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Snow Stable
04:59:38 Snow❆Gem
So pretty! :D Dappled booty silver black. *heart eyes* -HEE Click-
Connally Stud
04:58:21 Senda
sorry
Bioshock Manor
04:57:51 Storm
Wrong chat
Connally Stud
04:54:38 Senda
Wow prices great color and quality
-HEE Click-
Wolf Dancer
04:50:49 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Lillie
yea I have yet to go to a dance at all, and I know I 90% won't go in college since there is a chance of alchol at adult partys
Midnight Manors
04:49:13 Bunny ♡
Wolf + Lillie
Oh wow I didnt realize yall were around my age xD
Lilac Fields
04:28:42 Lillie
Wolf
wow I didnt realize we're closer in age than I thought lol. I missed prom and all my senior dances at school as well, life just gets in the way sometimes
Wolf Dancer
04:27:22 Wolf Burger (Leg)
I'm so sad now :( I'm not going to be able to go to any of the school dances this year, and I'm a senior :( I haven't gotten to go to a dance at all in highschool and I have major events on the days that they planned dances on :(
Lilac Fields
04:24:21 Lillie
fanta
Same! ive made 44.3k from quests today, I'm loving the updates for quests
Fantasy Horses
03:25:05 Fantasy | Fanta
I completed so many quests today it made me so happy
"You earned 32700 eden bucks from quests."
Insignia Elites
03:23:11 Em
Love the medal quest :)
Fantasy Horses
03:22:50 Fantasy | Fanta
Willow
Nice. From a quest?
God is Mighty Stable
03:19:43 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
A Cross Country one
Fantasy Horses
03:19:01 Fantasy | Fanta
Willow
I think she's cute! And what medal?
God is Mighty Stable
03:10:31 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
-HEE Click-
This ugly thing just earned me a medal
Fantasy Horses
03:06:27 Fantasy | Fanta
Breed a double Premium Apricot horse. (ee prlprl CC)

I would if I could lol Especially since it gives you 7 adventurer's maps o_o
God is Mighty Stable
03:03:03 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
-HEE Click-
pretty girl
Ellsworths Eden
02:51:42 
@Myth

Yup. They're getting an MRI done tomorrow.

@Arctic

I'm sure they will be. They're strong. I'm proud of them. (Also this Dutch/Seven, not the other Seven online!)
Glacier Bay Cove
02:50:03 Arctic Katz
Hopefully Seven will be okay
Mythological
02:50:01 Crowley
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Snow Stable
04:59:38 Snow❆Gem
So pretty! :D Dappled booty silver black. *heart eyes* -HEE Click-
Connally Stud
04:58:21 Senda
sorry
Bioshock Manor
04:57:51 Storm
Wrong chat
Connally Stud
04:54:38 Senda
Wow prices great color and quality
-HEE Click-
Wolf Dancer
04:50:49 Wolf Burger (Leg)
Lillie
yea I have yet to go to a dance at all, and I know I 90% won't go in college since there is a chance of alchol at adult partys
Midnight Manors
04:49:13 Bunny ♡
Wolf + Lillie
Oh wow I didnt realize yall were around my age xD
Lilac Fields
04:28:42 Lillie
Wolf
wow I didnt realize we're closer in age than I thought lol. I missed prom and all my senior dances at school as well, life just gets in the way sometimes
Wolf Dancer
04:27:22 Wolf Burger (Leg)
I'm so sad now :( I'm not going to be able to go to any of the school dances this year, and I'm a senior :( I haven't gotten to go to a dance at all in highschool and I have major events on the days that they planned dances on :(
Lilac Fields
04:24:21 Lillie
fanta
Same! ive made 44.3k from quests today, I'm loving the updates for quests
Fantasy Horses
03:25:05 Fantasy | Fanta
I completed so many quests today it made me so happy
"You earned 32700 eden bucks from quests."
Insignia Elites
03:23:11 Em
Love the medal quest :)
Fantasy Horses
03:22:50 Fantasy | Fanta
Willow
Nice. From a quest?
God is Mighty Stable
03:19:43 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
A Cross Country one
Fantasy Horses
03:19:01 Fantasy | Fanta
Willow
I think she's cute! And what medal?
God is Mighty Stable
03:10:31 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
-HEE Click-
This ugly thing just earned me a medal
Fantasy Horses
03:06:27 Fantasy | Fanta
Breed a double Premium Apricot horse. (ee prlprl CC)

I would if I could lol Especially since it gives you 7 adventurer's maps o_o
God is Mighty Stable
03:03:03 Willow ~ KNN Breeder
-HEE Click-
pretty girl
Ellsworths Eden
02:51:42 
@Myth

Yup. They're getting an MRI done tomorrow.

