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Glacier Bay Cove

11:15:57 Arctic Katz

I love it, Willow

Sweet Valley

11:15:46 Anna/Jewel

Pretty horse.

EEE is all I got this RO lol

Sleepwalker Centre

11:15:34 Walker

I'm sooo ready to be done with chemistry courses, just biochem left after this

Two Trees Stables

11:15:06 Willow ~ TB Breeder

-HEE Click-
I can't tell weather I love it or hate it

Sleepwalker Centre

11:15:06 Walker

Angel,
ahh! I took/am taking two accelerated courses and one regular session. I already finished one of the accelerated ones but now I'm working on finishing up the other two in the next week and a half ish

Angels angels

11:13:38 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Willow
the 19th

Walker
I took one summer class but it ended a week or so ago

Sport Pony Island

11:13:28 Solstice × Win

Good luck, Ivy

Sleepwalker Centre

11:13:07 Walker

Bye Ivy!

Two Trees Stables

11:13:00 Willow ~ TB Breeder

bye Ivy

Angels angels

11:12:56 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Yeah I agree on the goats being better lol sheep require more maintenance with sheering and such and they can get skin infections and lice a lot easier with their wool

Sleepwalker Centre

11:12:56 Walker

Angel,
Haha I wish I was bored!! I've been taking summer classes for college and I attended a conference to present a research poster

Sport Pony Island

11:12:16 Solstice × Win

Willow

haha- that is so sad..

Crestwood Eq.

11:12:16 Ivy / poison ivy

i have to go for now!

Two Trees Stables

11:12:13 Willow ~ TB Breeder

Angel
When do you start? I go back on the 14th for my Thursday classes

Angels angels

11:11:54 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Willow
That pearl WB is amazing!

Two Trees Stables

11:11:21 Willow ~ TB Breeder

Glacier
Goats 100,000,000%
Sheep are so dumb! My friend had one and it drowned but sticking its head into a water bucket

Sport Pony Island

11:10:31 Solstice × Win

Willow, i own 2 horses, and i know what means when an animal causes you stress...

Two Trees Stables

11:10:26 Willow ~ TB Breeder

-HEE Click-
Not bad for my first month of TBs

Crestwood Eq.

11:10:19 Ivy / poison ivy

WIn

<33

Angels angels

11:10:14 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I can't wait for the fall semester to start .-. I am so bored

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Glacier Bay Cove

11:15:57 Arctic Katz

I love it, Willow

Sweet Valley

11:15:46 Anna/Jewel

Pretty horse.

EEE is all I got this RO lol

Sleepwalker Centre

11:15:34 Walker

I'm sooo ready to be done with chemistry courses, just biochem left after this

Two Trees Stables

11:15:06 Willow ~ TB Breeder

-HEE Click-
I can't tell weather I love it or hate it

Sleepwalker Centre

11:15:06 Walker

Angels angels

11:13:38 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Willow
the 19th

Walker
I took one summer class but it ended a week or so ago

Sport Pony Island

11:13:28 Solstice × Win

Good luck, Ivy

Sleepwalker Centre

11:13:07 Walker

Bye Ivy!

Two Trees Stables

11:13:00 Willow ~ TB Breeder

bye Ivy

Angels angels

11:12:56 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Yeah I agree on the goats being better lol sheep require more maintenance with sheering and such and they can get skin infections and lice a lot easier with their wool

Sleepwalker Centre

11:12:56 Walker

Angel,
Haha I wish I was bored!! I've been taking summer classes for college and I attended a conference to present a research poster

Sport Pony Island

11:12:16 Solstice × Win

Willow

haha- that is so sad..

Crestwood Eq.

11:12:16 Ivy / poison ivy

i have to go for now!

Two Trees Stables

11:12:13 Willow ~ TB Breeder

Angel
When do you start? I go back on the 14th for my Thursday classes

Angels angels

11:11:54 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Willow
That pearl WB is amazing!

Two Trees Stables

11:11:21 Willow ~ TB Breeder

Glacier
Goats 100,000,000%
Sheep are so dumb! My friend had one and it drowned but sticking its head into a water bucket

Sport Pony Island

11:10:31 Solstice × Win

Willow, i own 2 horses, and i know what means when an animal causes you stress...

Two Trees Stables

11:10:26 Willow ~ TB Breeder

-HEE Click-
Not bad for my first month of TBs

Crestwood Eq.

11:10:19 Ivy / poison ivy

WIn

<33

Angels angels

11:10:14 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I can't wait for the fall semester to start .-. I am so bored

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

Former Stable

Posts: 0
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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

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January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

Wings Of Glory

Posts: 2670
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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

Casanova

Posts: 1522
#106696
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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

Former Stable

Posts: 0
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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! Im just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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