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Pegasus Lane
04:48:43 Peggy (or) Peg
TSA agents suck. The first one this morning stole my jam and the third one almost broke a few vases and a ceramic mug 😔 I knew the salt would be flagged so it was right on top. No freaking need to /tear/ apart everything in my suitcase 😫
Sweet Valley
04:41:51 Anna/Jewel
I mean, I like flying in airplanes, too! But horses are my DREAM! Yes, I want to have an airplane some day. But I need a license for that. You don't need a license for riding a horse. U can have a horse at any age!
Sweet Valley
04:40:09 Anna/Jewel
And just seeing a horse kills me because I want one so badly for my own! Why is it the thing I want the MOST I can't have?
Sweet Valley
04:37:18 Anna/Jewel
Well honestly there's no horses TO lease, and I would rather have one to call my own, one I can ride all hours of the day. One that is on our property always, and I can be sure it's not a dream.
Ambrosia
04:36:43 Amb
Always insure your horses :)
Bear Performance
04:35:56 Bunny ♡
Honestly, id stick to leasing :')
My horse died
Sweet Valley
04:35:36 Anna/Jewel
We had to break the lease because the horse foundered because too much grass. The lady was a friend's daughter....
Sweet Valley
04:34:50 Anna/Jewel
I've wanted a horse since I was 6. We leased one for a bit but had to break the lease. A lady promised lessons of barrel racing and she said she'd loan me her horse to take to races. She got a job, and I didn't get a single lesson. We were really close to getting a horse named Manna, but the owners were a little snippy and when mom asked questions said "You ask too many questions, so we gave the horse to another family".
0000000000
I have been so close, and they always slip thru my fingers.
Sweet Valley
04:31:44 Anna/Jewel
I certainly hope so!
CWY country
04:31:29 C
Anna, I understand. It'll happen eventually with time and patience.
Sweet Valley
04:26:50 Anna/Jewel
I'm not. I love playing this game, but I just wish I could really truly have a horse of my very own. that is my dream and I hope and wait for the day it will happen
CWY country
04:26:30 C
Anna, it takes a lot of learning and patience. But, like bear said don't lose heart.

I've just recently gotten WWW's. I've been on here for almost two years with the my best being EEW and WWE, then having them flop.
Bear Performance
04:23:59 Bunny ♡
Anna
There's definitely a chance, dont lose heart !
Sweet Valley
04:23:28 Anna/Jewel
* I may have a chance this year with a WWW or just with one W!!!!
Sweet Valley
04:22:48 Anna/Jewel
Yeah i know it just is a little upsetting, you know, bear. But a few friends gave me a WEE stud and an EEW mare so i may have a chance. I also have a few EEE fillies turning 3
Sweet Valley
04:21:17 Anna/Jewel
west is losing massively in this water balloon fight... 20k prize money. I may as well throw the money I have all into breed-approving. Getting a WWW out of my horses with my luck is about as rare as West making a comeback
Bear Performance
04:20:08 Bunny ♡
Not this one scuse me, a different one
Bear Performance
04:19:55 Bunny ♡
Anna
Ive been on this account for over a year and no WWW yet, you cant get jealous it wreaks playing this :>
Sweet Valley
04:18:43 Anna/Jewel
Oh. Well so am I. All I got last year was EEE. (I didnt have that stud yet) and boy.... that was disapointing when people were saying about their WWWs lol
Insignia Elites
04:17:45 Em
Thanks Anna but Im looking for a WWW :D

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Pegasus Lane
04:48:43 Peggy (or) Peg
TSA agents suck. The first one this morning stole my jam and the third one almost broke a few vases and a ceramic mug 😔 I knew the salt would be flagged so it was right on top. No freaking need to /tear/ apart everything in my suitcase 😫
Sweet Valley
04:41:51 Anna/Jewel
I mean, I like flying in airplanes, too! But horses are my DREAM! Yes, I want to have an airplane some day. But I need a license for that. You don't need a license for riding a horse. U can have a horse at any age!
Sweet Valley
04:40:09 Anna/Jewel
And just seeing a horse kills me because I want one so badly for my own! Why is it the thing I want the MOST I can't have?
Sweet Valley
04:37:18 Anna/Jewel
Well honestly there's no horses TO lease, and I would rather have one to call my own, one I can ride all hours of the day. One that is on our property always, and I can be sure it's not a dream.
Ambrosia
04:36:43 Amb
Always insure your horses :)
Bear Performance
04:35:56 Bunny ♡
Honestly, id stick to leasing :')
My horse died
Sweet Valley
04:35:36 Anna/Jewel
We had to break the lease because the horse foundered because too much grass. The lady was a friend's daughter....
Sweet Valley
04:34:50 Anna/Jewel
I've wanted a horse since I was 6. We leased one for a bit but had to break the lease. A lady promised lessons of barrel racing and she said she'd loan me her horse to take to races. She got a job, and I didn't get a single lesson. We were really close to getting a horse named Manna, but the owners were a little snippy and when mom asked questions said "You ask too many questions, so we gave the horse to another family".
0000000000
I have been so close, and they always slip thru my fingers.
Sweet Valley
04:31:44 Anna/Jewel
I certainly hope so!
CWY country
04:31:29 C
Anna, I understand. It'll happen eventually with time and patience.
Sweet Valley
04:26:50 Anna/Jewel
I'm not. I love playing this game, but I just wish I could really truly have a horse of my very own. that is my dream and I hope and wait for the day it will happen
CWY country
04:26:30 C
Anna, it takes a lot of learning and patience. But, like bear said don't lose heart.

