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Blue Diamond
03:00:14 Bluey
Lynx
She's actually gorgeous!
Sunni
02:44:59 Sunni bunny
Now I am full and tired xc
I wanna take a nap so bad.
Crestwood Eq.
02:44:25 Ivy / poison ivy
still pretty
Lynx Glory
02:43:10 ⛈ whisper/lynx
a move i will always regret
Lynx Glory
02:43:00 ⛈ whisper/lynx
i'm still mourning the loss of this girl's gorgeous looks BEFORE i rerolled her.. -HEE Click-
Crestwood Eq.
02:42:56 Ivy / poison ivy
well he's not my crush. he likes me back. but we arent dating yet... wait. so that makes us.....what?
Crestwood Eq.
02:42:22 Ivy / poison ivy
chrush's*
Crestwood Eq.
02:42:13 Ivy / poison ivy
Ria

my crushe's pool
Wisteria Run Farm
02:40:52 Solar/Ria
hi Ivy!

what a gorgeous pool lol
Crestwood Eq.
02:40:28 Ivy / poison ivy
hi ria
Wisteria Run Farm
02:40:11 Solar/Ria
ooo, champagne with world class bravery :D
-HEE Click-
Crestwood Eq.
02:40:08 Ivy / poison ivy
lynx

ahhhh *faints because of infauation*
Lynx Glory
02:39:01 ⛈ whisper/lynx
ivy
yep i can tell.. xD
Crestwood Eq.
02:38:07 Ivy / poison ivy
i mean it has an ELEVATOR
Crestwood Eq.
02:37:46 Ivy / poison ivy
😤
Crestwood Eq.
02:37:25 Ivy / poison ivy
lynx

i can't help it *hmph* i'm rather obsessed
Lynx Glory
02:36:54 ⛈ whisper/lynx
ivy
girl xD
Crestwood Eq.
02:35:57 Ivy / poison ivy
pancakes?

im amazed by the size of the pool at wylder's. house. pic: -Click-
Lynx Glory
02:35:06 ⛈ whisper/lynx
nothing much, eating pancakes lol. you?
Crestwood Eq.
02:34:01 Ivy / poison ivy
lynxxxxxxx

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Blue Diamond
03:00:14 Bluey
Lynx
She's actually gorgeous!
Sunni
02:44:59 Sunni bunny
Now I am full and tired xc
I wanna take a nap so bad.
Crestwood Eq.
02:44:25 Ivy / poison ivy
still pretty
Lynx Glory
02:43:10 ⛈ whisper/lynx
a move i will always regret
Lynx Glory
02:43:00 ⛈ whisper/lynx
i'm still mourning the loss of this girl's gorgeous looks BEFORE i rerolled her.. -HEE Click-
Crestwood Eq.
02:42:56 Ivy / poison ivy
well he's not my crush. he likes me back. but we arent dating yet... wait. so that makes us.....what?
Crestwood Eq.
02:42:22 Ivy / poison ivy
chrush's*
Crestwood Eq.
02:42:13 Ivy / poison ivy
Ria

my crushe's pool
Wisteria Run Farm
02:40:52 Solar/Ria
hi Ivy!

what a gorgeous pool lol
Crestwood Eq.
02:40:28 Ivy / poison ivy
hi ria
Wisteria Run Farm
02:40:11 Solar/Ria
ooo, champagne with world class bravery :D
-HEE Click-
Crestwood Eq.
02:40:08 Ivy / poison ivy
lynx

ahhhh *faints because of infauation*
Lynx Glory
02:39:01 ⛈ whisper/lynx
ivy
yep i can tell.. xD
Crestwood Eq.
02:38:07 Ivy / poison ivy
i mean it has an ELEVATOR
Crestwood Eq.
02:37:46 Ivy / poison ivy
😤
Crestwood Eq.
02:37:25 Ivy / poison ivy
lynx

i can't help it *hmph* i'm rather obsessed
Lynx Glory
02:36:54 ⛈ whisper/lynx
ivy
girl xD
Crestwood Eq.
02:35:57 Ivy / poison ivy
pancakes?

im amazed by the size of the pool at wylder's. house. pic: -Click-
Lynx Glory
02:35:06 ⛈ whisper/lynx
nothing much, eating pancakes lol. you?
Crestwood Eq.
02:34:01 Ivy / poison ivy
lynxxxxxxx

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Critique and Worth December 4, 2017 07:03 PM


Rosesong Stables
 
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https://orig00.deviantart.net/787e/f/2017/338/4/1/horse_in_water__by_midholly-dbvryz7.png
I recently did this piece and was needing some critique. As you can see manes are my struggle :) And also how much would be a good start price and all bid if I were to auction it?
Critique and Worth December 4, 2017 08:23 PM

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I think the mane is the best part, the body is too smoothed out to the point has no definition. The background is also too blurred in my opinion. I would suggest that if you're going to auction it that it be the size of an avatar, not rectangular like it is :)
Critique and Worth December 4, 2017 08:26 PM

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Perhaps more dodging/burning on the horse to give it shadows and highlights. The hair looks awesome. Also maybe the effect of water splashing in the stream as a trot would create quite a disruption on the surface. Maybe a reflection? Those can be a pain to do though
Critique and Worth December 4, 2017 10:53 PM


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Okay thank you for these tips of course size will be ajusted if I auction it and will definitely not blur the backroad so much next time and less smudging on the body as well 😀 I think I might give it a bit of a reflection as I felt like it needed something more in the water as well
Critique and Worth December 4, 2017 11:08 PM

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Also,too many sharp corners on the limbs.
I would try practicing cutting with a size 4 eraser.

Maybe add a super distorted reflection,and please,put the back right hoof on?

Edited at December 4, 2017 11:09 PM by Darkin

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