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Niallator Acres
10:05:54 Ivy - Niallator side
AL

thanks.
ghost light stables
10:00:56 moldy bread / ghost
-Click-

I tried to take a cute picture of my dog...
Motonemi
09:57:22 AL, mum to Nemi
Ivy, as long as you follow chat rules, is polite to people and dont behave like a jerk towards people, I am pretty sure most people in chat will find you likeable
Crestwood Eq.
09:57:17 Ivy / poison ivy
I have to go for a little bit but ill be back
Crestwood Eq.
09:56:53 Ivy / poison ivy
If im not already of course
Crestwood Eq.
09:56:47 Ivy / poison ivy
Arctic

I’ll be your online friend
Glacier Bay Cove
09:56:31 Arctic Katz
I can kind of understand that, I don't have any real life friends either
Crestwood Eq.
09:55:55 Ivy / poison ivy
Told*
Crestwood Eq.
09:55:51 Ivy / poison ivy
Witchy

I mean i was rold that by someone
Crestwood Eq.
09:55:22 Ivy / poison ivy
Void

Makes sense. Im always trying to make friends. In real life, not many people accept me
SandWitch Arabians
09:54:53 Witchypoo
Ivy - do YOU think you act in a mature way ?
We all have our childish moments, most don't make a habit of it however.
The Old Gods
09:52:21 Void Malign
...Honestly, you come across as attention seeking.
Glacier Bay Cove
09:51:42 Arctic Katz
I don't think you do
Crestwood Eq.
09:51:23 Ivy / poison ivy
But i mean as in like how i act in chat. Like do i beg? Do i act desperate
Glacier Bay Cove
09:49:57 Arctic Katz
Crestwood, I agree with what Witchy says
Silver Melody Acres
09:49:51 Solar - KNNs
Let's not get into something like that
SandWitch Arabians
09:49:05 Witchypoo
I don't think any of us, who only know you as a name on a screen, are qualified to truly answer that.
Crestwood Eq.
09:45:29 Ivy / poison ivy
What are my worst qualities.

Please be completely honest. I will not be mad at you
SandWitch Arabians
09:45:26 Witchypoo
Glacier - oh you're so lucky
Glacier Bay Cove
09:44:13 Arctic Katz
Dang, I just captured this gorgeous filly. -HEE Click-

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Niallator Acres
10:05:54 Ivy - Niallator side
AL

thanks.
ghost light stables
10:00:56 moldy bread / ghost
-Click-

I tried to take a cute picture of my dog...
Motonemi
09:57:22 AL, mum to Nemi
Ivy, as long as you follow chat rules, is polite to people and dont behave like a jerk towards people, I am pretty sure most people in chat will find you likeable
Crestwood Eq.
09:57:17 Ivy / poison ivy
I have to go for a little bit but ill be back
Crestwood Eq.
09:56:53 Ivy / poison ivy
If im not already of course
Crestwood Eq.
09:56:47 Ivy / poison ivy
Arctic

I’ll be your online friend
Glacier Bay Cove
09:56:31 Arctic Katz
I can kind of understand that, I don't have any real life friends either
Crestwood Eq.
09:55:55 Ivy / poison ivy
Told*
Crestwood Eq.
09:55:51 Ivy / poison ivy
Witchy

I mean i was rold that by someone
Crestwood Eq.
09:55:22 Ivy / poison ivy
Void

Makes sense. Im always trying to make friends. In real life, not many people accept me
SandWitch Arabians
09:54:53 Witchypoo
Ivy - do YOU think you act in a mature way ?
We all have our childish moments, most don't make a habit of it however.
The Old Gods
09:52:21 Void Malign
...Honestly, you come across as attention seeking.
Glacier Bay Cove
09:51:42 Arctic Katz
I don't think you do
Crestwood Eq.
09:51:23 Ivy / poison ivy
But i mean as in like how i act in chat. Like do i beg? Do i act desperate
Glacier Bay Cove
09:49:57 Arctic Katz
Crestwood, I agree with what Witchy says
Silver Melody Acres
09:49:51 Solar - KNNs
Let's not get into something like that
SandWitch Arabians
09:49:05 Witchypoo
I don't think any of us, who only know you as a name on a screen, are qualified to truly answer that.
Crestwood Eq.
09:45:29 Ivy / poison ivy
What are my worst qualities.

Please be completely honest. I will not be mad at you
SandWitch Arabians
09:45:26 Witchypoo
Glacier - oh you're so lucky
Glacier Bay Cove
09:44:13 Arctic Katz
Dang, I just captured this gorgeous filly. -HEE Click-

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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