@Arctic

I'm sure they will be. They're strong. I'm proud of them. (Also this Dutch/Seven, not the other Seven online!)
Glacier Bay Cove
02:50:03 Arctic Katz
Hopefully Seven will be okay
Mythological
02:50:01 Crowley
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The Official Art Critique Forum February 16, 2021 09:15 PM


HMH Reality Check
 
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Here's another one for you, I struggle a bit more with this one, as it was one color, the previous one had dark and light brown, but this was all the same shade, I darkened the mane and tail a bit, and played with highlight, but that made it look very palomino.
The Official Art Critique Forum February 16, 2021 09:19 PM

Former Stable
 
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#853222
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Should the eye be lower or higher ?

HMH Reality Check said:
The face muscling is off, as well as the eye placement.


The Official Art Critique Forum February 16, 2021 09:22 PM


HMH Reality Check
 
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Winter Beach Stables said:
Should the eye be lower or higher ?

HMH Reality Check said:
The face muscling is off, as well as the eye placement.




A little to the right
The Official Art Critique Forum February 16, 2021 09:41 PM


Gem
 
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I must type slow or something. By the time I'd posted that I already have three more lovely pieces of art to suggest on! <3
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@RRR
I have three main topics of critique for ya; lighting, wings, mane. I'm writing that out now so I remember 😜
1. Lighting: Background = very dark overall, bottom of horse = very dark, rest of horse = original lighting from the horse photograph. There isn't many strong highlights in the original horse photo, so that makes your life easier. Just lower the brightness of the horse and wings overall and I think that will help a lot. From there, highlight beneath the horse's chin and neck where there is the strong light source from the aloud behind it.
2. Wings: It's very clear to me that you used a precut wings stock image. I get that wings are tough but I dare you to find a photograph of some wings and use that instead. Either way, the wings should be significantly bigger. Bell posted this super amazing wing tutorial a while back and I think you would find it helpful <3
3. Mane: For the fact that the horse is running/flying through a thunderstorm, make it wild! Add some crazy hair! Have fun with it :)
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@Winter Beach
Of course you are allowed to post that here! Heck, I'd critique a piece of traditional art done by someone's five year old if they wanted me to 😝
Both the grey scale and the shades version are very very nicely done. I especially love the colors you used in the shaded version. I agree that the eye could be moved slightly to the right. The strands in the forelock are beautiful I just wish you had kept the same amount of deal throughout the mane. Aside from that, I would recommend shading the inside of the nostril because it looks somewhat 2D right now in the shades version. Overall, a very beautiful piece and I look forward to seeing more from you <3
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@HMH
Once again, the shading is very nicely done. I'm mainly seeing shadows so don't be afraid to add some highlights in there too. The mane and tail genuinely appear to be the same color to me so maybe darken them even more and definitely add more strands of different colors like you did in the first lineart. Same critique with the previous eye - mane it stand out more. Also work on your shading in the nostril. Still very well done <3

Edited at February 16, 2021 09:44 PM by Gem
The Official Art Critique Forum February 17, 2021 11:17 AM

Former Stable
 
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Here’s another one for you! I am curious about pricing on this one as well.

Edited at February 18, 2021 05:41 PM by Apex Equestrian
The Official Art Critique Forum February 17, 2021 04:50 PM


Lunar Rose Stables
 
Posts: 103
#853601
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Untitled-Artwork (4)Be as harsh as you want
The Official Art Critique Forum February 17, 2021 05:00 PM


Zomb
 
Posts: 2302
#853610
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Extra round chunk 👀

be harsh, picky. Anything 🙊
The Official Art Critique Forum February 17, 2021 05:11 PM


Lunar Rose Stables
 
Posts: 103
#853617
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I love the chunk zomb. the only thing i see wrong with it is that the feathers look a bit unnatural.

Edited at February 17, 2021 05:13 PM by Black Rose Stables
The Official Art Critique Forum February 17, 2021 06:56 PM


Pegasus Lane
 
Posts: 1731
#853650
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Untitled46.png
Heres a quick one (X be as harsh as you need
EDIT:
imageedit-185-2184232401.jpg
Heres another one (:
EDIT #2
imageedit-188-8129919658.jpg
And another one :D
Untitled49.jpg
(^open in new tab, its quite big)

Edited at February 18, 2021 02:20 PM by ~Pegasus Lane~
The Official Art Critique Forum February 19, 2021 04:10 PM


Pegasus Lane
 
Posts: 1731
#854703
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Heres another one XD Open in new tab, its quite large

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