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FirstLightFarms
07:18:49 puck
my everyday outfit consists of crocs and i'll ride or die for them
Angels angels
07:18:46 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Em
At a western dressing store, online, or they have specific stores that are just warehouses of cowboy boots lol atleast they do around here
Insignia Elites
07:18:39 Em
My go to is the Birkenstocks xD
MakeEm Fancy
07:18:29 Ally 💜
Thats what I wear lol @Angels
Angels angels
07:17:50 [1k+ brindles] Angel
For my everyday outfits of leggings and a baggy tshirt I just wear my normal tennis shoes. They are neon rainbow lol
Sunset Hills Ranch
07:17:39 Sunset(Also Pine+Oak
Puck,
I mine are brown and blue. But when I wear them outside of horses I have jeans over them all the time
Insignia Elites
07:16:58 Em
I always wanted a pair of real cowboy boots but Im not sure where to get them xD
FirstLightFarms
07:16:27 puck
Oop. I have a rounded toe pair for the two times a year I go western. Theyre bright teal though so kinda hard to match into cute outfits for outside of horses 😂
Mythological
07:14:41 Crowley
Lynx!
How goes Minecraft?
Angels angels
07:14:35 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I have a pair I was given by someone but they aren't real cowboy boots. They have the rounded front like normal shoes and they don't fit well. I just wear them fishing and when it rains and such lol
Sunset Hills Ranch
07:14:30 Sunset(Also Pine+Oak
I just wore mine yesterday at fair.

Void,
I use mine just because its easier than crocs on some of the horses
MakeEm Fancy
07:13:31 Ally 💜
They literally have been collecting dust for years 🤣
The Old Gods
07:12:00 Void Malign
Don't care for cowboy boots. Zero ankle support
MakeEm Fancy
07:11:19 Ally 💜
I take that back I do have a pair but they dont fit 😅
Lynx Glory
07:11:17 ⛈ whisper/lynx
myth!
Glacier Bay Cove
07:11:14 Arctic Katz
Nope
Angels angels
07:10:20 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I have never even owned proper cowboy boots lol they don't look good on me
Sunset Hills Ranch
07:09:41 Sunset(Also Pine+Oak
Ally,
I just have cowboy boots lol
Sunset Hills Ranch
07:09:18 Sunset(Also Pine+Oak
Glacier,
You don't remember the last tike you were cowboy boots?!
MakeEm Fancy
07:08:28 Ally 💜
I just have boots that go up to my knees. @Angels

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FirstLightFarms
07:18:49 puck
my everyday outfit consists of crocs and i'll ride or die for them
Angels angels
07:18:46 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Em
At a western dressing store, online, or they have specific stores that are just warehouses of cowboy boots lol atleast they do around here
Insignia Elites
07:18:39 Em
My go to is the Birkenstocks xD
MakeEm Fancy
07:18:29 Ally 💜
Thats what I wear lol @Angels
Angels angels
07:17:50 [1k+ brindles] Angel
For my everyday outfits of leggings and a baggy tshirt I just wear my normal tennis shoes. They are neon rainbow lol
Sunset Hills Ranch
07:17:39 Sunset(Also Pine+Oak
Puck,
I mine are brown and blue. But when I wear them outside of horses I have jeans over them all the time
Insignia Elites
07:16:58 Em
I always wanted a pair of real cowboy boots but Im not sure where to get them xD
FirstLightFarms
07:16:27 puck
Oop. I have a rounded toe pair for the two times a year I go western. Theyre bright teal though so kinda hard to match into cute outfits for outside of horses 😂
Mythological
07:14:41 Crowley
Lynx!
How goes Minecraft?
Angels angels
07:14:35 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I have a pair I was given by someone but they aren't real cowboy boots. They have the rounded front like normal shoes and they don't fit well. I just wear them fishing and when it rains and such lol
Sunset Hills Ranch
07:14:30 Sunset(Also Pine+Oak
I just wore mine yesterday at fair.

