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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

Year: 193 Season: Spring

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Morning Frost, but Warming

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12:04:58 :)Chase

Thank you again :)

12:04:52 Aspen/Tea Slaveyy

I'm very excited to breed approval this handsome stud tomorrow ^^
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12:04:31 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Nah I don't think they need an item. I don't see anywhere that it doesn't balance

12:02:53 :)Chase

How about these two? Same deal
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12:02:13 Wilder/Wild/Sun

Was the coding for palette headers changed? Because I can't make them work.

12:01:44 Ivy / poison ivy

angel

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12:00:54 :)Chase

Thank you! :)

11:59:17 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Mv glass for sure

11:58:43 :)Chase

These two produced a WWW a while ago, but I don't know if I want to take any chances. Should I use a glass or something?
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11:54:25 Ceci / (Call me) AL

Dont think so. Sales went down not long ago

Looking Glass Stable

11:52:12 IA Glass 👋

Playing pretty risky with the links.
Has the game-breaking glitch been fixed??

Painted View Ranch

11:51:28 PVR Paint/Painted

I hope you guys can make it

FireStallionStables

11:48:14 FSS/Fire

I don't know why it says nut in front of that

FireStallionStables

11:47:37 FSS/Fire

nut the two year olds are looking really pretty too
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but the mares are looking even better
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11:45:13 Eagle

thanks!

FireStallionStables

11:44:02 FSS/Fire

the one year olds I'm drooling over
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11:42:52 Merry

Eagle - with some luck, yes

Wisteria Run Farm

11:42:43 Solar/Ria

With the right pairing and luck

11:41:57 Eagle

can he produce apricot?
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Glacier Bay Cove

11:39:46 Arctic Katz

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12:04:58 :)Chase

Thank you again :)

12:04:52 Aspen/Tea Slaveyy

I'm very excited to breed approval this handsome stud tomorrow ^^
-HEE Click-

12:04:31 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Nah I don't think they need an item. I don't see anywhere that it doesn't balance

12:02:53 :)Chase

How about these two? Same deal
-HEE Click-

12:02:13 Wilder/Wild/Sun

Was the coding for palette headers changed? Because I can't make them work.

12:01:44 Ivy / poison ivy

angel

-Click-

12:00:54 :)Chase

Thank you! :)

11:59:17 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Mv glass for sure

11:58:43 :)Chase

These two produced a WWW a while ago, but I don't know if I want to take any chances. Should I use a glass or something?
-HEE Click-

11:54:25 Ceci / (Call me) AL

Dont think so. Sales went down not long ago

Looking Glass Stable

11:52:12 IA Glass 👋

Playing pretty risky with the links.
Has the game-breaking glitch been fixed??

Painted View Ranch

11:51:28 PVR Paint/Painted

I hope you guys can make it

FireStallionStables

11:48:14 FSS/Fire

I don't know why it says nut in front of that

FireStallionStables

11:47:37 FSS/Fire

nut the two year olds are looking really pretty too
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
but the mares are looking even better
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

11:45:13 Eagle

thanks!

FireStallionStables

11:44:02 FSS/Fire

the one year olds I'm drooling over
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

11:42:52 Merry

Eagle - with some luck, yes

Wisteria Run Farm

11:42:43 Solar/Ria

With the right pairing and luck

11:41:57 Eagle

can he produce apricot?
-HEE Click-

Glacier Bay Cove

11:39:46 Arctic Katz

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January 29, 2023 11:14 AM

ShiningStar Stables

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This is one of my more recent pieces, and I want some critique on it! I really want to improve, so rip it apart!

January 29, 2023 06:25 PM

Rivendell Steeds

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Okay, so my major critique with this is the hair. White horses never have black hair. I recommend choosing a dark color from the horse's body and using that as the base color for the hair.

January 29, 2023 07:09 PM

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I know some great mane tutorials I can send you if you'd like. I've seen white horses with black hair on this game, I think the mane just has too many strands and not enough movement. I'd love to share the tutorials that helped me. Just PM me!

January 29, 2023 07:17 PM

Bellbird Estate

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I agree here

Rivendell Steeds said:

Okay, so my major critique with this is the hair. White horses never have black hair. I recommend choosing a dark color from the horse's body and using that as the base color for the hair.

also, I would lower the saturation so the horse doesn't have a green hue, since it's standing over ice not grass.

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