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Minerva
04:44:54 Min
She's not met them before, but she's quite a large, loud woman and the baby pony hasn't seen anything quite like her yet lol.
Ponies heaven
04:26:04 Pera/ peral
@Min
Ah yea, does she often frighten your horses?
Nightfall Dressage
04:25:18 Witchy
Oh wow I've bred 223 foals
Minerva
04:25:09 Min
I just hope she doesnt frighten my 2yo right before I take him out for a walk 😅 Im being a bit unfair to her to be fair- the idea of her is usually worse than when she arrives. She's just "difficult"
Ponies heaven
04:17:56 Pera/ peral
@Min
I am good, thanks for asking! Oop, well I hope the horses make it tolerable!
Boulder Creek
04:14:59 
@ghost - if you're curious:
-HEE Click-
Minerva
04:09:57 Min
Good thank you! Although my horrible aunt is coming to stay for the night so she can meet the horses lol. How are you?
Nightingales Ridge
04:06:02 Issy
I need more than 200ebs to attempt that cheeky lad
Ponies heaven
04:05:55 Pera/ peral
@Min
How are you?
Kingswood Elite
04:05:14 ghost
I have been trying to clean Nigel for so long now I don't think I can even count how many times I've lost lol
Nightingales Ridge
04:04:21 Issy
Holaaa
Minerva
04:02:19 Min
Hi Pera!
Ponies heaven
04:00:26 Pera/ peral
Hello chat!
Minerva
03:57:39 Min
Yeah I skip those *immediately* haha
Bioshock Manor
03:43:26 Storm
Yeah no
Boulder Creek
03:41:26 
I just got that one too, first place five times for 8,000 ebs.
#notworthit
Bioshock Manor
03:39:41 Storm
No worries
Bioshock Manor
03:39:34 Storm
Hah same. Definitely not doing it. Too much work
Nightingales Ridge
03:39:22 Issy
Thanks Storm
Nightingales Ridge
03:39:13 Issy
Ah okay. I got a quest for it...I don't think its a goer for me haha

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Minerva
04:44:54 Min
She's not met them before, but she's quite a large, loud woman and the baby pony hasn't seen anything quite like her yet lol.
Ponies heaven
04:26:04 Pera/ peral
@Min
Ah yea, does she often frighten your horses?
Nightfall Dressage
04:25:18 Witchy
Oh wow I've bred 223 foals
Minerva
04:25:09 Min
I just hope she doesnt frighten my 2yo right before I take him out for a walk 😅 Im being a bit unfair to her to be fair- the idea of her is usually worse than when she arrives. She's just "difficult"
Ponies heaven
04:17:56 Pera/ peral
@Min
I am good, thanks for asking! Oop, well I hope the horses make it tolerable!
Boulder Creek
04:14:59 
@ghost - if you're curious:
-HEE Click-
Minerva
04:09:57 Min
Good thank you! Although my horrible aunt is coming to stay for the night so she can meet the horses lol. How are you?
Nightingales Ridge
04:06:02 Issy
I need more than 200ebs to attempt that cheeky lad
Ponies heaven
04:05:55 Pera/ peral
@Min
How are you?
Kingswood Elite
04:05:14 ghost
I have been trying to clean Nigel for so long now I don't think I can even count how many times I've lost lol
Nightingales Ridge
04:04:21 Issy
Holaaa
Minerva
04:02:19 Min
Hi Pera!
Ponies heaven
04:00:26 Pera/ peral
Hello chat!
Minerva
03:57:39 Min
Yeah I skip those *immediately* haha
Bioshock Manor
03:43:26 Storm
Yeah no
Boulder Creek
03:41:26 
I just got that one too, first place five times for 8,000 ebs.
#notworthit
Bioshock Manor
03:39:41 Storm
No worries
Bioshock Manor
03:39:34 Storm
Hah same. Definitely not doing it. Too much work
Nightingales Ridge
03:39:22 Issy
Thanks Storm
Nightingales Ridge
03:39:13 Issy
Ah okay. I got a quest for it...I don't think its a goer for me haha

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I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 11:07 AM

Former Stable
 
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LOL
But I want to get better and I could use some help.
So....Criticize Me Please! <3
XD

Recent Examples:

(First Appy)
https://s33.postimg.cc/gkhm39qu7/Horse_HEEOrder.jpg


https://s33.postimg.cc/ppldj8ryn/Horse_Liver-_Premade-4.jpg

Click For Quality On both! <3

Edited at September 8, 2018 11:09 AM by Lazy Duck Elites
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 11:46 AM


WildWillow
 
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What cute art ideas!

First of all, smudge in small circles. It looks like the coats of your horse are pulled down. Also,it looks as though you need to take more time cutting out the horse. The first horse still has some of the original background around the leg and the last horse looks like the cut out was rushed. Take your time and focus. Hard work pays off!

Also, try to blend the hooves into the ground on the first image. In the second image, the horse is missing it's back hooves! Try redrawing the hooves. There are many great tutorials on DeviantArt for redrawing hooves.

Another thing I thought I'd mention is that the top horse looks blue toned and the background is red toned. Try to color in some red and orange highlights on the horse to help it seem although it is actually in the background. The second image looks foggy in the background which means it probably isn't sunny out which contradicts the highlighting on your horse. Try to make the horse look as though it is actually in the fog as well.

The manes and tail look quite stiff as well. Mess around with some different blending options to make the mane and tail flow rather than be rigid. Making the eyes pop would also bring a nice touch to the art.

Other than that, it looks like your on the right track! :)
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 04:41 PM

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Lighting is key!!! and instead of blending the whole body just blend the face and the legs, and if you add white highlights it will make the horse pop.
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 05:02 PM


Jellos Warmbloods
 
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These are a really great start and you really look like you're moving along splendidly in your art journey.

It seems like what you're stuggling with right now, which will really make a difference, is your pieces look rushed. I would suggest slowing down and not having a time frame in mind. Enjoy what you're doing.

I think i go back over my horses cutouts atleast 2 times. And if i notice a single pixel out of line, i go back again.

With manes and tails, i make sure to pull every strand, and do so with a small brush (3 pixels)
It takes FOREVER, but the result is a beautiful, lush, realistic mane / tail.

I think once you start focusing on crispness, you will really see a jump forward in your art. :)
I Need Criticism September 8, 2018 05:03 PM

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Thank You All! <3

I slow down on my next piece and post it here! <3
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 07:06 PM

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Sorry! I forgot about this LOL

Here is one I just finished :D

https://s33.postimg.cc/ouf6340q7/HEE_AVATAR.jpg

Am I improving?
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 08:26 PM

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Another recent :)

https://s33.postimg.cc/d1hcyqjnz/Banner_HEE_Premade_Tobi.jpg
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 08:35 PM


Idle Lane Farms
 
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These ideas are all great, you're off to a great start :)

I'd have to agree with Jello though in that your pieces are rushed. Patience is key, never rush through a piece just to get it done. It will really increase your works quality.

Also try using a smaller brush for hair. They seem very stringy and thick at the moment. Pull out each strand on its own, and keep in mind the way natural manes and tails flow.

Lighting and shadows are also crucial. If the lighting of the horse and BG don't match, it's impossible to sell the realistic aspect of the piece. Make sure shadows are cast in the correct directions, especially on the horse, and that areas not in direct sunlight on the horse are darker.

Hope this helps! :)
I Need Criticism September 15, 2018 09:15 PM

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Thank You! <3

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