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The Old Gods
11:43:03 Void Malign
Supposedly, when the person was diagnosed. It's a typo
Chromatic
11:41:34 Chrome/Prism/Rainy
Wait, is that when diabetes originally became a diagnosis, or on one person? xD
The Old Gods
11:37:22 Void Malign
"The initial diagnosis of diabetes was made 147 years ago."

Found the vampire.
Barbury Estates
11:15:36 Amelia
gosh dang It I forgot I don't have premium
Angels angels
11:14:55 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Pheezy
You can pm me :)
pandemoniu_m
11:13:52 pheezy
Can someone PM me and help me review matches for this girl?
-HEE Click-

I have 4 matches but I don't know if theyre passable and the person who i was supposed to get a straw from hasnt been active so Im starting to get desperate :,)
Angels angels
11:13:44 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lol
That one is pretty easy
Rainbow
11:13:19 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
I was going to ask what a double white was, lol!
Barbury Estates
11:13:03 Amelia
double premium white foal whoops
Barbury Estates
11:12:45 Amelia
now to breed a double white premium foal X_x
Angels angels
11:12:10 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yay!
Barbury Estates
11:11:50 Amelia
I did it!
Niallator Acres
11:05:51 Ivy - Niallator side
back
Angels angels
11:03:28 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
Got one right here
Angels angels
11:02:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Amelia
Yep they do lol
Barbury Estates
11:01:52 Amelia
do ChCh horses exist? I cant find any for a quest ?
Crestwood Eq.
11:01:32 Ivy / poison ivy
I'll be right back guys!
Crestwood Eq.
11:01:19 Ivy / poison ivy
Min <3

Im ok! We had a fun swim practice yesterday! Hopefully we will have fun practices today and tomorrow. (We are going on a two week break T-T). My birthday is monday, so i'm excited about that! And, one of my cousins and his band, MOAB, are making an album! They are pretty much rock, and I'm hardcore pop. But, their latest single is AMAZING! I'm not kidding! my cousin is the lead guitarist.
Minerva
10:57:38 Min
Hi Ivy! I'm good thank you- just can't decide whether I can be arsed to go for a hack tonight haha. How are you?
Crestwood Eq.
10:56:19 Ivy / poison ivy
Yes, pinecone is adorable

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The Old Gods
11:43:03 Void Malign
Supposedly, when the person was diagnosed. It's a typo
Chromatic
11:41:34 Chrome/Prism/Rainy
Wait, is that when diabetes originally became a diagnosis, or on one person? xD
The Old Gods
11:37:22 Void Malign
"The initial diagnosis of diabetes was made 147 years ago."

Found the vampire.
Barbury Estates
11:15:36 Amelia
gosh dang It I forgot I don't have premium
Angels angels
11:14:55 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Pheezy
You can pm me :)
pandemoniu_m
11:13:52 pheezy
Can someone PM me and help me review matches for this girl?
-HEE Click-

I have 4 matches but I don't know if theyre passable and the person who i was supposed to get a straw from hasnt been active so Im starting to get desperate :,)
Angels angels
11:13:44 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Lol
That one is pretty easy
Rainbow
11:13:19 Rainy/Prism/Chrome
I was going to ask what a double white was, lol!
Barbury Estates
11:13:03 Amelia
double premium white foal whoops
Barbury Estates
11:12:45 Amelia
now to breed a double white premium foal X_x
Angels angels
11:12:10 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Yay!
Barbury Estates
11:11:50 Amelia
I did it!
Niallator Acres
11:05:51 Ivy - Niallator side
back
Angels angels
11:03:28 [1k+ brindles] Angel
-HEE Click-
Got one right here
Angels angels
11:02:34 [1k+ brindles] Angel
Amelia
Yep they do lol
Barbury Estates
11:01:52 Amelia
do ChCh horses exist? I cant find any for a quest ?
Crestwood Eq.
11:01:32 Ivy / poison ivy
I'll be right back guys!
Crestwood Eq.
11:01:19 Ivy / poison ivy
Min <3

Im ok! We had a fun swim practice yesterday! Hopefully we will have fun practices today and tomorrow. (We are going on a two week break T-T). My birthday is monday, so i'm excited about that! And, one of my cousins and his band, MOAB, are making an album! They are pretty much rock, and I'm hardcore pop. But, their latest single is AMAZING! I'm not kidding! my cousin is the lead guitarist.
Minerva
10:57:38 Min
Hi Ivy! I'm good thank you- just can't decide whether I can be arsed to go for a hack tonight haha. How are you?
Crestwood Eq.
10:56:19 Ivy / poison ivy
Yes, pinecone is adorable

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Art criticism March 31, 2024 02:53 PM


