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How do you get a memorial Garden?
pandemoniu_m
02:53:48 pheezy
i bought a memorial garden for mine last month because enough of mine are getting up there :c
almost all of which i raised
Wild_Potatoes
02:46:44 
-HEE Click-
Why is it so sad to me that I have enough of my first horses in their senior years that I can make a pasture for them 🥰
Wraithcry Farm
02:26:03 Trigger 🐾
So excited. I am going to go ride today. I cannot wait. I have not seen my horse in weeks.
Angels angels
02:20:46 [1k+ brindles] Angel
BDS
Gross
Black Dragon Stable
02:19:10 BDS / Black / Stormy
Enough procrastinating, I guess. Time to go vacuum and wash the dishes.
Glacier Bay Cove
02:15:40 Arctic Katz
Happy, just about done with another art project
Angels angels
02:09:41 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Em
Sometimes I can do that one easy sometimes it is impossible lol just capture KNNs and hope you get a palomino leopard
Lynx Glory
02:09:29 ⛈ whisper/lynx
Em
oop. maybe just try to mass capture KNNs
Insignia Elites
02:08:50 Em
Thats a new one Capture
Capture a Premium Palomino Leopard Appaloosa horse.
Reward: 25,000 Eden Bucks 30,000Store Credits 8Adventurer
Don't know how to complete it xD
Lynx Glory
02:08:26 ⛈ whisper/lynx
thank you, jester! <3
KPH Equestrian
02:08:07 Rapcoon | Jester
looks nice, Lynx!
Black Dragon Stable
02:07:36 BDS / Black / Stormy
I have to drag my butt to work tomorrow night and I don't want to. Four 10 hour shifts in a row, and then Wednesday night a little vacay with a hot tub. Can't wait.
Lynx Glory
02:07:20 ⛈ whisper/lynx
guyss opinions on this new simple ahh palette i just finished? still don't know how to add a background, but i like the colour theme :)
Lynx Glory
02:06:35 ⛈ whisper/lynx
angel
real
Crestwood Eq.
02:06:09 Ivy / poison ivy
terrible feeling
Angels angels
02:04:43 [1k+ brindles] Angel
When you have things you need to do but you don't want to leave the house
Crestwood Eq.
02:02:34 Ivy / poison ivy
nevermind
Crestwood Eq.
02:01:53 Ivy / poison ivy
people. i have a question.
Fantasy Horses
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02:55:17 
How do you get a memorial Garden?
pandemoniu_m
02:53:48 pheezy
i bought a memorial garden for mine last month because enough of mine are getting up there :c
almost all of which i raised
Wild_Potatoes
02:46:44 
-HEE Click-
Why is it so sad to me that I have enough of my first horses in their senior years that I can make a pasture for them 🥰
Wraithcry Farm
02:26:03 Trigger 🐾
So excited. I am going to go ride today. I cannot wait. I have not seen my horse in weeks.
Angels angels
02:20:46 [1k+ brindles] Angel
BDS
Gross
Black Dragon Stable
02:19:10 BDS / Black / Stormy
Enough procrastinating, I guess. Time to go vacuum and wash the dishes.
Glacier Bay Cove
02:15:40 Arctic Katz
Happy, just about done with another art project
Angels angels
02:09:41 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Em
Sometimes I can do that one easy sometimes it is impossible lol just capture KNNs and hope you get a palomino leopard
Lynx Glory
02:09:29 ⛈ whisper/lynx
Em
oop. maybe just try to mass capture KNNs
Insignia Elites
02:08:50 Em
Thats a new one Capture
Capture a Premium Palomino Leopard Appaloosa horse.
Reward: 25,000 Eden Bucks 30,000Store Credits 8Adventurer
Don't know how to complete it xD
Lynx Glory
02:08:26 ⛈ whisper/lynx
thank you, jester! <3
KPH Equestrian
02:08:07 Rapcoon | Jester
looks nice, Lynx!
Black Dragon Stable
02:07:36 BDS / Black / Stormy
I have to drag my butt to work tomorrow night and I don't want to. Four 10 hour shifts in a row, and then Wednesday night a little vacay with a hot tub. Can't wait.
Lynx Glory
02:07:20 ⛈ whisper/lynx
guyss opinions on this new simple ahh palette i just finished? still don't know how to add a background, but i like the colour theme :)
Lynx Glory
02:06:35 ⛈ whisper/lynx
angel
real
Crestwood Eq.
02:06:09 Ivy / poison ivy
terrible feeling
Angels angels
02:04:43 [1k+ brindles] Angel
When you have things you need to do but you don't want to leave the house
Crestwood Eq.
02:02:34 Ivy / poison ivy
nevermind
Crestwood Eq.
02:01:53 Ivy / poison ivy
people. i have a question.
Fantasy Horses
02:01:49 Fantasy | Fanta
Bye everyone

