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Sunni
01:09:50 Sunni bunny
I cried when my mom told me he died.
The owner actually called us to let us know.
Because she knew I was very close to that horses.
Sunni
01:08:59 Sunni bunny
Anna meatloaf was a horse I used to work with.
He was my favorite, he was lazy and just a grumpy old guy.
Glacier Bay Cove
01:08:58 Arctic Katz
Enjoy your nap
Sunni
01:08:30 Sunni bunny
I am about to roll out of here.
I think it's nap time for me
Sweet Valley
01:08:15 Anna/Jewel
Whada you mean you wish meatloaf was still alive, Sunni?

Also a black and purple dress would be pretty! But most people wear white because white symbols purity
Fantasy Horses
01:07:24 Fantasy | Fanta
Chrome
No, he is an AD horse
Chromatic
01:06:56 Chrome/Prism/Rainy
based on his stats, would switching him to SD be a good idea? If so, which? I'm thinking dressage or showjumping, but he's going to have a weak stat for either one
-HEE Click-
Sunni
01:05:05 Sunni bunny
Cove I actually thought I was pregnant for a while because of it XD.
I didn't know if could be that strong.
Sweet Valley
01:05:05 Anna/Jewel
Well I have 2 barns and still not enough space for all the horses I'd like to have lol
Angels angels
01:05:02 [1k+ brindles] Angel
.-. My cat is asking for it today.
He knows better than to walk on my laptop, but I had to put his cone on him (because he starts to get UTIs randomly sometimes and he will lick himself raw down there and if he leaves it alone it will go away) so he is mad and keeps walking across my computer -_-
Sunni
01:04:31 Sunni bunny
Anna, i would love to have a black and purple dress with a horse print on it.
I wanna do a barn weeding.
I wish meatloaf was still alive.
Fantasy Horses
01:03:46 Fantasy | Fanta
Arctic
I just need barn space and time to plan matches lol
Sweet Valley
01:03:32 Anna/Jewel
I mean I am for modest dresses for a wedding but whatever you wanna do is your choice!
Glacier Bay Cove
01:03:27 Arctic Katz
Same here, Sunni
Sunni
01:03:15 Sunni bunny
It makes me feel like I am pregnant.
It cause a lot of gastro movement.
Glacier Bay Cove
01:03:11 Arctic Katz
Struggling to be ready in time for RO
Sweet Valley
01:02:53 Anna/Jewel
Well that's kinda mean, Sunny!

I'm "Religious" As you call it and what the Bride wants to do is her choice as long as she doesn't look back and wish she didn't wear what she wore!
Sunni
01:02:38 Sunni bunny
I love spicy food but it isn't good for me.
Glacier Bay Cove
01:02:05 Arctic Katz
I don't do super spicy food either, but a tiny bit is fine with me
Angels angels
01:01:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
same Anna
I can't handle it at all

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Sunni
01:09:50 Sunni bunny
I cried when my mom told me he died.
The owner actually called us to let us know.
Because she knew I was very close to that horses.
Sunni
01:08:59 Sunni bunny
Anna meatloaf was a horse I used to work with.
He was my favorite, he was lazy and just a grumpy old guy.
Glacier Bay Cove
01:08:58 Arctic Katz
Enjoy your nap
Sunni
01:08:30 Sunni bunny
I am about to roll out of here.
I think it's nap time for me
Sweet Valley
01:08:15 Anna/Jewel
Whada you mean you wish meatloaf was still alive, Sunni?

Also a black and purple dress would be pretty! But most people wear white because white symbols purity
Fantasy Horses
01:07:24 Fantasy | Fanta
Chrome
No, he is an AD horse
Chromatic
01:06:56 Chrome/Prism/Rainy
based on his stats, would switching him to SD be a good idea? If so, which? I'm thinking dressage or showjumping, but he's going to have a weak stat for either one
-HEE Click-
Sunni
01:05:05 Sunni bunny
Cove I actually thought I was pregnant for a while because of it XD.
I didn't know if could be that strong.
Sweet Valley
01:05:05 Anna/Jewel
Well I have 2 barns and still not enough space for all the horses I'd like to have lol
Angels angels
01:05:02 [1k+ brindles] Angel
.-. My cat is asking for it today.
He knows better than to walk on my laptop, but I had to put his cone on him (because he starts to get UTIs randomly sometimes and he will lick himself raw down there and if he leaves it alone it will go away) so he is mad and keeps walking across my computer -_-
Sunni
01:04:31 Sunni bunny
Anna, i would love to have a black and purple dress with a horse print on it.
I wanna do a barn weeding.
I wish meatloaf was still alive.
Fantasy Horses
01:03:46 Fantasy | Fanta
Arctic
I just need barn space and time to plan matches lol
Sweet Valley
01:03:32 Anna/Jewel
I mean I am for modest dresses for a wedding but whatever you wanna do is your choice!
Glacier Bay Cove
01:03:27 Arctic Katz
Same here, Sunni
Sunni
01:03:15 Sunni bunny
It makes me feel like I am pregnant.
It cause a lot of gastro movement.
Glacier Bay Cove
01:03:11 Arctic Katz
Struggling to be ready in time for RO
Sweet Valley
01:02:53 Anna/Jewel
Well that's kinda mean, Sunny!