Sagebrush
 
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Looks incredible! I love the muscle definition. In my opinion,
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You need different shades of brown. Grey muzzle, maybe lighter orange/yellow around the points, like chest, armpit, flank, muzzle, etc. darker brown on the bony parts and over the back, on the withers, forehead, etc. Example
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Hair, you need more shading. It's really nice and detailed, but it's a bit strong. You can make the lighting a bit more dramatic over the whole horse, which will make it seem like it fits in better. Purple parts can be darkened (I would use a near black colour on soft light or overlay, and then smudge and blur it to get the desired effect). And then the yellow are the bright highlights, which I would make a similar colour to your backlight, so a bright red/purple. Make sure to do the shadow and highlights on seperate layers from the hair, using a clipping mask Hair idea
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Personally, I would also darken your current strands of hair a smidge, and redo some highlight strands with the shade you're currently using! I would also add some shadowy strands. (Not really sure how to describe this, sorry!
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Lighting, darken up the front of the horse because that's away from the light (but not too much because you need to still see the horse, I showed kind of where I would darken it using purple), and yellow is where I would add the lighting. Example of lighting I would do lighting similar to how I did my My firework piece I do lighting with add, overlay, or soflight and use an almost white colour on a seperate layer. Darkness I use almost black and either soft light or overlay. Blue is kinda where I'd position a shadow, and I choose a colour that's almost black and lower the opacity. I would add some more light where I added the white dot, to make it more dramatic.
Personally, I'd also make the eye a little bit bigger, as that's a central focus of the horses face.
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I love the vibe of this piece, the stock and the background work really well together and the horse really seems to be there! The patterns also turned out really nice, especially in the darker lighting! I can't wait to see how much more you improve in the future!
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Edit: forgot to mention, I would also blur the background a bit and add some vignette! And usually tobiano comes with a face marking, so that might help bring the piece together. Heres a very messy example of all the changes I've suggested implemented on the actual piece! https://i.ibb.co/9b1h0Ts/IMG-8191.png

Edited at March 31, 2024 03:18 PM by Sagebrush
Art criticism March 31, 2024 04:16 PM


Enoki Valley
 
Posts: 2295
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Sagebrush said:
Looks incredible! I love the muscle definition. In my opinion,
.
You need different shades of brown. Grey muzzle, maybe lighter orange/yellow around the points, like chest, armpit, flank, muzzle, etc. darker brown on the bony parts and over the back, on the withers, forehead, etc. Example
.
Hair, you need more shading. It's really nice and detailed, but it's a bit strong. You can make the lighting a bit more dramatic over the whole horse, which will make it seem like it fits in better. Purple parts can be darkened (I would use a near black colour on soft light or overlay, and then smudge and blur it to get the desired effect). And then the yellow are the bright highlights, which I would make a similar colour to your backlight, so a bright red/purple. Make sure to do the shadow and highlights on seperate layers from the hair, using a clipping mask Hair idea
.
Personally, I would also darken your current strands of hair a smidge, and redo some highlight strands with the shade you're currently using! I would also add some shadowy strands. (Not really sure how to describe this, sorry!
.
Lighting, darken up the front of the horse because that's away from the light (but not too much because you need to still see the horse, I showed kind of where I would darken it using purple), and yellow is where I would add the lighting. Example of lighting I would do lighting similar to how I did my My firework piece I do lighting with add, overlay, or soflight and use an almost white colour on a seperate layer. Darkness I use almost black and either soft light or overlay. Blue is kinda where I'd position a shadow, and I choose a colour that's almost black and lower the opacity. I would add some more light where I added the white dot, to make it more dramatic.
Personally, I'd also make the eye a little bit bigger, as that's a central focus of the horses face.
.
I love the vibe of this piece, the stock and the background work really well together and the horse really seems to be there! The patterns also turned out really nice, especially in the darker lighting! I can't wait to see how much more you improve in the future!
.
Edit: forgot to mention, I would also blur the background a bit and add some vignette! And usually tobiano comes with a face marking, so that might help bring the piece together. Heres a very messy example of all the changes I've suggested implemented on the actual piece! https://i.ibb.co/9b1h0Ts/IMG-8191.png


Wow. I'm a huge fan of your pieces and I love the improvements you have made - totally agree! I struggle with lighting so I will be doing a massive focus on it. Thanks for all the critique, I know I takes time. Will be taking this onboard!
Art criticism June 2, 2024 07:36 AM


Enoki Valley
 
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Just popping this up hoping for a bit more criticism. I am hoping I have taken on board some things lol. I think it's a solid improvement. If you have any input, thanks a bunch!
Art criticism June 2, 2024 09:39 AM


Sagebrush
 
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I love it!!! The soft flow of the hair, the lighting, everything is really well done.
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Problems I see is that I don't like the boots on the horse. I would've tried to cover this up with rocks or shadows or replaced the legs with different stock/done a tack removal.
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Second, there's something missing to this piece. Unfortunately I can't put my finger on it, but it's making it feel a little incomplete, hopefully some other artist can help me figure out what it is!
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Overall extremely well done,, I can't find much else to critique!

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