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Horse Eden Eventing Game

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Hallucination Manor

09:00:28 Gym / HM / Hal

I can't decide if I want to reroll her or not, I'm leaning towards no

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09:00:26 Versa

Well... I suppose I'm glad I don't eat a lot of sugar anyhow. I bake a lot, but I typically give it to other people as gifts

08:59:39 katy | distant

i keep forgetting i have rerolls. should use those more :>

08:59:24 Void Malign

It's still going to be in milk chocolate, just to a lesser degree since it comes from cacao beans

08:58:52 Ally 💜

I rerolled her as well :D im obsessed
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08:58:33 Versa

Weird. I suppose I'll be taking a closer look at some of my stuff

Hummingbird Meadows

08:57:15 Bird

@Old gods, well I guess it's a good thing I eat milk chocolate. XD

08:56:51 Void Malign

08:55:53 Ally 💜

I like him now

08:55:10 Versa

Oh heck, what?

08:54:18 Void Malign

Nah. I'm more meaning that a lot of the common chocolates have a concerning amount of heavy metals in them

08:53:26 Ally 💜

I didnt like him with the blanket so I rerolled XD not sure if I like him now though

Peachy

08:52:38 peach | abbi

ally
i like him how he is! i would be tempted to reroll though too xD

08:52:37 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Ally
I mean you can get blanket but thats about the only thing thay will change. Sadly the roan cant go away ;-;

Gold Standard Estate

08:52:36 Pixel

keep omg

08:51:58 Ally 💜

Keep or reroll?
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08:51:56 [1k+ brindles] Angel

LBs go haywire on RO. It will fix itself in a day or so

Thunder Song Stable

08:51:53 Hawk

Can’t even get a WW this year. :(

E/E/W: 1
W/E/E: 1
E/E/E: 6
E/E/P: 1
E/P/E: 1
P/P/P: 1

08:50:58 Versa

It just happens sometimes. It's nothing abnormal.

Thunder Song Stable

08:50:18 Hawk

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Hallucination Manor

09:00:28 Gym / HM / Hal

I can't decide if I want to reroll her or not, I'm leaning towards no

-HEE Click-

09:00:26 Versa

Well... I suppose I'm glad I don't eat a lot of sugar anyhow. I bake a lot, but I typically give it to other people as gifts

08:59:39 katy | distant

i keep forgetting i have rerolls. should use those more :>

08:59:24 Void Malign

It's still going to be in milk chocolate, just to a lesser degree since it comes from cacao beans

08:58:52 Ally 💜

I rerolled her as well :D im obsessed
-HEE Click-

08:58:33 Versa

Weird. I suppose I'll be taking a closer look at some of my stuff

Hummingbird Meadows

08:57:15 Bird

@Old gods, well I guess it's a good thing I eat milk chocolate. XD

08:56:51 Void Malign

08:55:53 Ally 💜

I like him now

08:55:10 Versa

Oh heck, what?

08:54:18 Void Malign

Nah. I'm more meaning that a lot of the common chocolates have a concerning amount of heavy metals in them

08:53:26 Ally 💜

I didnt like him with the blanket so I rerolled XD not sure if I like him now though

Peachy

08:52:38 peach | abbi

ally
i like him how he is! i would be tempted to reroll though too xD

08:52:37 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Ally
I mean you can get blanket but thats about the only thing thay will change. Sadly the roan cant go away ;-;

Gold Standard Estate

08:52:36 Pixel

keep omg

08:51:58 Ally 💜

Keep or reroll?
-HEE Click-

08:51:56 [1k+ brindles] Angel

LBs go haywire on RO. It will fix itself in a day or so

Thunder Song Stable

08:51:53 Hawk

Can’t even get a WW this year. :(

E/E/W: 1
W/E/E: 1
E/E/E: 6
E/E/P: 1
E/P/E: 1
P/P/P: 1

08:50:58 Versa

It just happens sometimes. It's nothing abnormal.

Thunder Song Stable

08:50:18 Hawk

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March 11, 2018 09:35 PM

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#136184
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https://image.ibb.co/ejyrTS/Untitled.png

So this is my most recent image. I played with it for an hour or two, and besides the eyes, I am rather happy with it.

However, this is only my 5th or 6th piece, so I know there must be room for improvement. I am looking for suggestions to improve my style of art, as well as comments on the piece as a whole.

Please, constructive, reasonable suggestions only. I am still very new to the art world :P

March 11, 2018 10:57 PM

Hallucination Manor

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I would make the feet look more grounded in the grass if you want examples of what I mean you can PM me :D

March 11, 2018 11:10 PM

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I can see what you mean there. Adding some grass to the hooves would've helped.

March 11, 2018 11:14 PM

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Looove it. :D My advice would be using the eraser tool to clean up the lines on the legs! Also smudging the tail in the direction the hair would be going or creating individual strands (tedious though)

It looks amazing, what a great start. <3

March 11, 2018 11:36 PM

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I agree, the legs were looking a bit messy the more I looked at it. I attempted to draw individual strands, I just think the smudging went weird. Maybe I should go on more than one layer? I just find then it's tedious to smudge :P

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