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EEE I/SH Colts/Gelds 2/3k trained and tracked
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lots of pretty PPP-PEE rated extra mares/fillies, good additions to color programs. NO SABINO! 1k or less :3
Lovely angels
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EWE Combo TB Mares need gone! 40k
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Yellowstone
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Taking offers -HEE Click-
Fire and Ice
10:12:17 
EEE WB filly copper bay with Tobi 8k obo
-HEE Click-
Summit Stables
10:10:11 Summit
11yo EWW X mare for sale for 80k. -HEE Click-

I have lots of EWE combo horses for sale. Prices range from 15k-20k. I also have W combo mares for sale for 1k. Need them all sold. -HEE Click-
Red Acres Ranch
10:07:02 
If anyone want these horses please om me with your price -HEE Click-
Port Royal Equines
09:48:09 ISH Bravery 4 Sale!
-HEE Click-
Bravery mares and Geldings for 1k!
Eagle Creek
09:38:58 Eagle
Auction -HEE Click-
Skyrim
09:36:38 Wynter/Ghostly
-HEE Click-
6 year old WWE rated RID stallion for sale at 200k. He's produced EWE's and EEE's.
pandemoniu_m
09:31:50 pheezy
-HEE Click-

EEE I/SH Colts/Gelds 2/3k trained and tracked
PEW Black Splash Mare 3k

lots of pretty PPP-PEE rated extra mares/fillies, good additions to color programs. NO SABINO! 1k or less :3
Lovely angels
09:30:40 Angel's angels (SA)
EWE Combo TB Mares need gone! 40k
Switching to SD!
Majestic Sanctuary
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I have tons of rare AA that will be FR on RO. If anyone is interested.

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Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!
This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:49 PM


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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 10:58 PM


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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:


$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.


Yeah good point! I’m just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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