I've just recently gotten WWW's. I've been on here for almost two years with the my best being EEW and WWE, then having them flop.
Bear Performance
04:23:59 Bunny ♡
Anna
There's definitely a chance, dont lose heart !
Sweet Valley
04:23:28 Anna/Jewel
* I may have a chance this year with a WWW or just with one W!!!!
Sweet Valley
04:22:48 Anna/Jewel
Yeah i know it just is a little upsetting, you know, bear. But a few friends gave me a WEE stud and an EEW mare so i may have a chance. I also have a few EEE fillies turning 3
Sweet Valley
04:21:17 Anna/Jewel
west is losing massively in this water balloon fight... 20k prize money. I may as well throw the money I have all into breed-approving. Getting a WWW out of my horses with my luck is about as rare as West making a comeback
Bear Performance
04:20:08 Bunny ♡
Not this one scuse me, a different one
Bear Performance
04:19:55 Bunny ♡
Anna
Ive been on this account for over a year and no WWW yet, you cant get jealous it wreaks playing this :>
Sweet Valley
04:18:43 Anna/Jewel
Oh. Well so am I. All I got last year was EEE. (I didnt have that stud yet) and boy.... that was disapointing when people were saying about their WWWs lol
Insignia Elites
04:17:45 Em
Thanks Anna but Im looking for a WWW :D

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Hello! Names Roadkill! Or Alex for short, I'm currently working on a short book series for myself and others, it is a fan made series based off of the book series Warrior Cats. I am thinking of trying to publish it (after getting approval from the author who wrote the actual series) or share it with family and friends and soul really appreciate feedback on how it looks so far! I'm currently only working on the first book but there is another book coming soon if I finish the first one with enough time >U<! With that, I will paste the process of the book so far! (ONLY PROLOGUE,CHAPTER 1,CHAPTER 2, AND A QUATER OF CHAPTER 3 ARE FINISHED)
[ THIS SHORT STORY IS MADE BY |+|RoadKill|+| PLEASE DO NOT CLAIM OR STEAL THE WORK! Thank you! ]

BeetlePelt’s Dark Path

Beetle’Pelt’s

PROLOGUE

Brindle’pelt rush ahead of June’Bug and Beetle’Paw yelling angrily, Brindle’s voice was distinct due to his raspy tone and loud calls. Snow’kit could be seen being held by Brindle who had had her by the scruff. As June rushed after his father Beetle followed farther away, she stumbled once or twice which caused her to fall behind. Riverclan Warriors could be heard hollering after them chasing far into WindClan territory, WindClan caught the scent of them and followed RiverClan’s tracks closely. “Hurry up you runts!” Brindle scolded, Beetle had fallen so far behind she had to start running through the forest to hide from RiverClan. June’Bug jerked his head around to see that Beetle was nowhere in sight, he paused to see if he could spot her white coat. Beetle called out to June’Bug as he rushed to her grabbing her scruff and running to his father who had stopped at the ThunderPath, “Get behind your father!” Brindle yelled. June’Bug got behind his father placing Beetle’Paw down next to Snow’Kit, Brindle’Pelt had unsheathed his claws bearing his canines aggressively, as June did the same trying to help his father. RiverClan and WindClan had caught up to them cornering them.

