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Pretty Pony Pageant
August Show:

- Cross Country
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- Working Equitation *
- Get Spotted
~ Flower Festival
~ Beach Ride

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Free to Enter!
Win EBs!

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Eagle Creek
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WWW AA filly for sale
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T&K Ranch
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30 Minutes left in my dispersal sale! Everything going cheap, some EWE without any bids yet! SH/ISH
Skyrim
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WWE rated RID stallion for sale at 200k. Multiple EEE and EWE producer.
Port Royal Equines
11:19:23 Lvl 6+ Gelds 4 Sale
-HEE Click-
Geldings and Bravery Mares for sale!

-HEE Click-
Grullo feshman straw forum. Please help me test him!

-HEE Click-
Seal brown ABLB straw forum. x5 WWW producer.

-HEE Click-
Shiny EWW broods for Y194. Including multi WWW producer.
Hotel California
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Barn Clearout
EEEs
WEE TB Mare
Chimera
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WWE SH Stallion
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EEE Mares
SD W Jumping stallions
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critique/pricing March 4, 2019 11:14 AM


Wings Of Glory
 
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current pricing 45k
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Edited at March 4, 2019 01:42 PM by Wings Of Glory
critique/pricing March 4, 2019 12:12 PM

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I think that's beautiful! Personally, I think you're undercharging for your work, I'd say you could go up to maybe 80k for now? I would work on connecting the horse to the background more, perhaps using a shadow or drawing grass around his feet, but your work on the horse itself is lovely.
critique/pricing March 4, 2019 12:22 PM


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Icicle Ridge Acres said:
I think that's beautiful! Personally, I think you're undercharging for your work, I'd say you could go up to maybe 80k for now? I would work on connecting the horse to the background more, perhaps using a shadow or drawing grass around his feet, but your work on the horse itself is lovely.

thank you^-^ i really appreciate it
critique/pricing March 4, 2019 01:43 PM


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for the white lines they need to really be on the side of the horse where the source of light is coming from the lines under the body look a bit off
and with the background I feel like the horse needs deeper shadowing under the jawline and on the legs rump etc
just some opinions CX
critique/pricing March 4, 2019 01:52 PM


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Angel's angels said:
for the white lines they need to really be on the side of the horse where the source of light is coming from the lines under the body look a bit off
and with the background I feel like the horse needs deeper shadowing under the jawline and on the legs rump etc
just some opinions CX


ooh actually i needed this thank you<3
critique/pricing March 4, 2019 03:22 PM


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How do you add markings that precise? It gorgeous!
critique/pricing March 4, 2019 04:10 PM


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Shadow Estates said:
How do you add markings that precise? It gorgeous!

lasso tool then i do the markings with a white brush and set the layer to color and then duplicate and set that one to soft light and if it needs it another then duplicate the soft light layer;) you can color balance the markings through the layers if they need it aswell
critique/pricing March 5, 2019 10:04 AM


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Thank you! And may I ask one more question?
critique/pricing March 5, 2019 10:16 AM


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Shadow Estates said:
Thank you! And may I ask one more question?

yeah go ahead:D

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