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two time producing EWE RID sire up for stud.
Sport Pony Island
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-HEE Click- Take a look! All the ISH are for sale in this barn! Pm me with the link, and i'll put him/her on sale.
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ISO 1 month upgrade urgently. Please PM me
Insignia Elites
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Show horse clear out! All start at 500 ebs regardless of rating! AD and SD! -HEE Click-
Skyrim
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6 year old WWE rated RID stallion for sale at 200k. He's produced EWE's and EEE's.
Ambrosia
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#28 AALB mare for sale
Sweet Valley
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Join SVB today!
Second Chance Ranch
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Selling all of my RIDS!!! all under 3k and will be FRd on RO come get them now!
Port Royal Equines
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Geldings, fr fodder, and Bravery mares

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Cheapest stuff!

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Straws! I need them gone. Ablb retirees included.
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Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 09:35 PM


~Savy~
 
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#136184
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https://image.ibb.co/ejyrTS/Untitled.png
So this is my most recent image. I played with it for an hour or two, and besides the eyes, I am rather happy with it.
However, this is only my 5th or 6th piece, so I know there must be room for improvement. I am looking for suggestions to improve my style of art, as well as comments on the piece as a whole.
Please, constructive, reasonable suggestions only. I am still very new to the art world :P
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 10:57 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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I would make the feet look more grounded in the grass if you want examples of what I mean you can PM me :D
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:10 PM


~Savy~
 
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I can see what you mean there. Adding some grass to the hooves would've helped.
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:14 PM

Former Stable
 
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Looove it. :D My advice would be using the eraser tool to clean up the lines on the legs! Also smudging the tail in the direction the hair would be going or creating individual strands (tedious though)
It looks amazing, what a great start. <3
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:36 PM


~Savy~
 
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I agree, the legs were looking a bit messy the more I looked at it. I attempted to draw individual strands, I just think the smudging went weird. Maybe I should go on more than one layer? I just find then it's tedious to smudge :P

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