I'm "Religious" As you call it and what the Bride wants to do is her choice as long as she doesn't look back and wish she didn't wear what she wore!
Sunni
01:02:38 Sunni bunny
I love spicy food but it isn't good for me.
Glacier Bay Cove
01:02:05 Arctic Katz
I don't do super spicy food either, but a tiny bit is fine with me
Angels angels
01:01:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
same Anna
I can't handle it at all

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Critiques? November 18, 2017 10:24 AM


Andraste Equine
 
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http://funkyimg.com/i/2zt8M.jpg

I've been working on an updated art style for about two weeks now and I'd love some critiques on my first stage of progress with this. Please no negativity, I'd just love some suggestions and critique on this piece so I can improve :)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 10:29 AM


Flipperruby30
 
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It looks amazing!!Try perhaps editing the top of the landscape behind but other wise Well Done!
Critiques? November 18, 2017 11:47 AM


Jellos Warmbloods
 
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I think it looks lovely! I've always enjoyed your art.

My one suggestion would be to add the slightest of high/low lights where body parts get a wee bit hard to differentiate. On this piece I would suggest where the front leg and stomach are kinda blending together. :)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 11:53 AM


Andraste Equine
 
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Jellos Warmbloods said:
I think it looks lovely! I've always enjoyed your art.

My one suggestion would be to add the slightest of high/low lights where body parts get a wee bit hard to differentiate. On this piece I would suggest where the front leg and stomach are kinda blending together. :)



Thank you! This helps a lot.
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:45 PM


WhizBar Eventing
 
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Gahh oml. Alright, sorry xD I just literally typed out this whole long thing, and then somehow hit a wrong button slid right back onto my previous page -_- stupid mac, lol

Anyways without further complaining, here I go =D

Alright, so I was supposed to start with a "This is super lovely, Toast!" ...or something along those lines, lol. This is great work! Alright, but there's two things I'd love to point out =)

1. I do really think that it would be super awesome if you checked out a few mane tutorials on DA =) I think repainting a lovely mane really finishes pieces off nicely ;) It also adds a bit of uniqueness since everybody paints manes differently xD

2. I'd also love seeing some interesting lighting added =) I love to have my pieces follow an obvious lighting scheme, but even just a more evident source of light would be nice. It would also spruce up the bg a bit, and maybe something like a light vignette would be good ^-^

Just my thoughts! Again, I kinda struggled to type everything like I had it before xD It might be badly worded, but anyways I hope it helps <3 Keep up the great work toast =)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:49 PM


Andraste Equine
 
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VellaDun Manor said:
Gahh oml. Alright, sorry xD I just literally typed out this whole long thing, and then somehow hit a wrong button slid right back onto my previous page -_- stupid mac, lol

Anyways without further complaining, here I go =D

Alright, so I was supposed to start with a "This is super lovely, Toast!" ...or something along those lines, lol. This is great work! Alright, but there's two things I'd love to point out =)

1. I do really think that it would be super awesome if you checked out a few mane tutorials on DA =) I think repainting a lovely mane really finishes pieces off nicely ;) It also adds a bit of uniqueness since everybody paints manes differently xD

2. I'd also love seeing some interesting lighting added =) I love to have my pieces follow an obvious lighting scheme, but even just a more evident source of light would be nice. It would also spruce up the bg a bit, and maybe something like a light vignette would be good ^-^

Just my thoughts! Again, I kinda struggled to type everything like I had it before xD It might be badly worded, but anyways I hope it helps <3 Keep up the great work toast =)



Thank you! I've been thinking about trying to paint manes but they never come out how I'd like, no matter how many tutorials I look at xD I'll try that though as well as the lighting. There is a vignette on there, it's light though.
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:53 PM


WhizBar Eventing
 
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Mhmm, haha =)

I actually have struggled sooo much with hair, lol, and all the DA tutorials made it look super easy and then mine came out as crap xD So I honestly just played around myself until I finally found something that looked decent and had some potential if I refined the style a bit and such... but yea, feel free to PM me if you need any help with stuff like pesky hair x)
Critiques? November 18, 2017 02:56 PM


Andraste Equine
 
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I will :P I've got a tablet, but my stupid hand doesn't like drawing xD
Critiques? November 22, 2017 09:06 PM

Former Stable
 
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It looks wonderful but the glow around the horse could be slightly less intense and the horse seems a little too smudged but I love it! Looks amazing
Critiques? November 22, 2017 09:08 PM


Casanova
 
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It looks great! Only thing I would look into is manes (As mentioned above) But I love the strong glow around the horse! It's personally a style I really like.

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