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07:05:57 Terici/Dino/Trish

lol im impatient to but im hoping she does as well as her siblings have in the past

Wolf Dancer

07:05:30 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Ells
Deathly >.>

Ellsworths Eden

07:04:50

-HEE Click-

Are PONs allergic to PATN? >:(

Angels angels

07:03:47 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Trish
I am impatient so I would yolo it but the smart thing to do is wait lol

07:02:44 Terici/Dino/Trish

-HEE Click- I dunno what to do with Smish, do i just yolo her first embryo at a top bou and hope... or do i wait for week 7/8

06:58:18 Chey / Star

Awesome! Thanks guys

Sunstone Elite

06:57:50 Sun/Sunny

Yes he can Chey

Dash and Duchess

06:57:40 DD | ~Squizard~

Sunny, oooo I saw him!! He's absolutely gorgeous especially with that ToTo 👀 fingers crossed he'll be a good boy and hit high!

Angels angels

06:57:36 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Chey
If you get extremely lucky lol
Apricot is ee prlprl

Greenheart Stables

06:57:27 Green|Gren|Grenlin

-HEE Click-
👀

Angels angels

06:57:04 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Oh are we showing off color shineys?
-HEE Click-

06:56:53 Chey / Star

Can this guy throw apricots? With thw right mares obviously
-HEE Click-

Dash and Duchess

06:56:34 DD | ~Squizard~

Sunny, thank you!! And yes we do lol! Also, I know I've probably said this, but Iduna's arts are *stunning* 🤩 I seriously need to get Petri dish over here some fancy arts xD

Sunstone Elite

06:55:54 Sun/Sunny

-HEE Click-
I did get this pretty sooty boy this year and I’m really hoping he won’t flop like his brother from that dam did <_> the dam is out of my girl Valhalla so it’d be so special to get a good ABLB boy from her.

Aura Show Horses

06:55:27 pea/ brindle buddie

cool sunny!

Sunstone Elite

06:54:13 Sun/Sunny

-HEE Click-
Yesss love those prl ToTo AA’s am I right ;)

Dash and Duchess

06:53:39 DD | ~Squizard~

Indi, XD at least you didn't hit the full white Sb 3 rerolls in a row 🥲

Indiana Peaches

06:53:05 Indi

I got really lucky and that only took 6 rerolls XD

Dash and Duchess

06:52:08 DD | ~Squizard~

Indi, thank you!!
(Here's a link to her lol! -HEE Click- )
And huge congrats on your lil lady! I love that sooty on her 🤩

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07:06:25

@wolf

It feels like it. :'(

07:05:57 Terici/Dino/Trish

lol im impatient to but im hoping she does as well as her siblings have in the past

Wolf Dancer

07:05:30 Wolf Burger (Leg)

Ells
Deathly >.>

Ellsworths Eden

07:04:50

-HEE Click-

Are PONs allergic to PATN? >:(

Angels angels

07:03:47 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Trish
I am impatient so I would yolo it but the smart thing to do is wait lol

07:02:44 Terici/Dino/Trish

-HEE Click- I dunno what to do with Smish, do i just yolo her first embryo at a top bou and hope... or do i wait for week 7/8

06:58:18 Chey / Star

Awesome! Thanks guys

Sunstone Elite

06:57:50 Sun/Sunny

Yes he can Chey

Dash and Duchess

06:57:40 DD | ~Squizard~

Sunny, oooo I saw him!! He's absolutely gorgeous especially with that ToTo 👀 fingers crossed he'll be a good boy and hit high!

Angels angels

06:57:36 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Chey
If you get extremely lucky lol
Apricot is ee prlprl

Greenheart Stables

06:57:27 Green|Gren|Grenlin

-HEE Click-
👀

Angels angels

06:57:04 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Oh are we showing off color shineys?
-HEE Click-

06:56:53 Chey / Star

Can this guy throw apricots? With thw right mares obviously
-HEE Click-

Dash and Duchess

06:56:34 DD | ~Squizard~

Sunny, thank you!! And yes we do lol! Also, I know I've probably said this, but Iduna's arts are *stunning* 🤩 I seriously need to get Petri dish over here some fancy arts xD

Sunstone Elite

06:55:54 Sun/Sunny

Aura Show Horses

06:55:27 pea/ brindle buddie

cool sunny!

Sunstone Elite

06:54:13 Sun/Sunny

-HEE Click-
Yesss love those prl ToTo AA’s am I right ;)

Dash and Duchess

06:53:39 DD | ~Squizard~

Indi, XD at least you didn't hit the full white Sb 3 rerolls in a row 🥲

Indiana Peaches

06:53:05 Indi

I got really lucky and that only took 6 rerolls XD

Dash and Duchess

06:52:08 DD | ~Squizard~

Indi, thank you!!
(Here's a link to her lol! -HEE Click- )
And huge congrats on your lil lady! I love that sooty on her 🤩

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

Former Stable

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

Wings Of Glory

Posts: 2670
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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

Casanova

Posts: 1522
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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites