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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

Year: 192 Season: Winter

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gone with the wind

11:39:11

-HEE Click- he seems to have the best training out of my stud colt prospects.

11:38:10 Lily

Thank you Eve, got it!

11:37:38 evebot

Lily, it's in the barn/pasture Explore view.

gone with the wind

11:36:36

😅 sorry, im more partial to red duns. grullos are pretty too but i like my red duns and roans

11:35:18 evebot

And he's not ugly. Can you imagine owning a horse that pretty irl.

11:34:09 Lily

how do you change your explore settings so that only certain horses show up on the list?

11:34:08 evebot

He will be a good show gelding.

gone with the wind

11:34:04

alrighty, show gelding it is, hes ugly anyway XD

11:33:13 Rapcoon | Jester

nah his training is average

gone with the wind

11:32:40

unless you can help with seeing if his training is good enough that i can undo it, i dont want opinions please

gone with the wind

11:31:41

he was put up for sale as a stallion. i gelded him after the fact, and i was going to take him down to use as a show gelding.

11:29:07

Also 15k for one W rating gelding is a scam, but each it needs to be in sales chat

gone with the wind

11:28:29

oops forgot he was for sale

Dash and Duchess

11:27:57 DD | ~Squizard~

Gone, you can't link sale horses in chat :)

gone with the wind

11:25:29

-HEE Click- is his training good or bad? i need to justify gelding him before i cant undo it

11:11:52 Rapcoon | Jester

oh no :( hopefully these ones'll be okay ^^;

11:03:14 Crowley

Flea
Lol we lost the first clutch of eggs so he go tied up there

11:01:43 Rapcoon | Jester

mythy
aww, good boy! Dixie's been on the same job actually xD

11:01:12 Crowley

Flea
Right now he is guarding newly hatched chicks!

Red Horizon Ranch

11:00:17 Red

Oh that looks really nice Glacier

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gone with the wind

11:39:11

-HEE Click- he seems to have the best training out of my stud colt prospects.

11:38:10 Lily

Thank you Eve, got it!

11:37:38 evebot

Lily, it's in the barn/pasture Explore view.

gone with the wind

11:36:36

😅 sorry, im more partial to red duns. grullos are pretty too but i like my red duns and roans

11:35:18 evebot

And he's not ugly. Can you imagine owning a horse that pretty irl.

11:34:09 Lily

how do you change your explore settings so that only certain horses show up on the list?

11:34:08 evebot

He will be a good show gelding.

gone with the wind

11:34:04

alrighty, show gelding it is, hes ugly anyway XD

11:33:13 Rapcoon | Jester

nah his training is average

gone with the wind

11:32:40

unless you can help with seeing if his training is good enough that i can undo it, i dont want opinions please

gone with the wind

11:31:41

he was put up for sale as a stallion. i gelded him after the fact, and i was going to take him down to use as a show gelding.

11:29:07

Also 15k for one W rating gelding is a scam, but each it needs to be in sales chat

gone with the wind

11:28:29

oops forgot he was for sale

Dash and Duchess

11:27:57 DD | ~Squizard~

Gone, you can't link sale horses in chat :)

gone with the wind

11:25:29

-HEE Click- is his training good or bad? i need to justify gelding him before i cant undo it

11:11:52 Rapcoon | Jester

oh no :( hopefully these ones'll be okay ^^;

11:03:14 Crowley

Flea
Lol we lost the first clutch of eggs so he go tied up there

11:01:43 Rapcoon | Jester

mythy
aww, good boy! Dixie's been on the same job actually xD

11:01:12 Crowley

Flea
Right now he is guarding newly hatched chicks!

Red Horizon Ranch

11:00:17 Red

Oh that looks really nice Glacier

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March 11, 2018 09:35 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/ejyrTS/Untitled.png

So this is my most recent image. I played with it for an hour or two, and besides the eyes, I am rather happy with it.

However, this is only my 5th or 6th piece, so I know there must be room for improvement. I am looking for suggestions to improve my style of art, as well as comments on the piece as a whole.

Please, constructive, reasonable suggestions only. I am still very new to the art world :P

March 11, 2018 10:57 PM

Hallucination Manor

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I would make the feet look more grounded in the grass if you want examples of what I mean you can PM me :D

March 11, 2018 11:10 PM

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I can see what you mean there. Adding some grass to the hooves would've helped.

March 11, 2018 11:14 PM

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Looove it. :D My advice would be using the eraser tool to clean up the lines on the legs! Also smudging the tail in the direction the hair would be going or creating individual strands (tedious though)

It looks amazing, what a great start. <3

March 11, 2018 11:36 PM

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I agree, the legs were looking a bit messy the more I looked at it. I attempted to draw individual strands, I just think the smudging went weird. Maybe I should go on more than one layer? I just find then it's tedious to smudge :P

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