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Boulder Creek
06:48:08 
RIDs so the awesome colors aren't totally there.

thanks for the feedback.
find it weird to see breeding alerts for W breedings with my lowly P RIDs
Tamarack Mountain
06:45:04 Opal
I goofed around with pasture breeding this moth these are my results so far -HEE Click-
Silver Melody Acres
06:42:12 Solar - KNNs
It's too bad that most foals dodge either the ratings or the color lol
Hobo Queens Farm
06:40:42 Her Majesty
I try to breed up, knowing it is nearly impossible, because I might be nuts, but I have hope that something might go up instead of down on the foal. The endless search for pretty color without a bunch of "S's" in their ratings.
Silver Melody Acres
06:31:40 Solar - KNNs
Trying to breed the ratings up
Tamarack Mountain
06:29:40 Opal
because they want to?
Boulder Creek
06:22:29 
please riddle me this:
why are stables breeding ww to pp horses?
and of course fr the foal due to poor ratings
Mythological
06:17:55 Crowley
I like him/her...
-Click-
Embervale Acres
06:03:38 Solar Phoenix
Oh my goodness, what a beautiful boy! Had to switch over here to watch him XD

And capture days are horribly addicting lol I always capture more than I originally plan to XD
Cappuccino
05:57:50 Heyy it's Capp
-HEE Click- oh and look at this gorgeous boy I got yesterday *.*
Cappuccino
05:55:35 Heyy it's Capp
LOL right I remember why I kicked my capture habit back in the day....questing has been dangerous LOL slippery slope
Silver Melody Acres
05:54:00 Solar - KNNs
It's avoiding you and giving you luck at the same time lmao
Cappuccino
05:51:00 Heyy it's Capp
LOL -.- -HEE Click-
Cappuccino
05:50:02 Heyy it's Capp
300k later XD mostly on maps at least
Minerva
05:49:12 Min
Oh wow, nice one Capp!!!
Cappuccino
05:47:39 Heyy it's Capp
-HEE Click- out here trying to catch a premium X.x
Rainview
05:42:19 Irish Capp
-HEE Click- oh chimmy - so cute!
Tobiano Lady
04:57:00 Tobi | Nix
It is slightly embarressing to see an prominent older stable use your stud and he pops out fodder :|
Minerva
04:44:54 Min
She's not met them before, but she's quite a large, loud woman and the baby pony hasn't seen anything quite like her yet lol.
Ponies heaven
04:26:04 Pera/ peral
@Min
Ah yea, does she often frighten your horses?

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Boulder Creek
06:48:08 
RIDs so the awesome colors aren't totally there.

thanks for the feedback.
find it weird to see breeding alerts for W breedings with my lowly P RIDs
Tamarack Mountain
06:45:04 Opal
I goofed around with pasture breeding this moth these are my results so far -HEE Click-
Silver Melody Acres
06:42:12 Solar - KNNs
It's too bad that most foals dodge either the ratings or the color lol
Hobo Queens Farm
06:40:42 Her Majesty
I try to breed up, knowing it is nearly impossible, because I might be nuts, but I have hope that something might go up instead of down on the foal. The endless search for pretty color without a bunch of "S's" in their ratings.
Silver Melody Acres
06:31:40 Solar - KNNs
Trying to breed the ratings up
Tamarack Mountain
06:29:40 Opal
because they want to?
Boulder Creek
06:22:29 
please riddle me this:
why are stables breeding ww to pp horses?
and of course fr the foal due to poor ratings
Mythological
06:17:55 Crowley
I like him/her...
-Click-
Embervale Acres
06:03:38 Solar Phoenix
Oh my goodness, what a beautiful boy! Had to switch over here to watch him XD

