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05:20:47

I didn't know that horses had a superman stance
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Nightingales Ridge

05:14:33 Issy

Whaaaat now hulks gone? Aw man

04:40:40 ZEZ - ZZ

My accountant rejected my advances :(

Nightingales Ridge

04:30:56 Issy

Gemstone I like it...if it based on looks its a faulty microwave that turned him crisp ;)

Nightingales Ridge

04:29:49 Issy

Accountant*

Nightingales Ridge

04:29:39 Issy

My accounting gifting me love potion is a sign he loves it

04:23:23 ZEZ - ZZ

Definitely worth keeping in my opinion lol

04:20:50 Gemstone

I spaced off and was looking at google for a name and I looked back and I had typed microwave, I was laughing to hard to change it so I left it 😂😂

04:19:41 ZEZ - ZZ

Hey look maybe it means something 😂

04:18:30 Gemstone

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Guys, this boys name 😂😂😂 what the fuck is wrong with my brain😂😂

04:14:27 ZEZ - ZZ

I successfully got Nigel all cleaned 💪🏼

04:11:48 ZEZ - ZZ

It does kinda haha

This ones gonna look so good when she grows up
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04:08:11

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Flaxen and red roan look so cute together. Kinda like a strawberry cookie or something like that that 😂

04:04:24 Lily

ZZ
he is xD

04:04:08 ZEZ - ZZ

Ooo he’s fancy lily

04:03:39 ZEZ - ZZ

All my first horses are looong passed 🥲 I still have some straws I hold onto but best I ever did at the time was PEE so theyre just for questing

04:03:16 Lily

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love the ones with dapples :D

04:02:14

Major win Zez

04:01:00

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Makes me sad to see some of my first horses so old 🥲

04:00:45 ZEZ - ZZ

This little girly got some cute dapples and she’s not a browns/bay/buckskin so win win
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05:20:47

I didn't know that horses had a superman stance
-Click-

Nightingales Ridge

05:14:33 Issy

Whaaaat now hulks gone? Aw man

04:40:40 ZEZ - ZZ

My accountant rejected my advances :(

Nightingales Ridge

04:30:56 Issy

Gemstone I like it...if it based on looks its a faulty microwave that turned him crisp ;)

Nightingales Ridge

04:29:49 Issy

Accountant*

Nightingales Ridge

04:29:39 Issy

My accounting gifting me love potion is a sign he loves it

04:23:23 ZEZ - ZZ

Definitely worth keeping in my opinion lol

04:20:50 Gemstone

I spaced off and was looking at google for a name and I looked back and I had typed microwave, I was laughing to hard to change it so I left it 😂😂

04:19:41 ZEZ - ZZ

Hey look maybe it means something 😂

04:18:30 Gemstone

-HEE Click-
Guys, this boys name 😂😂😂 what the fuck is wrong with my brain😂😂

04:14:27 ZEZ - ZZ

I successfully got Nigel all cleaned 💪🏼

04:11:48 ZEZ - ZZ

It does kinda haha

This ones gonna look so good when she grows up
-HEE Click-

04:08:11

-HEE Click-
Flaxen and red roan look so cute together. Kinda like a strawberry cookie or something like that that 😂

04:04:24 Lily

ZZ
he is xD

04:04:08 ZEZ - ZZ

Ooo he’s fancy lily

04:03:39 ZEZ - ZZ

All my first horses are looong passed 🥲 I still have some straws I hold onto but best I ever did at the time was PEE so theyre just for questing

04:03:16 Lily

-HEE Click-
love the ones with dapples :D

04:02:14

Major win Zez

04:01:00

-HEE Click-
Makes me sad to see some of my first horses so old 🥲

04:00:45 ZEZ - ZZ

This little girly got some cute dapples and she’s not a browns/bay/buckskin so win win
-HEE Click-

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

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January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! Im just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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