Void,
I use mine just because its easier than crocs on some of the horses
MakeEm Fancy
07:13:31 Ally 💜
They literally have been collecting dust for years 🤣
The Old Gods
07:12:00 Void Malign
Don't care for cowboy boots. Zero ankle support
MakeEm Fancy
07:11:19 Ally 💜
I take that back I do have a pair but they dont fit 😅
Lynx Glory
07:11:17 ⛈ whisper/lynx
myth!
Glacier Bay Cove
07:11:14 Arctic Katz
Nope
Angels angels
07:10:20 [1k+ brindles] Angel
I have never even owned proper cowboy boots lol they don't look good on me
Sunset Hills Ranch
07:09:41 Sunset(Also Pine+Oak
Ally,
I just have cowboy boots lol
Sunset Hills Ranch
07:09:18 Sunset(Also Pine+Oak
Glacier,
You don't remember the last tike you were cowboy boots?!
MakeEm Fancy
07:08:28 Ally 💜
I just have boots that go up to my knees. @Angels

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Constructive Criticism January 4, 2018 09:09 AM

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I've been doing digital art for some time now (mainly on my main account) and would like some constructive criticism of my art and how I could improve, etc.

For now I would like your thoughts on this guy's art: https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15106169
It is my most recent piece and personally I think I could change a few things up like the background and maybe sharpen up the horse a bit so it stands out more(?).

Now for traditional work!

https://www.instagram.com/p/Bc4t4rJD8dKlNgG4RHNeP2KG4rTxb3_R3YOaKY0/
This is kind of an old drawing but I like it a lot, yet I feel I could change a few things up and improve. I'll gladly accept constructive criticism.

https://www.instagram.com/p/BXfoaeBDoqeDVeqC2IGKwQP7JVRds3HPT5PFUY0/ Thoughts and advice on this one? (I know, it's kinda old but my style hasn't really improved to be honest)

And lastly, this one: https://www.instagram.com/p/Bdh5QU4jVX3XRl4HTHAyGOsPBpD35Z7c69X9VM0/
It is not 100% complete but I'd still like some advice so I could improve my skills :)

Edited at January 4, 2018 09:39 AM by Mountainside Stable
Constructive Criticism January 4, 2018 09:24 AM

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I like it a lot! I don't have a ton of experience doing this type of art myself, so I can mostly offer critique from the visually pleasing/aesthetic standpoint. My main suggestions would be changing the position of the horse, maybe moving it upwards and to the right a little so it stands out more against the sky instead of blending into the dark rocks. I like the simplicity of the background, but the dark colored horse gets a little lost against the rocks.
Constructive Criticism January 4, 2018 09:31 AM

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Kaleidoscope Acres said:
I like it a lot! I don't have a ton of experience doing this type of art myself, so I can mostly offer critique from the visually pleasing/aesthetic standpoint. My main suggestions would be changing the position of the horse, maybe moving it upwards and to the right a little so it stands out more against the sky instead of blending into the dark rocks. I like the simplicity of the background, but the dark colored horse gets a little lost against the rocks.

Thank you! Will use this tip for the future :)
Constructive Criticism January 4, 2018 09:47 AM

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Yes the horse gets lost in the dark background. But the horse also looks like it is floating. Try pulling up some grass around it's hooves to make it look like it's actually standing in the grass. The text I would probably put up in the sky more but that is personal preference. Also you could probably make the horse larger in the image.
Constructive Criticism January 4, 2018 11:18 AM

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Dahteste said:
Yes the horse gets lost in the dark background. But the horse also looks like it is floating. Try pulling up some grass around it's hooves to make it look like it's actually standing in the grass. The text I would probably put up in the sky more but that is personal preference. Also you could probably make the horse larger in the image.

Thanks!
Constructive Criticism January 4, 2018 06:49 PM

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Okay, I agree with Dahteste in all points they made. To make it a bit easier on yourself, try the image size recommended for horse art, which is 500x500 pixels. To me, getting the horse the right size is easier on that size.

Another important thing, shadows! This image is in need of a slight shadow! The horse looks like it's been put into the scene, but if you got a soft-edged brush in black, then on a new layer underneath the main horse layer, draw in a rough outline of the horse - in this case just underneath the horse works, and drawing from scratch is a good idea on here - and blur it out slightly. You can lower the opacity as well. Quick tip - to make the shadow darker in some parts and lighter in others, get a soft-edged brush in the eraser tool and lower the opacity, you can make some parts lighter. If you gradually make the opacity lower you can fade out the shadow this way. The soft-edged brush makes it fade into each other, and not have harsh lines.

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