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Sport Pony Island
09:35:48 Solstice
Penta, actually, i'm not trying to say your wrong, but, after the pool/sea going under the AC, can get you a cold.. But, basically, that's it! :3
Sweet Valley
09:34:58 Anna/Jewel
And I get rashes from food I am allergic to. I a VERY allergic to bee stings but I have managed to avoid them this year and last year
Pentagram Stables
09:34:21 Penta - KNNs
It's the wrong time of year, for colds, was my point
Sport Pony Island
09:32:53 Solstice
Anna, same bro..
Sweet Valley
09:32:06 Anna/Jewel
Well if you look like it's a cold. I look like I am sick with allergies;
Runny Nose
Watery Eyes
Sneezing
sometimes coughing.


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You gotta admit that sounds like a cold.
Pentagram Stables
09:30:59 Penta - KNNs
This time of year, so many people suffer from allergies. Hard to believe they would confuse sneezing with a cold..
CWY country
09:30:16 C
Sport, Stable> Stable activities> Your account> Set your nicknames.
Sweet Valley
09:30:14 Anna/Jewel
Sport-

Stable>Stable Activities>Your Account>Manage nicknames
Alpine Acres
09:30:10 Lily/Alpine
Stable>Stable Activities>Your Account>Stable Activity>Set your nicknames
Sport Pony Island
09:28:34 Solstice
Yall, how do you do the like.. Ehh, well, sweet valley's 'nickname' is Anna... How do you create that nickname
Sport Pony Island
09:27:46 Solstice
Penta, it was me who baked it.. I used eggs, flour, sugar, salt, apple, maple syrup, cinnamon, butter and water :)
Pentagram Stables
09:25:39 Penta - KNNs
oopps...that was for someone else...sorry
Sport Pony Island
09:25:38 Solstice
I'm allergic to pollen, and now whenever i go out, i start sneezing, and everyone , apart from my family, look at me like i have a cold when it's so hot outside
Sweet Valley
09:25:05 Anna/Jewel
Pents- I didn't make the apple cake lol
Pentagram Stables
09:24:44 Penta - KNNs
Anna - so...what did you use for the apple cake you just made ?
Sweet Valley
09:22:49 Anna/Jewel
Oh lol. Well I haven't baked too much lately cuz we haven't gotten flour in a while lol. My mom and sister can't have it and I can't bake very well with Gluten Free flour and I am awful allergic to almond flour so yeah
Sport Pony Island
09:20:58 Solstice
Haha... Same.. Every 2 days, i bake a cake for my family, and i need to stand up at 5am to cook it before 8am, so my parents and brother wake up, and see and smell the cake
MakeEm Fancy
09:20:23 Ally 💜
Rude but so pretty
-HEE Click-
Sweet Valley
09:19:49 Anna/Jewel
Ooo sounds yummy! I am known as the "Apple Pie Queen" By all of our relatives and also known as "Shoofly Pie Queen" too lol. I am the "Baker of the Family"
Sport Pony Island
09:18:35 Solstice
How are yall doing? I just baked a apple cake, and it smells so good :3

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Sport Pony Island
09:35:48 Solstice
Penta, actually, i'm not trying to say your wrong, but, after the pool/sea going under the AC, can get you a cold.. But, basically, that's it! :3
Sweet Valley
09:34:58 Anna/Jewel
And I get rashes from food I am allergic to. I a VERY allergic to bee stings but I have managed to avoid them this year and last year
Pentagram Stables
09:34:21 Penta - KNNs
It's the wrong time of year, for colds, was my point
Sport Pony Island
09:32:53 Solstice
Anna, same bro..
Sweet Valley
09:32:06 Anna/Jewel
Well if you look like it's a cold. I look like I am sick with allergies;
Runny Nose
Watery Eyes
Sneezing
sometimes coughing.


---------
You gotta admit that sounds like a cold.
Pentagram Stables
09:30:59 Penta - KNNs
This time of year, so many people suffer from allergies. Hard to believe they would confuse sneezing with a cold..
CWY country
09:30:16 C
Sport, Stable> Stable activities> Your account> Set your nicknames.
Sweet Valley
09:30:14 Anna/Jewel
Sport-

Stable>Stable Activities>Your Account>Manage nicknames
Alpine Acres
09:30:10 Lily/Alpine
Stable>Stable Activities>Your Account>Stable Activity>Set your nicknames
Sport Pony Island
09:28:34 Solstice
Yall, how do you do the like.. Ehh, well, sweet valley's 'nickname' is Anna... How do you create that nickname
Sport Pony Island
09:27:46 Solstice
Penta, it was me who baked it.. I used eggs, flour, sugar, salt, apple, maple syrup, cinnamon, butter and water :)
Pentagram Stables
09:25:39 Penta - KNNs
oopps...that was for someone else...sorry
Sport Pony Island
09:25:38 Solstice
I'm allergic to pollen, and now whenever i go out, i start sneezing, and everyone , apart from my family, look at me like i have a cold when it's so hot outside
Sweet Valley
09:25:05 Anna/Jewel
Pents- I didn't make the apple cake lol
Pentagram Stables
09:24:44 Penta - KNNs
Anna - so...what did you use for the apple cake you just made ?
Sweet Valley
09:22:49 Anna/Jewel
Oh lol. Well I haven't baked too much lately cuz we haven't gotten flour in a while lol. My mom and sister can't have it and I can't bake very well with Gluten Free flour and I am awful allergic to almond flour so yeah
Sport Pony Island
09:20:58 Solstice
Haha... Same.. Every 2 days, i bake a cake for my family, and i need to stand up at 5am to cook it before 8am, so my parents and brother wake up, and see and smell the cake
MakeEm Fancy
09:20:23 Ally 💜
Rude but so pretty
-HEE Click-
Sweet Valley
09:19:49 Anna/Jewel
Ooo sounds yummy! I am known as the "Apple Pie Queen" By all of our relatives and also known as "Shoofly Pie Queen" too lol. I am the "Baker of the Family"
Sport Pony Island
09:18:35 Solstice
How are yall doing? I just baked a apple cake, and it smells so good :3

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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