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Kingswood Elite

06:05:48 ghost

Thank you both!

Kingswood Elite

06:04:50 ghost

I think the round ended before my page reloaded, whoops

06:03:28 Lily/Alpine

Sure thing ghost :D

Calela Eventing

06:03:09 Cali

ghost,
I can definitely
Mightttt throw in a glass... maybe

Kingswood Elite

05:59:32 ghost

can someone enter stable raid for a quest? ^^

05:16:12 Lily/Alpine

You have to convert one of your pastures into a memorial garden <3

04:10:44

hey! question, how do you go to your memorial garden and put horses in memory?

Nightingales Ridge

02:54:40 Issy

Hi Loonyy

02:01:20 Loony/Loony Tune

Hey chat, How are ya’ll

01:16:07 Pera/ peral

12:21:26 pheezy

their art is gorgeous kiwi :0

12:13:07 Kiwi

It's so nerve-wracking waiting for the wk 4's.
I've got these two
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

12:12:04 Fantasy | Fanta

I have to log off now, bye everyone! Have a great day!

12:11:49 Fantasy | Fanta

DD
Oh absolutely :')

Dash and Duchess

12:10:18 DD | ~Squizard~

Fantasy, thank you! I'm really begging RF TvT

12:09:33 Fantasy | Fanta

DD
Thank you! Same to you. I know what high hopes you have for your girl, I'll be sad with you if she doesn't do well :P

Dash and Duchess

12:08:30 DD | ~Squizard~

Fantasy, Ooo Zz and Appy! Good luck!

12:06:58 Fantasy | Fanta

DD and KPH
Same here >_<
-HEE Click-

Dash and Duchess

12:05:49 DD | ~Squizard~

Blaze, It's definitely been an adjustment lol, but good luck with gifyu! I used to always use postimg so it's been a struggle xD

12:04:20 Blaze

DD ~ I will have to check it out, I miss imgbb lol <3

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Kingswood Elite

06:05:48 ghost

Thank you both!

Kingswood Elite

06:04:50 ghost

I think the round ended before my page reloaded, whoops

06:03:28 Lily/Alpine

Sure thing ghost :D

Calela Eventing

06:03:09 Cali

ghost,
I can definitely
Mightttt throw in a glass... maybe

Kingswood Elite

05:59:32 ghost

can someone enter stable raid for a quest? ^^

05:16:12 Lily/Alpine

You have to convert one of your pastures into a memorial garden <3

04:10:44

hey! question, how do you go to your memorial garden and put horses in memory?

Nightingales Ridge

02:54:40 Issy

Hi Loonyy

02:01:20 Loony/Loony Tune

Hey chat, How are ya’ll

01:16:07 Pera/ peral

12:21:26 pheezy

their art is gorgeous kiwi :0

12:13:07 Kiwi

It's so nerve-wracking waiting for the wk 4's.
I've got these two
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

12:12:04 Fantasy | Fanta

I have to log off now, bye everyone! Have a great day!

12:11:49 Fantasy | Fanta

DD
Oh absolutely :')

Dash and Duchess

12:10:18 DD | ~Squizard~

Fantasy, thank you! I'm really begging RF TvT

12:09:33 Fantasy | Fanta

DD
Thank you! Same to you. I know what high hopes you have for your girl, I'll be sad with you if she doesn't do well :P

Dash and Duchess

12:08:30 DD | ~Squizard~

Fantasy, Ooo Zz and Appy! Good luck!

12:06:58 Fantasy | Fanta

DD and KPH
Same here >_<
-HEE Click-

Dash and Duchess

12:05:49 DD | ~Squizard~

Blaze, It's definitely been an adjustment lol, but good luck with gifyu! I used to always use postimg so it's been a struggle xD

12:04:20 Blaze

DD ~ I will have to check it out, I miss imgbb lol <3

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January 20, 2020 02:26 PM

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I've been doing a bit of art lafter watching jellos join.me, so I would love for people to critique it! (Mods, will not be sold, auctioned, or used.)

January 20, 2020 02:29 PM

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I'm no artist, but maybe more contrast in the first? They all are so lovely!

January 20, 2020 02:31 PM

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Mysterious Echoes said:

I'm no artist, but maybe more contrast in the first? They all are so lovely!

Thank you!

January 21, 2020 03:16 PM

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For the second one, the shadow doesn't seem to line up right with the light source. These are all beautiful, though, absolutely lovely.

January 21, 2020 04:43 PM

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White Crown Stables said:

For the second one, the shadow doesn't seem to line up right with the light source. These are all beautiful, though, absolutely lovely.

Thank you! I'll remember that on my next piece.

January 21, 2020 04:47 PM

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I would also love critique on this piece

February 3, 2020 12:03 AM

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personally i would go thicker on some strands of hair and just keep practicing hair movement. For me i like to go on youtube and search horses in slow motion so i can see the way their hair moves in different ways:) your art is gorgeous though and i love the concepts

February 3, 2020 12:04 AM

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also if youre interested i would LOVE to do a collab with you:DDD

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