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Port Royal Equines
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Proven Seal Brown ABLB WWW Sire.

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Proven Silver Grullo LB WWW Sire.

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Proven Grullo WWW Sire.


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EEE+ Broodmares at 4k. Bravery mares included! Some are W producers.
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Alpine Acres
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Wild 1 of 3 grey WWW AA Mares Auction
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Shiny PEE SH Filly 1/10 5k

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PPP Knab mare unbred
smoky grulla roan

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SPP silber buckskin splash

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PPP Irish sport horse colt

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Port Royal Equines
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Proven Seal Brown ABLB WWW Sire.

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Proven Silver Grullo LB WWW Sire.

-HEE Click-
Proven Grullo WWW Sire.


-HEE Click-
EEE+ Broodmares at 4k. Bravery mares included! Some are W producers.
~.Oblivion.Arabs.~
12:37:09 Obi
130k ebs ready for an upgrade. 1month is fine
Alpine Acres
12:32:15 Lily/Alpine
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remember that you may only post your ad once until it drops off the bottom of the chat :)
Eagle Creek
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Wild 1 of 3 grey WWW AA Mares Auction
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Exo-M
12:18:19 EM
Shiny PEE SH Filly 1/10 5k

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ALOUTROYALEQUINE
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PPP Knab mare unbred
smoky grulla roan

-HEE Click-
ALOUTROYALEQUINE
12:10:40 
SPP silber buckskin splash

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ALOUTROYALEQUINE
12:08:44 
PPP Irish sport horse colt

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SSS sport horse colt

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Rumble Art Critique August 4, 2025 03:03 PM


ShiningStar Stables
 
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First off, I was The Mothman in this year's Artist Rumble.

I am not going to be selling my art pieces from the competition because I don't really like them, and I don't feel like I did a great job with them, so I don't really feel like they are worth anything at this point.
Since I don't feel great about them, I would love some advice and critique on the pieces I did to hopefully better myself as an artist!
The art(some of them, mainly Round 2, are massive images so please open them in a new tab to full see them):
Preliminary Round:
Round 1:
Round 2:
Round 3:

Edited at August 4, 2025 03:50 PM by ShiningStar Stables
Rumble Art Critique August 4, 2025 10:20 PM


Gem
 
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Based on the pieces here, I think your biggest next step is to decide what your style looks like. Across those four, they all display various styles with Round 1 and 2 being very similar to each other but completely different from prelim and 3. Once you decide which style you want to embrace, that'll make it much easier to give general feedback because right now, you don't have a set style to give general feedback on haha.
The one thing that is consistent across 1, 2, and 3 is your mane style. I really like what you're doing with the various shades and they're giving you some great depth. I also like that you've got some swoop going on. However, I'd like to see more defined chunks of hair that flow differently or curve/twist/turn as opposed to all of the hair going in the same general direction.
Overall, I think you have incredibly creative ideas and I'm excited to see where you go from here!! <3

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