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Boulder Creek
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The Pretty Pony Pageant Needs You!!!

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Painted Dreams
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ISO a 3 month upgrade! Have the funds ON HAND and will pay top price!
Legazy Stables
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Help me test - EWE combo producer so far :)
Alpine Acres
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Secretariat Ranch
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Port Royal Equines
10:39:07 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
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Leveled Geldings at auction!
Down South Stud
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Selling nice color PON foals colts and fillies imma leave gelding the colts up to yall since beauty is in the eyes of the beholder. Extra barn
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Critique July 31, 2018 01:01 AM

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https://s20.postimg.cc/q4cmq04nx/EC613344-_A996-4_F85-_B5_DD-7_B923095_A187.png
Wondering what I could do next time to improve.
I know the markings could use some work on the edges to make them a bit more realistic, but other thoughts?
Critique July 31, 2018 01:03 AM

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Try making the edges of the hooves disappear into the grass. Right now, it looks like the horse is trotting on grass patterned concrete.
Critique July 31, 2018 01:13 AM

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Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png
Critique July 31, 2018 04:08 AM

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RavenHale said:
Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png


Yes it looks more like the the horse is part of the image
Critique July 31, 2018 04:25 AM


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You could make the hair that you have drawn on thinner so they look more natural, in the tail especially they are quite thick and they donΒ’t taper at the end like normal hair does.

Still a very good piece though :)
Critique July 31, 2018 09:20 AM

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After you finish the markings, use the smudging tool at about 50% with a small soft brush (around 2px) then go along the side of the marking pulling in an out slightly. It will make the marking look more blended into the horse instead of a sudden stop/beginning. Also the mane by the cheek looks short, I'd suggest making it slightly longer. Other than that, very nice :D

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