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Whispering Wood Barn

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193 Svenned WWW TBLB:
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Would anyone like to help purchase these horses to give them a good home annnnndddd help me with funds to buy a sven gnome ^^
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Dash and Duchess

11:33:03 T1 Artist, W+ seller

In desperate need of a Tesoro straw!!

Invertia

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Selling a whole bunch of cheap horses!

Aquamarine

11:16:22

I need a 3 month upgrade

Alaskan Anchor

11:12:15

In need of a 1 month upgrade

Fierce Passion

11:12:12 ShayShay

iso upgrade 1 month

Christmas Karma

10:41:28

OK I'm looking for an upgrade again

Wild_Potatoes

10:34:42 Potato

2,000$ EEE horses at my island. Hurry and buy them before I release them

Summit Stables

10:34:00 Summit

3yo svenned WWW SH stallion for sale for 600k. #15 ABLB sired. Has amazing potential. Was not prioritized at all on RO and still produced an EEE and EEW foal out of his only two breedings. -HEE Click-

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Whispering Wood Barn

11:35:56 ~Whispy~

Dash and Duchess

11:33:03 T1 Artist, W+ seller

In desperate need of a Tesoro straw!!

Invertia

11:28:18 Tia

-HEE Click-

Selling a whole bunch of cheap horses!

Aquamarine

11:16:22

I need a 3 month upgrade

Alaskan Anchor

11:12:15

In need of a 1 month upgrade

Fierce Passion

11:12:12 ShayShay

iso upgrade 1 month

Christmas Karma

10:41:28

OK I'm looking for an upgrade again

Wild_Potatoes

10:34:42 Potato

2,000$ EEE horses at my island. Hurry and buy them before I release them

Summit Stables

10:34:00 Summit

Peacock Estate

10:33:13 Lily

-HEE Click-
Peacock for sale, anyone want him before I release?

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

Former Stable

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

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January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

Wings Of Glory

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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

Casanova

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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

Former Stable

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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! Im just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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