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The Joker
10:52:43 Ari <3
McFossil
Tell me about it x.x when did the world become so expensive
Dash and Duchess
10:52:37 DD | ~Squizard~
Ari, doing good! About to go crash after a long day XD how're you?
Dash and Duchess
10:52:07 DD | ~Squizard~
Bin, it is *^* the Gg Ch eprl To possibility... 🤩
BluebonnetCreekRanch
10:51:45 BluebonnetBree
Bird - I'm 27 and was married and now divorced it's not all it's cracked up to me trust me lol
The Joker
10:51:23 Ari <3
I'm 22 and I broke up with someone to focus on horses more competitively, whereas my sister was with her fiancé at my age. It's comparing apples to oranges when you compare your life with other people's, especially because you all make different choices which take you to different points in life
MC Ace
10:50:52 McFossil
Ari tells no lives. Living isn't cheap. Being married really isn't cheap XD
The Joker
10:49:45 Ari <3
Hi DD! How are you?

Bird
Here people usually get married and have kids later than that, nobody can afford to start a family early unless they come from a rich family 😂
MC Ace
10:49:38 McFossil
Thanks DD!
I kept his dam for the shine XD
Pearlescent Shores
10:48:59 Bin/Bingus
DD you gotta, that's too shiny to pass up *-*
MC Ace
10:48:55 McFossil
Thanks Bingus~
I nearly gelded him. I own his bottom dam line and nearly FR'd the EWE mare, but thought eh why not? Maybe she'll pay me back XD
Hummingbird Meadows
10:48:51 Bird
@Ari, comparison has been a big struggle with me lately. I'm 25 and most people where I live have kids by that point. Good old Utah.
Dash and Duchess
10:48:12 DD | ~Squizard~
Hey Ari!
Dash and Duchess
10:47:57 DD | ~Squizard~
Mc, omg congrats on the WWW! And I think I have too..the shine 🤩
The Joker
10:47:51 Ari <3
How is getting married making you feel like a failure? Even if that's your goal there's no need to compare, everyone is on different walks in life and comparison is the biggest enemy you can give yourself
Pearlescent Shores
10:47:19 Bin/Bingus
Woah congrats MC that is some crazy RF
MC Ace
10:47:17 McFossil
Do it DD
Dash and Duchess
10:47:02 DD | ~Squizard~
To wing it for the color, or not wing it for the color...
-HEE Click- +2
Hummingbird Meadows
10:46:45 Bird
Because she is younger than me and I have been feeling like a failure in life lately. Her parents also recently made a comment that their kids are the only ones who turned out normal.
BluebonnetCreekRanch
10:45:53 BluebonnetBree
Ah gotcha! Thanks :)
MC Ace
10:45:49 McFossil
This is why we cull.
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The Joker
10:52:43 Ari <3
McFossil
Tell me about it x.x when did the world become so expensive
Dash and Duchess
10:52:37 DD | ~Squizard~
Ari, doing good! About to go crash after a long day XD how're you?
Dash and Duchess
10:52:07 DD | ~Squizard~
Bin, it is *^* the Gg Ch eprl To possibility... 🤩
BluebonnetCreekRanch
10:51:45 BluebonnetBree
Bird - I'm 27 and was married and now divorced it's not all it's cracked up to me trust me lol
The Joker
10:51:23 Ari <3
I'm 22 and I broke up with someone to focus on horses more competitively, whereas my sister was with her fiancé at my age. It's comparing apples to oranges when you compare your life with other people's, especially because you all make different choices which take you to different points in life
MC Ace
10:50:52 McFossil
Ari tells no lives. Living isn't cheap. Being married really isn't cheap XD
The Joker
10:49:45 Ari <3
Hi DD! How are you?