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Constructive Criticism January 4, 2018 09:09 AM

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I've been doing digital art for some time now (mainly on my main account) and would like some constructive criticism of my art and how I could improve, etc.

For now I would like your thoughts on this guy's art: https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15106169
It is my most recent piece and personally I think I could change a few things up like the background and maybe sharpen up the horse a bit so it stands out more(?).

Now for traditional work!

https://www.instagram.com/p/Bc4t4rJD8dKlNgG4RHNeP2KG4rTxb3_R3YOaKY0/
This is kind of an old drawing but I like it a lot, yet I feel I could change a few things up and improve. I'll gladly accept constructive criticism.

https://www.instagram.com/p/BXfoaeBDoqeDVeqC2IGKwQP7JVRds3HPT5PFUY0/ Thoughts and advice on this one? (I know, it's kinda old but my style hasn't really improved to be honest)

And lastly, this one: https://www.instagram.com/p/Bdh5QU4jVX3XRl4HTHAyGOsPBpD35Z7c69X9VM0/
It is not 100% complete but I'd still like some advice so I could improve my skills :)

Edited at January 4, 2018 09:39 AM by Mountainside Stable
Constructive Criticism January 4, 2018 09:24 AM

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I like it a lot! I don't have a ton of experience doing this type of art myself, so I can mostly offer critique from the visually pleasing/aesthetic standpoint. My main suggestions would be changing the position of the horse, maybe moving it upwards and to the right a little so it stands out more against the sky instead of blending into the dark rocks. I like the simplicity of the background, but the dark colored horse gets a little lost against the rocks.
Constructive Criticism January 4, 2018 09:31 AM

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Kaleidoscope Acres said:
I like it a lot! I don't have a ton of experience doing this type of art myself, so I can mostly offer critique from the visually pleasing/aesthetic standpoint. My main suggestions would be changing the position of the horse, maybe moving it upwards and to the right a little so it stands out more against the sky instead of blending into the dark rocks. I like the simplicity of the background, but the dark colored horse gets a little lost against the rocks.

Thank you! Will use this tip for the future :)
Constructive Criticism January 4, 2018 09:47 AM

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Yes the horse gets lost in the dark background. But the horse also looks like it is floating. Try pulling up some grass around it's hooves to make it look like it's actually standing in the grass. The text I would probably put up in the sky more but that is personal preference. Also you could probably make the horse larger in the image.
Constructive Criticism January 4, 2018 11:18 AM

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Dahteste said:
Yes the horse gets lost in the dark background. But the horse also looks like it is floating. Try pulling up some grass around it's hooves to make it look like it's actually standing in the grass. The text I would probably put up in the sky more but that is personal preference. Also you could probably make the horse larger in the image.

Thanks!
Constructive Criticism January 4, 2018 06:49 PM

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Okay, I agree with Dahteste in all points they made. To make it a bit easier on yourself, try the image size recommended for horse art, which is 500x500 pixels. To me, getting the horse the right size is easier on that size.

Another important thing, shadows! This image is in need of a slight shadow! The horse looks like it's been put into the scene, but if you got a soft-edged brush in black, then on a new layer underneath the main horse layer, draw in a rough outline of the horse - in this case just underneath the horse works, and drawing from scratch is a good idea on here - and blur it out slightly. You can lower the opacity as well. Quick tip - to make the shadow darker in some parts and lighter in others, get a soft-edged brush in the eraser tool and lower the opacity, you can make some parts lighter. If you gradually make the opacity lower you can fade out the shadow this way. The soft-edged brush makes it fade into each other, and not have harsh lines.

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