big bagg**
Eagle Creek
09:23:00 Eagle
Sky I always have a Bigg bad in the freezer <3
Skyward Stud
09:21:53 Skrangle
@Willow, I didn't actually make these ones! I bought them from a bag and just fried em up
Looking Glass Stable
09:21:37 IA Glass 👋
That sounds like an incredible lifegoal to be fair
Yellowstone
09:21:20 Stonie
I don't know what to do with you
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Two Trees Stables
09:21:14 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Sky
Can you pm me a recipe
Skyward Stud
09:21:09 Skrangle
you guys have no concept of how often I eat dumplings. there are no goals in my life except dumbling
Eagle Creek
09:19:31 Eagle
🤤 yummy
Skyward Stud
09:18:53 Skrangle
they're pork, cabbage, and chive and I'm gonna be pan frying them
Vancouver
09:18:18 Ana / Van
Ooh yes please
Eagle Creek
09:17:53 Eagle
*grabs chopsticks *🥢
Skyward Stud
09:17:48 Skrangle
alright everyone get in line. five dumplings each
Looking Glass Stable
09:17:42 IA Glass 👋
Free food? 👀
Two Trees Stables
09:17:28 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Skyward
Yes! and I want those tocos
Eagle Creek
09:17:23 Eagle
👀 I do!
Angels angels
09:17:06 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yes!
Skyward Stud
09:16:57 Skrangle
I made some dumplings does anyone want any
Rising Stars Stable
09:12:33 Willow ~ AA Breeder
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I wonder if she will hit the AALB next month
Eagle Creek
09:11:51 Eagle
She better be nice too
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Angels angels
09:30:40 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
What item would you guys use on this? Do I go for filly sven or do a filly med?
Eagle Creek
09:23:06 Eagle
Big bagg**
Eagle Creek
09:23:00 Eagle
Sky I always have a Bigg bad in the freezer <3
Skyward Stud
09:21:53 Skrangle
@Willow, I didn't actually make these ones! I bought them from a bag and just fried em up
Looking Glass Stable
09:21:37 IA Glass 👋
That sounds like an incredible lifegoal to be fair
Yellowstone
09:21:20 Stonie
I don't know what to do with you
-HEE Click-
Two Trees Stables
09:21:14 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Sky
Can you pm me a recipe
Skyward Stud
09:21:09 Skrangle
you guys have no concept of how often I eat dumplings. there are no goals in my life except dumbling
Eagle Creek
09:19:31 Eagle
🤤 yummy
Skyward Stud
09:18:53 Skrangle
they're pork, cabbage, and chive and I'm gonna be pan frying them
Vancouver
09:18:18 Ana / Van
Ooh yes please
Eagle Creek
09:17:53 Eagle
*grabs chopsticks *🥢
Skyward Stud
09:17:48 Skrangle
alright everyone get in line. five dumplings each
Looking Glass Stable
09:17:42 IA Glass 👋
Free food? 👀
Two Trees Stables
09:17:28 Willow ~ TB Breeder
Skyward
Yes! and I want those tocos
Eagle Creek
09:17:23 Eagle
👀 I do!
Angels angels
09:17:06 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yes!
Skyward Stud
09:16:57 Skrangle
I made some dumplings does anyone want any
Rising Stars Stable
09:12:33 Willow ~ AA Breeder
-HEE Click-
I wonder if she will hit the AALB next month
Eagle Creek
09:11:51 Eagle
She better be nice too
-HEE Click-

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Criticism and help! January 31, 2025 05:20 AM


Dark Conspiracy
 
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Hello! Some of you already know me^^ it's me Dark! I've been making art for a long time and unfortunately worked on a very old, laggy iPad. Now that I have a new iPad, I'm open to learning!!
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I am open to criticism and help!
I am also interested in:
how much is it worth?
Tier?
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old art is in my gallery

Edited at January 31, 2025 05:29 AM by Dark Conspiracy
Criticism and help! January 31, 2025 05:21 AM