Bird
Here people usually get married and have kids later than that, nobody can afford to start a family early unless they come from a rich family 😂
MC Ace
10:49:38 McFossil
Thanks DD!
I kept his dam for the shine XD
Pearlescent Shores
10:48:59 Bin/Bingus
DD you gotta, that's too shiny to pass up *-*
MC Ace
10:48:55 McFossil
Thanks Bingus~
I nearly gelded him. I own his bottom dam line and nearly FR'd the EWE mare, but thought eh why not? Maybe she'll pay me back XD
Hummingbird Meadows
10:48:51 Bird
@Ari, comparison has been a big struggle with me lately. I'm 25 and most people where I live have kids by that point. Good old Utah.
Dash and Duchess
10:48:12 DD | ~Squizard~
Hey Ari!
Dash and Duchess
10:47:57 DD | ~Squizard~
Mc, omg congrats on the WWW! And I think I have too..the shine 🤩
The Joker
10:47:51 Ari <3
How is getting married making you feel like a failure? Even if that's your goal there's no need to compare, everyone is on different walks in life and comparison is the biggest enemy you can give yourself
Pearlescent Shores
10:47:19 Bin/Bingus
Woah congrats MC that is some crazy RF
MC Ace
10:47:17 McFossil
Do it DD
Dash and Duchess
10:47:02 DD | ~Squizard~
To wing it for the color, or not wing it for the color...
-HEE Click- +2
Hummingbird Meadows
10:46:45 Bird
Because she is younger than me and I have been feeling like a failure in life lately. Her parents also recently made a comment that their kids are the only ones who turned out normal.
BluebonnetCreekRanch
10:45:53 BluebonnetBree
Ah gotcha! Thanks :)
MC Ace
10:45:49 McFossil
This is why we cull.
-HEE Click-

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Critique? August 8, 2017 04:08 PM


Casanova
 
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Looking for critique on this art piece:
https://s2.postimg.org/4tsarxbjt/IMG_6779.jpg
** I know the front legs look crossed! If the hooves were showing I don't think it would be that way! **

Also looking for advice on tips and tricks!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:22 PM


Pyramid Equestrian
 
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I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:23 PM


Casanova
 
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Pyramid Equestrian said:
I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)


Thank you for the critique! I will go see what I can do to fix some of this :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:25 PM


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Im like the queen of critiques today hehe

Background
- I would select most of the background (from around the end of the horses tail and up) and blur it out a bit. It will draw more focus to the horse.
- It seems as though you just took the bg without editing it at all, which is fine, but I personally would have tainted it more of a blue-hue or something of the sorts. Remeber to experiment instead of just going right to the original BG!
- I would add a darkened, precise reflection to the water here. Duplicate the horse layer, position it behind the horse, and laying on the water, and then darken it, and lower the opacity. Then, erase all of the spots where the lilly pads are, and replace that with a very light shadow, so that there is a reflection on the visible water, and a light shadow on the lilly pads. :)

Horse
Lighting
The lighting in this photo is quite nice. Its not a super difficult bg to work with, and you definatley chose a great stock image to pair it with. Well done!

Horse Body
- Great job with the majority of the body, I really like the way you prepped its coat! Just right on smudging and such.
- As for where his legs meet the water, I would reccomend a clean cut instead of a fade into the water. in real life, thats how it would really work. I would also add ripples in the water where the legs meet (you can find ones that are ready to go on DA) to add some detail.
- The eye needs some work. The horse in question has a small eye in this photo, so you need to be very precise. You definatley have the right idea here, but remember, practice makes perfect!

Mane and Tail
- Mane looks fine to me, it seems that in this image the mane was roached (shaved) so you didnt have to worry about that.
- Tail needs a bit more expression. Grab a 1px brush in 100% smudge mode and fan it out a bit. remember to use curved lines with movement!

Accessory
- I like your idea here, but the flower needs to be smaller. I would also put some shadows around it to make it fit in the image better.


I hope this helps!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:41 PM


Casanova
 
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Thank you! I'll experiment with reflections (Not very experienced with shadows and reflections) and I'll edit the tail a bit more. I'll go see what I can do with the background and I'll see what I can do with the flower.

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