CHAPTER 1

Snow’Paw pounced at a mouse pawing at it playfully, “Ain’t so quick and tough when you in my claws huh?” Snow giggled. “Quit playing with your food” Beetle’Pelt scolded, her tone acute and dry. “S-sorry Beetle..I-I was just trying to have fun! Like the g-good days? Remember those?..” Beetle turned her head to meet the eyes of Snow “Father and Mother wouldn’t be happy if their daughter was playing with her food.” Beetle said sternly. Snow looked down at the mouse and then dug her claws into its back “Yes Beetle..” It was a rainy evening, all the prey was out trying to get every last ounce of water they could before hiding again. Beetle’Pelt was sitting on a large box cleaning her paws of a finch’s blood, Snow was finishing her well-earned meal a few feet away. She had always tried to make the best of the situation that she had grown up in but Beetle talking about Mother and Father had made it hard. Beetle sniffed the air softly, her ears twitched as the rain fell. “Hide.” Snow quickly looked up. This happened quite often, Beetle freaking out about something, telling Snow to hide, not to mention getting crammed into a corner! But Snow smelt it too, not as well as Beetle but she could still smell it. Beetle groaned as she jumped down from her box and yanked Snow by the scruff “I said, HIDE.” “Okay!Okay! Can you at least be gentler!?-“ Beetle has covered Snow’s Mouth as they backed farther into the barn, a common rouge has wandered into the barn. He was extremely Wounded from what seemed to be a planned attack, all bites and scratches had been in places that would have easily ended his life in two swats. A WindClan warrior had been following close behind him, the warrior had a pelt of gold with one purple eye, the other white as snow. “Come on, they find you if you don't clean off the blood!” “I know, I know..” the rouge agreed “Why did you try to come back?!” The golden she scolded “I just thought..” “Thought what?! That WindClan would take you back?! They know the story, everyone knows the story!” What story is she talking about? Beetle thought. “I know but!- I had to have a little faith! Even though my Mother and Father are like the biggest Warrior story right now doesn’t mean that I can't try to be accepted back!” The wait is that rouge talking about Mother and Father? But- No it couldn’t be. The golden she sighed and looked at the rouge, her eyes filled with sorrow and sadness. “Junebug, Their still looking for you.”



CHAPTER 2

June’Bug?! Beetle couldn’t believe what she was hearing, she had seen what happened to him! But, she didn’t see what happened afterward. June’Bug turned to the corner his claws unsheathed “Come out you coward! Your not so good at hiding when I can hear your heart!” Beetle looked to Snow who was crying, She looked up to Beetle her eyes watery and pupils large. Beetle sighed and rubbed Snow’s head against her’s “I’ll be right back, don’t worry.” Snow nodded slowly and scooted farther away from the light, Beetle stepped out from behind the Hay bales, her black and white pelt shining in the light. Junebug's paused as soon as she came into few, his tail fell as well as his ears. “Beetle’Paw?” He whimpered “It’s Beetle’Pelt now like you would know” her face turned sour as her ears pinned back. June tried to walk over to her to rub her cheek against his but Beetle just stepped back, she knew her brother was too weak to walk more than a few steps. “Okay I get it, but where’s Snow’Kit? Well, probably Snow’Paw now.” A few tears ran down his face as he looked around hopefully. “She doesn’t want to see you, not after leaving us like that…” She hissed. June became Stern, unsheathing his claws yet again. “I asked. Where, is, Snow?” The golden pelted she just watched with a horrified look upon her face, looking at the two back and forth. “Are you deaf now? SHE DOESN’T WANT TO SEE, YOU.” June’Bug hissed “I deserve to see my little sister-!” “NO, YOU DON’T!” Beetle snarled swatting at June’s face, he winced at the pain-producing loud, terrifying sound, unlike any cat sound she’s heard. Beetle’s tail was swaying quickly as her claws scrapped at the floor. “This isn't how I thought you’d go out but times change I guess.” Beetle then lunged at June gripping onto his side and pulling him down, the only thing June’Bug could do is call out for help. Beetle overpowered him easily, so no one could even save him if they tried. Only when Beetle felt his body go limp is when she let go, he stepped away from his body staring at her own brother’s body. She had killed him, she had killed her brother.

CHAPTER 3

“What did you do?!” The golden she cried out,a hint of fear could be heard in her shaken voice, Beetle turned her head meeting her eyes. “He left us behind, knowing very well what he was doing!” Beetle yowled. The she was shaking but she towered over Beetle, the fact that she had witnessed a sister murder her own brother in cold blood is what made her fear Beetle.

Comment what you think of it so far and what you think would be good to add to this ^^

-RoadKill

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This is really cool! My sister is OBSESSED with the Warrior's series
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Hillcrest Equestrian said:
This is really cool! My sister is OBSESSED with the Warrior's series


Thank you! I was obsessed with it for awhile but then lost interest, but seems I've gotten back into it haha. You should share this with her, she may like it ^^
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People who have never read the original series, would like to get a bit of background to the characters in your continuation, before jumping into the story.
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Munchkin Stables said:
People who have never read the original series, would like to get a bit of background to the characters in your continuation, before jumping into the story.


Ah okay, i was going for a sort of Wings Of Fire writing, like how they do a prologue and such?

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