Dark Conspiracy
 
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latest art to criticize

Edited at January 31, 2025 05:24 AM by Dark Conspiracy
Criticism and help! January 31, 2025 10:38 AM


Gem
 
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Hi!!!! I LOVE this piece!!!!! I saw it on Imp's stable a few days ago and was just blown away. I adore the contrast and the lighting and the drama. It's truly stunning and I would totally steal it. I had to stare for a bit to find anything to critique haha!!! ❤️
A few little things:
  • Looking at the jewelry on the tail, the cuffs should be casting a very small shadow on the horse to illustrate that they're not just markings. Along the same point, the cuff closer to the base of the tail, there is hair growing out of it. Logically I think the hair would be trapped inside the cuff? So maybe erase the few strands there. And if I'm totally misinterpreting it and they are meant to be markings, please ignore lol
  • As I mentioned, I adore the lighting. It makes it super dramatic and just gorgeous. The only spot I would adjust slightly is the chest/front shoulder. It seems unnaturally light when the direct light source is on the opposite side of the horse.
  • Because the background is so vibrant and green, I think it would make sense to have a bit more of that color incorporated/cast onto the horse. However, for this piece it feels like more of a stylistic choice and would work either way.
  • Last tiny thing, looking at where the tail docks to the horse's rump, I feel like the rump should be in front of the base of the tail. Meaning that there should be some sort of shading making a distinction between the two areas with shading rather than a direct connection. If this doesn't make sense I'd be happy to sketch what I mean.

    Lots of love!!! ❤️
Criticism and help! January 31, 2025 10:45 AM


Dark Conspiracy
 
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Thank you^^
First art on the new ipad - a lot of work go get better but ur tips are awesome as always^^
Gem!
oh and yea they are fur markings not jewelry but thank you!^^

Edited at January 31, 2025 10:48 AM by Dark Conspiracy
Criticism and help! January 31, 2025 11:54 AM


Gem
 
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Okay haha!! I would suggest maybe making the tail markings less shiny then so they don't look quite so metallic but they're still super cool :D
You're most welcome 🥰
Criticism and help! February 8, 2025 04:46 AM


Dark Conspiracy
 
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new art for Criticism and price help!
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Criticism and help! February 8, 2025 11:15 AM


Gem
 
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Easily 200k-300k+. I love them both 😍
I'm on my phone so I'm not going to type out anything long but the one thing I will say is to look at the mane in the red demon sky piece. In comparison to the forelock in the same piece and the hair in the vampire piece, the main feels very stiff. Which I understand is probably a result of the hair cuffs and the braided style but braids can still curve and flow, same with the hair exiting the cuff.
Absolutely amazing job with lighting and fitting the horses to their background. Just be careful you're not avoiding grounding by shading with black 😜
Completely beautiful, can't wait to see what you make next <3
Criticism and help! February 8, 2025 11:19 AM


Dark Conspiracy
 
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Thank you for always being here XD^^
I only do the black for the vampire - the dark atmosphere is supposed to make it a little creepier ^^
and yeah - hair is my biggest problem ;C

Gem said:
Easily 200k-300k+. I love them both 😍
I'm on my phone so I'm not going to type out anything long but the one thing I will say is to look at the mane in the red demon sky piece. In comparison to the forelock in the same piece and the hair in the vampire piece, the main feels very stiff. Which I understand is probably a result of the hair cuffs and the braided style but braids can still curve and flow, same with the hair exiting the cuff.
Absolutely amazing job with lighting and fitting the horses to their background. Just be careful you're not avoiding grounding by shading with black 😜
Completely beautiful, can't wait to see what you make next <3



Edited at February 8, 2025 11:20 AM by Dark Conspiracy
Criticism and help! February 8, 2025 11:21 AM


Wolf Dancer
 
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So amazing love! Love all your work! <3
I love your manes/tails and all you art so much <3 Keep up the AMAZING work!
Criticism and help! February 8, 2025 11:22 AM


Dark Conspiracy
 
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<3 <3

Wolf Dancer said:
So amazing love! Love all your work! <3
I love your manes/tails and all you art so much <3 Keep up the AMAZING work!



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