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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

Year: 193 Season: Fall

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11:38:37 Win | Water

Look at this guy -HEE Click-

11:38:08 Win | Water

o

Sierra Views Stable

11:37:44 AZ

Win - it's a random one, you can't breed for it

11:35:00 Win | Water

How do you find mares chimeras for breeding ?

Sierra Views Stable

11:32:43 AZ

-HEE Click- new chimera <3

Dash and Duchess

11:32:06 DD | ~Squizard~

I'm honestly debating whether to give her favorite child featured privileges 🤔
-HEE Click-

RFS Thoroughbreds

11:30:25 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

you should

Halloween stable

11:29:26

Does everyone wanna look at my featured horse he is very pretty I think I wanna keep him

RFS Thoroughbreds

11:28:27 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

:'(

RFS Thoroughbreds

11:28:21 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

I remember I made this awesome piece which was a white horse (good) with birds and tentacles reaching out and charging at this black horse with ravens and the tentacles (evil apparently) on a bridge with a waterfall in the background and I totally regret it

Dash and Duchess

11:25:40 DD | ~Squizard~

Peggy, yup I feel that 🥲

Dash and Duchess

11:25:23 DD | ~Squizard~

Oop I poofed earlier 😭

11:25:00 Win | Water

I have 34k more to breed, and try to get a brindle.

11:24:05 Peggy (or) Peg

I also have an art piece I regret selling 🥲 You live and learn I guess

Halloween stable

11:14:40

OMG I forgot I had these on my stable

RFS Thoroughbreds

11:10:49 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

not bad for a quick 30 min piece after three months :)
-Click-

Sunni

10:10:13 Sunni bunny

Just wanted to share that photo I snapped today.
I'll be back on in a second.

Sunni

10:08:21 Sunni bunny

RFS Thoroughbreds

09:53:53 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

thank you!

Glacier Bay Cove

09:53:07 Arctic Katz

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11:38:37 Win | Water

Look at this guy -HEE Click-

11:38:08 Win | Water

o

Sierra Views Stable

11:37:44 AZ

Win - it's a random one, you can't breed for it

11:35:00 Win | Water

How do you find mares chimeras for breeding ?

Sierra Views Stable

11:32:43 AZ

-HEE Click- new chimera <3

Dash and Duchess

11:32:06 DD | ~Squizard~

I'm honestly debating whether to give her favorite child featured privileges 🤔
-HEE Click-

RFS Thoroughbreds

11:30:25 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

you should

Halloween stable

11:29:26

Does everyone wanna look at my featured horse he is very pretty I think I wanna keep him

RFS Thoroughbreds

11:28:27 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

:'(

RFS Thoroughbreds

11:28:21 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

I remember I made this awesome piece which was a white horse (good) with birds and tentacles reaching out and charging at this black horse with ravens and the tentacles (evil apparently) on a bridge with a waterfall in the background and I totally regret it

Dash and Duchess

11:25:40 DD | ~Squizard~

Peggy, yup I feel that 🥲

Dash and Duchess

11:25:23 DD | ~Squizard~

Oop I poofed earlier 😭

11:25:00 Win | Water

I have 34k more to breed, and try to get a brindle.

11:24:05 Peggy (or) Peg

I also have an art piece I regret selling 🥲 You live and learn I guess

Halloween stable

11:14:40

OMG I forgot I had these on my stable

RFS Thoroughbreds

11:10:49 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

not bad for a quick 30 min piece after three months :)
-Click-

Sunni

10:10:13 Sunni bunny

Just wanted to share that photo I snapped today.
I'll be back on in a second.

Sunni

10:08:21 Sunni bunny

RFS Thoroughbreds

09:53:53 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf

thank you!

Glacier Bay Cove

09:53:07 Arctic Katz

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November 30, 2017 11:11 PM

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Well I tried to do my first horse image art piece and I'm not sure what to think? Any opinions?

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=14193968

December 1, 2017 12:24 AM

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Looks better than my first go, that's for sure.

My comment would be to make the hair more detailed - add individual strands and clumps. Perhaps focus on making the nose more distinguishable from the rest of the neck as it kinda meshes together.

Overall nicely done

December 1, 2017 12:27 AM

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Try blurring the BG too

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