And capture days are horribly addicting lol I always capture more than I originally plan to XD
Cappuccino
05:57:50 Heyy it's Capp
-HEE Click- oh and look at this gorgeous boy I got yesterday *.*
Cappuccino
05:55:35 Heyy it's Capp
LOL right I remember why I kicked my capture habit back in the day....questing has been dangerous LOL slippery slope
Silver Melody Acres
05:54:00 Solar - KNNs
It's avoiding you and giving you luck at the same time lmao
Cappuccino
05:51:00 Heyy it's Capp
LOL -.- -HEE Click-
Cappuccino
05:50:02 Heyy it's Capp
300k later XD mostly on maps at least
Minerva
05:49:12 Min
Oh wow, nice one Capp!!!
Cappuccino
05:47:39 Heyy it's Capp
-HEE Click- out here trying to catch a premium X.x
Rainview
05:42:19 Irish Capp
-HEE Click- oh chimmy - so cute!
Tobiano Lady
04:57:00 Tobi | Nix
It is slightly embarressing to see an prominent older stable use your stud and he pops out fodder :|
Minerva
04:44:54 Min
She's not met them before, but she's quite a large, loud woman and the baby pony hasn't seen anything quite like her yet lol.
Ponies heaven
04:26:04 Pera/ peral
@Min
Ah yea, does she often frighten your horses?

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I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 11:07 AM

Former Stable
 
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LOL
But I want to get better and I could use some help.
So....Criticize Me Please! <3
XD

Recent Examples:

(First Appy)
https://s33.postimg.cc/gkhm39qu7/Horse_HEEOrder.jpg


https://s33.postimg.cc/ppldj8ryn/Horse_Liver-_Premade-4.jpg

Click For Quality On both! <3

Edited at September 8, 2018 11:09 AM by Lazy Duck Elites
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 11:46 AM


WildWillow
 
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What cute art ideas!

First of all, smudge in small circles. It looks like the coats of your horse are pulled down. Also,it looks as though you need to take more time cutting out the horse. The first horse still has some of the original background around the leg and the last horse looks like the cut out was rushed. Take your time and focus. Hard work pays off!

Also, try to blend the hooves into the ground on the first image. In the second image, the horse is missing it's back hooves! Try redrawing the hooves. There are many great tutorials on DeviantArt for redrawing hooves.

Another thing I thought I'd mention is that the top horse looks blue toned and the background is red toned. Try to color in some red and orange highlights on the horse to help it seem although it is actually in the background. The second image looks foggy in the background which means it probably isn't sunny out which contradicts the highlighting on your horse. Try to make the horse look as though it is actually in the fog as well.

The manes and tail look quite stiff as well. Mess around with some different blending options to make the mane and tail flow rather than be rigid. Making the eyes pop would also bring a nice touch to the art.

Other than that, it looks like your on the right track! :)
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 04:41 PM

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Lighting is key!!! and instead of blending the whole body just blend the face and the legs, and if you add white highlights it will make the horse pop.
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 05:02 PM


Jellos Warmbloods
 
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These are a really great start and you really look like you're moving along splendidly in your art journey.

It seems like what you're stuggling with right now, which will really make a difference, is your pieces look rushed. I would suggest slowing down and not having a time frame in mind. Enjoy what you're doing.

I think i go back over my horses cutouts atleast 2 times. And if i notice a single pixel out of line, i go back again.

With manes and tails, i make sure to pull every strand, and do so with a small brush (3 pixels)
It takes FOREVER, but the result is a beautiful, lush, realistic mane / tail.

I think once you start focusing on crispness, you will really see a jump forward in your art. :)
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 05:03 PM

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Thank You All! <3

I slow down on my next piece and post it here! <3
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 07:06 PM

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Sorry! I forgot about this LOL

Here is one I just finished :D

https://s33.postimg.cc/ouf6340q7/HEE_AVATAR.jpg

Am I improving?
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 08:26 PM

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Another recent :)

https://s33.postimg.cc/d1hcyqjnz/Banner_HEE_Premade_Tobi.jpg
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 08:35 PM


Idle Lane Farms
 
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These ideas are all great, you're off to a great start :)

I'd have to agree with Jello though in that your pieces are rushed. Patience is key, never rush through a piece just to get it done. It will really increase your works quality.

Also try using a smaller brush for hair. They seem very stringy and thick at the moment. Pull out each strand on its own, and keep in mind the way natural manes and tails flow.

Lighting and shadows are also crucial. If the lighting of the horse and BG don't match, it's impossible to sell the realistic aspect of the piece. Make sure shadows are cast in the correct directions, especially on the horse, and that areas not in direct sunlight on the horse are darker.

Hope this helps! :)
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 09:15 PM

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Thank You! <3

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