Horse Eden : Constructive Criticism

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Blue Diamond

11:00:50 Bluey

Oh lol. Then perlino or dapple grey?

Montana

11:00:27 Tana, Kae 2.0

Or maybe like one of the double-dilute coats?

Lilac Fields

10:59:52 Lillie

lol sorry I forgot to add that part

Blue Diamond

10:59:41 Bluey

black chestnut or liver chestnut

Lilac Fields

10:59:36 Lillie

other than black/bay**

Montana

10:59:30 Tana, Kae 2.0

Black?

Lilac Fields

10:59:08 Lillie

Can I get a coat color that pairs well with red/orange?

Montana

10:58:09 Tana, Kae 2.0

First the EEE apricot capture with no map and then this?? My luck has been crazy lately..
-HEE Click-

Watercolored

10:57:29 WC

Is it possible to get in the money on the paddleboard game on a phone?

Blue Diamond

10:56:41 Bluey

Lillie
My condolences...

Willow Ridge

10:49:23 Lillie Pt 3

-HEE Click-
Im just gonna go ahead and log off because what is this🥲
(there goes 400k)

Hummingbird Meadows

10:48:41 Bird

@Glacier, how is that going?

Golden Crest

10:47:44 | Eve

One re roll and got my favourite grey coat -HEE Click- <3

Glacier Bay Cove

10:22:00 Arctic Katz

Currently working on getting Lily used to her new asthma inhaler

Fire_Rescue

10:18:29

okay so idk if this is ok or not but one of the horses named Fancy a paint horse, died on sunday this week and i found out today while I was at culvers.

Glacier Bay Cove

10:07:14 Arctic Katz

I sent you a pm, Angels

Angels angels

09:43:24 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Eyrie
Thank you <3 I will shoot her a pm

Eyrie of the Stars

09:42:20 Eyrie

Angel Mirage actually looks like a nice match for that girl. I'd pm Boggy and see if she'd lower his requirements.

Angels angels

09:42:19 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I am just one of those people that don't do technology lol so I guess it's that

Morning Glory Farms

09:39:53 Terici/Dino/Trish

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Blue Diamond

11:00:50 Bluey

Oh lol. Then perlino or dapple grey?

Montana

11:00:27 Tana, Kae 2.0

Or maybe like one of the double-dilute coats?

Lilac Fields

10:59:52 Lillie

lol sorry I forgot to add that part

Blue Diamond

10:59:41 Bluey

black chestnut or liver chestnut

Lilac Fields

10:59:36 Lillie

other than black/bay**

Montana

10:59:30 Tana, Kae 2.0

Black?

Lilac Fields

10:59:08 Lillie

Can I get a coat color that pairs well with red/orange?

Montana

10:58:09 Tana, Kae 2.0

First the EEE apricot capture with no map and then this?? My luck has been crazy lately..
-HEE Click-

Watercolored

10:57:29 WC

Is it possible to get in the money on the paddleboard game on a phone?

Blue Diamond

10:56:41 Bluey

Lillie
My condolences...

Willow Ridge

10:49:23 Lillie Pt 3

-HEE Click-
Im just gonna go ahead and log off because what is this🥲
(there goes 400k)

Hummingbird Meadows

10:48:41 Bird

@Glacier, how is that going?

Golden Crest

10:47:44 | Eve

One re roll and got my favourite grey coat -HEE Click- <3

Glacier Bay Cove

10:22:00 Arctic Katz

Currently working on getting Lily used to her new asthma inhaler

Fire_Rescue

10:18:29

okay so idk if this is ok or not but one of the horses named Fancy a paint horse, died on sunday this week and i found out today while I was at culvers.

Glacier Bay Cove

10:07:14 Arctic Katz

I sent you a pm, Angels

Angels angels

09:43:24 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Eyrie
Thank you <3 I will shoot her a pm

Eyrie of the Stars

09:42:20 Eyrie

Angel Mirage actually looks like a nice match for that girl. I'd pm Boggy and see if she'd lower his requirements.

Angels angels

09:42:19 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I am just one of those people that don't do technology lol so I guess it's that

Morning Glory Farms

09:39:53 Terici/Dino/Trish

Love my Alexa it controls my AC my lights everything

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

Former Stable

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

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January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

Wings Of Glory

Posts: 2670
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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

Casanova

Posts: 1522
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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

Former Stable

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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! Im just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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