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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Year: 193 Season: Fall

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Dash and Duchess

06:22:43 DD | ~Squizard~

Sunny, He totally deserves them! And fingers crossed for you, He's so shiny!

06:21:27 Sun/Sunny

Thank you! He will most definitely be getting arts. Really hope he’s strong I’ve been doing WB’s for so long Dx

06:13:55

very pretty Sunny!!

Insignia Elites

06:13:40 Em

I cannot find a TB without Sabino that matches my girl well xD

Dash and Duchess

06:13:21 DD | ~Squizard~

Oh he's gorgeous Sunny >.>

06:10:57 Eagle

Ooo thats exciting Angel I'm eager to see what she throws lol

06:10:23 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Eagle
I have th gnome

06:10:13 Sun/Sunny

-HEE Click- I love the tobi on this dude

06:09:32 Eagle

Angel lol

06:06:11 [1k+ brindles] Angel

How do I make a sacrifice to the HEE gods to make this embryo go good tomorrow? XD

06:00:43 evebot

Wow! Beautiful!

05:57:56 Fawn

Getting some stunning foals <3

-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

05:55:29 Sting

it could be called Black Bay.
Make all the mahoganys look a little nicer.

05:54:14 Sting

I dont think its in game...But i'd love to see a really Dark Bay.
Like almost Black with the mealy points.

Insignia Elites

05:52:39 Em

what other colours/coats are harder to get that isn't random

05:49:21 [1k+ brindles] Angel

It just has to be ee and have one a the other a can be a or A

Insignia Elites

05:48:39 Em

and another one is ee aa

Insignia Elites

05:48:11 Em

The one I just check was ee Aa

05:47:23 Sting

its eeaa right?

Insignia Elites

05:46:41 Em

Whats the genetics for it again?

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Dash and Duchess

06:22:43 DD | ~Squizard~

Sunny, He totally deserves them! And fingers crossed for you, He's so shiny!

06:21:27 Sun/Sunny

Thank you! He will most definitely be getting arts. Really hope he’s strong I’ve been doing WB’s for so long Dx

06:13:55

very pretty Sunny!!

Insignia Elites

06:13:40 Em

I cannot find a TB without Sabino that matches my girl well xD

Dash and Duchess

06:13:21 DD | ~Squizard~

Oh he's gorgeous Sunny >.>

06:10:57 Eagle

Ooo thats exciting Angel I'm eager to see what she throws lol

06:10:23 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Eagle
I have th gnome

06:10:13 Sun/Sunny

-HEE Click- I love the tobi on this dude

06:09:32 Eagle

Angel lol

06:06:11 [1k+ brindles] Angel

How do I make a sacrifice to the HEE gods to make this embryo go good tomorrow? XD

06:00:43 evebot

Wow! Beautiful!

05:57:56 Fawn

Getting some stunning foals <3

-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

05:55:29 Sting

it could be called Black Bay.
Make all the mahoganys look a little nicer.

05:54:14 Sting

I dont think its in game...But i'd love to see a really Dark Bay.
Like almost Black with the mealy points.

Insignia Elites

05:52:39 Em

what other colours/coats are harder to get that isn't random

05:49:21 [1k+ brindles] Angel

It just has to be ee and have one a the other a can be a or A

Insignia Elites

05:48:39 Em

and another one is ee aa

Insignia Elites

05:48:11 Em

The one I just check was ee Aa

05:47:23 Sting

its eeaa right?

Insignia Elites

05:46:41 Em

Whats the genetics for it again?

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September 16, 2018 06:56 PM

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Hello all! I am looking for critique I

(And help on making my art better). Don't be scared to tell me if it's horrible, I can handle it.

Will update if I finish more pieces

First piece:

https://i.postimg.cc/CxH3Z298/Untitled18-3.jpg

Second Piece:

https://i.postimg.cc/nhvdRQkf/Untitled19.jpg

Edited at September 16, 2018 07:51 PM by Ifaga Arabians

September 16, 2018 06:58 PM

Andraste Equine

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The piece is only 100x100 px. You can't see anything really

September 16, 2018 07:07 PM

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Andraste Equine said:
The piece is only 100x100 px. You can't see anything really

Fixed

September 16, 2018 07:22 PM

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I think this is a great start!

It's not sloppy or hard to look at.

I think the main thing I see that needs work is shading and highlights!

great job!

September 16, 2018 07:23 PM

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Sunset Equestrian said:
I think this is a great start!
It's not sloppy or hard to look at.
I think the main thing I see that needs work is shading and highlights!
great job!

Thank you! I've been working on shading and highlights. This piece required it

Edited at September 16, 2018 07:25 PM by Ifaga Arabians

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