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Selling 200+ SD Show gelds.(some mares).
Most wilds, not Brave tested. All trained, various levels.
2k each or make me an offer.
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W SD boys for auction - RID and KNN, all disciplines. Some LB or previously LB! Plus some great color to add to your SD lines ^^
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FOR SALE | Variety of horses including PPP-PEE combo mares and schoolmasters for sale

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Auction starting now! LOTS of G1’s, foals, and some nicely rated mares/stallions :)
P.s. I have a lot of horses up for stud; check them out!
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Have an auction starting soon, just purging some of my herd
Connally Stud
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Great horses all rated some very colorful most 1K!
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Yellowstone
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www SH filly for offers
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Skyfeather Stables
05:49:42 Sab
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Sab’s tier 2 art shop is open! Get some custom horse avis
Port Royal Equines
05:38:55 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
-HEE Click-
Lvl 5+ geldings for 3k! I need them gone.
Narran Park
05:31:16 Sting
Selling 200+ SD Show gelds.(some mares).
Most wilds, not Brave tested. All trained, various levels.
2k each or make me an offer.
Gem
05:26:25 Tier 1 Artist
Art rumble auction!! Bigsby - T1 winner <3
-HEE Click-

W SD boys for auction - RID and KNN, all disciplines. Some LB or previously LB! Plus some great color to add to your SD lines ^^
-HEE Click-
Angels angels
05:16:07 Will Buy Brindles!!
-HEE Click-
EEE-WWW mares for auction!
Vixen Creek
05:07:26 Vixie
194 | EWW+ TB & Wub mares available for brood or embryo

-HEE Click-

-

FOR SALE | Variety of horses including PPP-PEE combo mares and schoolmasters for sale

-HEE Click-
Whispering Winds
05:04:06 Halleeeee
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Auction starting now! LOTS of G1’s, foals, and some nicely rated mares/stallions :)
P.s. I have a lot of horses up for stud; check them out!
The Butterfly Garden
04:56:11 
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Have an auction starting soon, just purging some of my herd
Connally Stud
04:55:12 Senda
Great horses all rated some very colorful most 1K!
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Art feedback June 13, 2018 05:50 AM

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Here’s an example of my art
http://i63.tinypic.com/oax2c3.jpg
I was wondering if anyone could give me feedback and ways to improve

Edited at June 13, 2018 05:50 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 13, 2018 06:52 PM

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Wonderful job cutting out your horse! Maybe smudge the horse a little bit less to reserve some of the quality and muscle tone.

Use Brightness/Contrast, Colour Balance to help blend your horses into the background more and make them look as if they belong. (If you use PS then you can play around with Auto Tone/Colour/Contrast)

Horses need shadows ;) Shadows, though you may not realize it at first, make a huge difference in how real you picture looks.

Maybe try adding some highlights/lowlights to help your horse pop.

Most artists also like to redraw eyes to give them a little more life.


Hope this helps! Also, there are tons of tutorials on DA that can help you improve! You are doing very good!
Art feedback June 14, 2018 12:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 01:29 AM

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It's a great precut. It is, however, overly smudged in my opinion. Much like Trinity said, not smudging as much preserves detail.
Adjust the hue/brightness so it blends better with the background
Adding shadows and drawing on hair and highlights will give it a ton more detail also.

Great job
Art feedback June 14, 2018 03:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 04:16 AM

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http://i63.tinypic.com/30kvfb7.jpg
Is that better

Edited at June 14, 2018 06:53 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 14, 2018 07:17 AM

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What art program do you use?

If the shadow stays the sharp the you need to have it outline the horse more. I think in this case the shadow can be softer. Try adding darker spots and softer sides a bit more.

Also don't blur the background as much. Keep the foreground sharp and the background slightly blurred if you are going to do it.

I think the horse could still use a little less smudging.
Art feedback June 15, 2018 03:13 AM

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Ok
I use
ibisPaint X on IPhone

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