Horse Eden : critique please

10:47:43 Willow ~ TB Breeder

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How's this?

10:46:58 Willow ~ TB Breeder

Ugh, I keep forgetting to do matches on this account

Bioshock Manor

10:46:06 Storm

how many do you have?

Bioshock Manor

10:45:41 Storm

Oh geez 😂

10:45:10 Terici/Dino/Trish

LOL half the time i forget my stable name and dont even ask me the numbers to my sides XD

Bioshock Manor

10:44:36 Storm

Trish <3 earlier I remembered MGF, but for the life of me couldn't remember your stable name lol

Backwood Barns

10:44:14 Charm's Wubs

Hi Trish <3

Backwood Barns

10:44:02 Charm's Wubs

Ehh, he's old so he doesn't swim just to swim, I guess. He's lazy and likes napping on his plants. He comes out to eat and will come visit me when I do my pilates on the floor to the side of his tank. He also gets curious when my cat walks by (Kiko couldn't care less) but mostly he stays in the plants.

Valhalla Acreage

10:42:22 Eivor

Is it just me or is the maps you get from exploring all over the place with the new update

Hummingbird Meadows

10:41:16 Bird

@Charm, that's so pretty! And he uses all that space?

10:41:11 Terici/Dino/Trish

charmie <3 Bio <3

Neverfade Manor

10:39:34 Storm

Oh that's pretty

Neverfade Manor

10:39:16 Storm

Hah nice..I have two SAs and my main. Thankfully have simplified them, working on the main though. Just seem to take on too much there

Rising Stars Stable

10:38:54 Willow ~ AA Breeder

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The one I'm terrified of

Backwood Barns

10:38:39 Charm's Wubs

-Click-

This is the closest to what it is right now, but it's a mess currently >.<

Backwood Barns

10:38:04 Charm's Wubs

Hahah this is my only SA I actively play.

Bioshock Manor

10:37:24 Storm

I keep forgetting you have this SA Charm

The Fallen Rulers

10:37:23 Storm|RID/SD Lord

She is nice willow

Backwood Barns

10:36:52 Charm's Wubs

I have a couple of old ones. Let me get them from my phone to my computer.

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10:52:15 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

I'm heading to bed, goodnight

10:47:43 Willow ~ TB Breeder

-HEE Click-
How's this?

10:46:58 Willow ~ TB Breeder

Ugh, I keep forgetting to do matches on this account

Bioshock Manor

10:46:06 Storm

how many do you have?

Bioshock Manor

10:45:41 Storm

Oh geez 😂

10:45:10 Terici/Dino/Trish

LOL half the time i forget my stable name and dont even ask me the numbers to my sides XD

Bioshock Manor

10:44:36 Storm

Trish <3 earlier I remembered MGF, but for the life of me couldn't remember your stable name lol

Backwood Barns

10:44:14 Charm's Wubs

Hi Trish <3

Backwood Barns

10:44:02 Charm's Wubs

Valhalla Acreage

10:42:22 Eivor

Is it just me or is the maps you get from exploring all over the place with the new update

Hummingbird Meadows

10:41:16 Bird

@Charm, that's so pretty! And he uses all that space?

10:41:11 Terici/Dino/Trish

charmie <3 Bio <3

Neverfade Manor

10:39:34 Storm

Oh that's pretty

Neverfade Manor

10:39:16 Storm

Hah nice..I have two SAs and my main. Thankfully have simplified them, working on the main though. Just seem to take on too much there

Rising Stars Stable

10:38:54 Willow ~ AA Breeder

-HEE Click-
The one I'm terrified of

Backwood Barns

10:38:39 Charm's Wubs

-Click-

This is the closest to what it is right now, but it's a mess currently >.<

Backwood Barns

10:38:04 Charm's Wubs

Hahah this is my only SA I actively play.

Bioshock Manor

10:37:24 Storm

I keep forgetting you have this SA Charm

The Fallen Rulers

10:37:23 Storm|RID/SD Lord

She is nice willow

Backwood Barns

10:36:52 Charm's Wubs

I have a couple of old ones. Let me get them from my phone to my computer.

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September 18, 2018 06:50 PM

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http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

looking for critique on this piece

I use gimp

improved version :

http://oi65.tinypic.com/1zzgvtd.jpg

Edited at September 23, 2018 01:12 PM by Scarlett Breeze Farm

September 20, 2018 11:45 AM

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still looking :)

September 23, 2018 09:58 AM

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I thought this piece was SUPER cute!

If anything it's a little bit bright where you have the light flare since it's on a light coated horse. Even though it's a tad bright, you did excellent on matching the lighting to the horse.

I think the horses eyes could have a bit more detail, and the forelock with more stray strands of hair.

Beautiful piece!

September 23, 2018 01:10 PM

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i made a better version, fetching link now :)

September 23, 2018 01:25 PM

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I love them both, but I'm not a fan on the sparkly, glowing, floating balls xP

On the second one, I'd lower the brightness and contrast on the horse just a tad. The mane looks very good, love the fly away hairs however the forelock looks spiked almost. I'd bring the hairs downwards more and give them slightly more movement. The back foot looks like it cuts away to suddenly as well. Other than that, fantastic work!!! :D

Edited at September 23, 2018 01:26 PM by Trinity Equine

September 23, 2018 02:34 PM