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Hazardous Ranch

05:34:48 LF:Brindles/Chimeras

selling this year's foals. one is already rated.

-HEE Click-

Sunset River Arabian

05:27:26 AA Broods and Studs

Selling a whoile bunch of E and W horses!!
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

FirstLightFarms

05:26:47 puck

-HEE Click-

Shiny TB Mare clearout. Trying to downsize.

Cloverleaf Castle

05:26:11 KNN

-HEE Click-

Freshman Grullo - Lp ABLB boy!

Insignia Elites

05:02:37 Em

EWW SH Stud! WWW producer -HEE Click-

EWE RID Freshman!
-HEE Click-

04:58:45

EEW TB mare 40k obo
-HEE Click-

04:56:06 Jessie

Wild EEE premium bravery pony mare 15k
-HEE Click-

Insignia Elites

04:56:01 Em

Broods! SD and AD! EEE+ -HEE Click-

lass

04:46:16 Captain America

-HEE Click-
Shop items!

Some of the cheapest items for sale on HEE are located at my shop

04:44:30 I Buy Brindles!!!!!!

Several Horses for sale in my Sweet Horsi Barn...

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November 30, 2017 11:11 PM

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Well I tried to do my first horse image art piece and I'm not sure what to think? Any opinions?

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=14193968

December 1, 2017 12:24 AM

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Looks better than my first go, that's for sure.

My comment would be to make the hair more detailed - add individual strands and clumps. Perhaps focus on making the nose more distinguishable from the rest of the neck as it kinda meshes together.

Overall nicely done

December 1, 2017 12:27 AM

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Try blurring the BG too

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