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Whiskeystar Farm

11:03:44 Whiskey

I have 260k total so we'll see how far I can get with that haha

Eagle Creek

11:03:39 Eagle

I have the straws I need for Ro but I'm sort for the sven I need so I'm just going to wait till September to use it.

Canterwood Acres

11:03:17 Canter

ugh I am so not ready I need more barns and I don't have the ebs

Glacier Bay Cove

11:02:16 Arctic Katz

However I am like Whiskey, being totally unprepared for the next capture party

Angels angels

11:02:15 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I need about 350k more ebs but other than that I have everything I need. I also will be getting 200k of that on RO from selling an embryo and fr fodder

Whiskeystar Farm

11:01:33 Whiskey

The last few ROs when I've put a lot of thought into my matches they've all bombed so I might just wing it lol

Gypsy Family Farm

11:01:12

Now that the Championships have run, can I fire my riders that will retire and replace them, or does that take away the awards?

Glacier Bay Cove

11:00:13 Arctic Katz

I am halfway done with my preparations for RO

Angels angels

10:58:06 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Whiskey
Well you better get prepared XD It will be here before you know it!

Whiskeystar Farm

10:57:23 Whiskey

RO can definitely NOT hurry up lmao I'm so unprepared

Solstheim Manor

10:56:38 Sol

ahh, thank you!

Angels angels

10:56:16 [1k+ brindles] Angel

RO can hurry the hell up

Glacier Bay Cove

10:56:07 Arctic Katz

Stables randomly drop off items and other stables can select what item they want to get

Whiskeystar Farm

10:55:55 Whiskey

Sol, it's in the games section :)

Glacier Bay Cove

10:55:08 Arctic Katz

It's a place to find items

Solstheim Manor

10:54:02 Sol

i haven't been here in forever -- what is the hidden falls?

Glacier Bay Cove

10:52:27 Arctic Katz

Wondering what my next find will be, from the hidden falls

Equine Elite Stables

10:50:05 Kay

Fawn
I feel you, Mv is my worst enemy in breeding at the moment lmao

Glacier Bay Cove

10:49:47 Arctic Katz

Letting my cats have some outdoor time, with direct supervision

Equine Elite Stables

10:49:24 Kay

SF & Angel
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Whiskeystar Farm

11:03:44 Whiskey

I have 260k total so we'll see how far I can get with that haha

Eagle Creek

11:03:39 Eagle

I have the straws I need for Ro but I'm sort for the sven I need so I'm just going to wait till September to use it.

Canterwood Acres

11:03:17 Canter

ugh I am so not ready I need more barns and I don't have the ebs

Glacier Bay Cove

11:02:16 Arctic Katz

However I am like Whiskey, being totally unprepared for the next capture party

Angels angels

11:02:15 [1k+ brindles] Angel

I need about 350k more ebs but other than that I have everything I need. I also will be getting 200k of that on RO from selling an embryo and fr fodder

Whiskeystar Farm

11:01:33 Whiskey

The last few ROs when I've put a lot of thought into my matches they've all bombed so I might just wing it lol

Gypsy Family Farm

11:01:12

Now that the Championships have run, can I fire my riders that will retire and replace them, or does that take away the awards?

Glacier Bay Cove

11:00:13 Arctic Katz

I am halfway done with my preparations for RO

Angels angels

10:58:06 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Whiskey
Well you better get prepared XD It will be here before you know it!

Whiskeystar Farm

10:57:23 Whiskey

RO can definitely NOT hurry up lmao I'm so unprepared

Solstheim Manor

10:56:38 Sol

ahh, thank you!

Angels angels

10:56:16 [1k+ brindles] Angel

RO can hurry the hell up

Glacier Bay Cove

10:56:07 Arctic Katz

Stables randomly drop off items and other stables can select what item they want to get

Whiskeystar Farm

10:55:55 Whiskey

Sol, it's in the games section :)

Glacier Bay Cove

10:55:08 Arctic Katz

It's a place to find items

Solstheim Manor

10:54:02 Sol

i haven't been here in forever -- what is the hidden falls?

Glacier Bay Cove

10:52:27 Arctic Katz

Wondering what my next find will be, from the hidden falls

Equine Elite Stables

10:50:05 Kay

Fawn
I feel you, Mv is my worst enemy in breeding at the moment lmao

Glacier Bay Cove

10:49:47 Arctic Katz

Letting my cats have some outdoor time, with direct supervision

Equine Elite Stables

10:49:24 Kay

SF & Angel
Thank youu

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

Former Stable

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

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January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

Wings Of Glory

Posts: 2670
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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

Casanova

Posts: 1522
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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

Former Stable

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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! Im just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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