Horse Eden Eventing Game
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Year: 193   Season: Spring   
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Nightfall Dressage
09:56:34 Witchy
-HEE Click-
I bred him to some cheap broods this year and messed his progeny report up T-T
Stargazer
09:56:13 Star - RID|KNN
like when i get heavy Duns, dont get em much
-HEE Click-
Angels angels
09:54:22 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-YT Click-
Anyone need a laugh? I am dying
Ceffyldorf
09:53:06 katy | distant
athena,
pretty!
Red Panda Hollow
09:51:58 Athena's SA-PON
ooh chimmy
-HEE Click-
Golden Crest
09:50:12 | Eve
I bred two EEEs together a while ago and got a EWW
Red Panda Hollow
09:50:02 Athena's SA-PON
thank you
Golden Crest
09:49:28 | Eve
RF is hilarious sometimes haha. She is lovely, Athena!
Red Panda Hollow
09:47:46 Athena's SA-PON
Hey no! Honestly she made my day. PONs have been rude
ShiningStar Stables
09:46:48 Chey / Star
Athena
If she disappears I had nothing to do with it xD
Red Panda Hollow
09:45:18 Athena's SA-PON
And hiding silver damn
Red Panda Hollow
09:44:46 Athena's SA-PON
Damn that was a good foal for a EEE maiden with meh training
-HEE Click-
Bluegrass Racing
09:44:41 Blue
swear the only keepers I held back that are getting good Brave ratings are the boys I gelded :c
Peachy
09:44:13 peach | abbi
thanks, blaze! i'm happy with her & surprised with her dam xD

lynx, yeah same. i've been thinking on how to combine them for hours and that's the best i got lmao
Twin Flames
09:42:30 Blaze
She is cute, Peach!
Lynx Glory
09:41:59 ⛈ whisper/lynx
peach xD i love making funny mixtures of the parents' names lol
Peachy
09:40:49 peach | abbi
-HEE Click- finally decided on her name xD
Lady ranger
09:38:17 
-HEE Click- name ideas?
Rising Stars Stable
09:36:54 Willow ~ AA Breeder
Thank you
Royal Bloodlines
09:32:27 Royal / Amber
Willow
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Nightfall Dressage
09:56:34 Witchy
-HEE Click-
I bred him to some cheap broods this year and messed his progeny report up T-T
Stargazer
09:56:13 Star - RID|KNN
like when i get heavy Duns, dont get em much
-HEE Click-
Angels angels
09:54:22 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-YT Click-
Anyone need a laugh? I am dying
Ceffyldorf
09:53:06 katy | distant
athena,
pretty!
Red Panda Hollow
09:51:58 Athena's SA-PON
ooh chimmy
-HEE Click-
Golden Crest
09:50:12 | Eve
I bred two EEEs together a while ago and got a EWW
Red Panda Hollow
09:50:02 Athena's SA-PON
thank you
Golden Crest
09:49:28 | Eve
RF is hilarious sometimes haha. She is lovely, Athena!
Red Panda Hollow
09:47:46 Athena's SA-PON
Hey no! Honestly she made my day. PONs have been rude
ShiningStar Stables
09:46:48 Chey / Star
Athena
If she disappears I had nothing to do with it xD
Red Panda Hollow
09:45:18 Athena's SA-PON
And hiding silver damn
Red Panda Hollow
09:44:46 Athena's SA-PON
Damn that was a good foal for a EEE maiden with meh training
-HEE Click-
Bluegrass Racing
09:44:41 Blue
swear the only keepers I held back that are getting good Brave ratings are the boys I gelded :c
Peachy
09:44:13 peach | abbi
thanks, blaze! i'm happy with her & surprised with her dam xD

lynx, yeah same. i've been thinking on how to combine them for hours and that's the best i got lmao
Twin Flames
09:42:30 Blaze
She is cute, Peach!
Lynx Glory
09:41:59 ⛈ whisper/lynx
peach xD i love making funny mixtures of the parents' names lol
Peachy
09:40:49 peach | abbi
-HEE Click- finally decided on her name xD
Lady ranger
09:38:17 
-HEE Click- name ideas?
Rising Stars Stable
09:36:54 Willow ~ AA Breeder
Thank you
Royal Bloodlines
09:32:27 Royal / Amber
Willow
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Art feedback June 13, 2018 05:50 AM

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Here’s an example of my art
http://i63.tinypic.com/oax2c3.jpg
I was wondering if anyone could give me feedback and ways to improve

Edited at June 13, 2018 05:50 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 13, 2018 06:52 PM

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Wonderful job cutting out your horse! Maybe smudge the horse a little bit less to reserve some of the quality and muscle tone.

Use Brightness/Contrast, Colour Balance to help blend your horses into the background more and make them look as if they belong. (If you use PS then you can play around with Auto Tone/Colour/Contrast)

Horses need shadows ;) Shadows, though you may not realize it at first, make a huge difference in how real you picture looks.

Maybe try adding some highlights/lowlights to help your horse pop.

Most artists also like to redraw eyes to give them a little more life.


Hope this helps! Also, there are tons of tutorials on DA that can help you improve! You are doing very good!
Art feedback June 14, 2018 12:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 01:29 AM

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It's a great precut. It is, however, overly smudged in my opinion. Much like Trinity said, not smudging as much preserves detail.
Adjust the hue/brightness so it blends better with the background
Adding shadows and drawing on hair and highlights will give it a ton more detail also.

Great job
Art feedback June 14, 2018 03:48 AM

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Art feedback June 14, 2018 04:16 AM

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http://i63.tinypic.com/30kvfb7.jpg
Is that better

Edited at June 14, 2018 06:53 AM by Kirralee stud farm
Art feedback June 14, 2018 07:17 AM

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What art program do you use?

If the shadow stays the sharp the you need to have it outline the horse more. I think in this case the shadow can be softer. Try adding darker spots and softer sides a bit more.

Also don't blur the background as much. Keep the foreground sharp and the background slightly blurred if you are going to do it.

I think the horse could still use a little less smudging.
Art feedback June 15, 2018 03:13 AM

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Ok
I use
ibisPaint X on IPhone

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