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Just Chaos
11:13:27 AL
Hi Myth :)
Alpine Acres
11:12:49 Lily/Alpine
Thanks to both of you, I'll pm you AL :)
Mythological
11:12:04 Crowley
Hullo Ceci
Mythological
11:11:49 Crowley
Ask away.
Just Chaos
11:11:47 AL
Sure Lily
Alpine Acres
11:11:31 Lily/Alpine
Would someone kindly help me with a question regarding embryos?
Mythological
11:11:17 Crowley
McFossil!
Crestwood Eq.
11:10:26 Ivy / poison ivy
hi.
MC Ace
11:01:28 McFossil
Myth!
Mythological
10:51:57 Crowley
Sorry Rain
Glacier Bay Cove
10:50:55 Arctic Katz
Bad day, Kelan?
Rain Plains
10:50:21 Kelan/Rain
Today can go stuck an egg
Glacier Bay Cove
10:45:53 Arctic Katz
Adding mammograms to the list of things that I REALLY hate
Mythological
10:44:47 Crowley
Oooh cool
ShiningStar Stables
10:43:41 Chey / Star
Hiya Myth šŸ‘‹

Echo Creek made that
Mythological
10:42:29 Crowley
Who made Monody's art?
Mythological
10:41:01 Crowley
Hi Chey
ShiningStar Stables
10:32:52 Chey / Star
I just recently got art for these two and I love both pieces!
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Rising Stars Stable
10:07:49 Willow ~ AA Breeder
*know
Rising Stars Stable
10:07:42 Willow ~ AA Breeder
Green
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Just Chaos
11:13:27 AL
Hi Myth :)
Alpine Acres
11:12:49 Lily/Alpine
Thanks to both of you, I'll pm you AL :)
Mythological
11:12:04 Crowley
Hullo Ceci
Mythological
11:11:49 Crowley
Ask away.
Just Chaos
11:11:47 AL
Sure Lily
Alpine Acres
11:11:31 Lily/Alpine
Would someone kindly help me with a question regarding embryos?
Mythological
11:11:17 Crowley
McFossil!
Crestwood Eq.
11:10:26 Ivy / poison ivy
hi.
MC Ace
11:01:28 McFossil
Myth!
Mythological
10:51:57 Crowley
Sorry Rain
Glacier Bay Cove
10:50:55 Arctic Katz
Bad day, Kelan?
Rain Plains
10:50:21 Kelan/Rain
Today can go stuck an egg
Glacier Bay Cove
10:45:53 Arctic Katz
Adding mammograms to the list of things that I REALLY hate
Mythological
10:44:47 Crowley
Oooh cool
ShiningStar Stables
10:43:41 Chey / Star
Hiya Myth šŸ‘‹

Echo Creek made that
Mythological
10:42:29 Crowley
Who made Monody's art?
Mythological
10:41:01 Crowley
Hi Chey
ShiningStar Stables
10:32:52 Chey / Star
I just recently got art for these two and I love both pieces!
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-
Rising Stars Stable
10:07:49 Willow ~ AA Breeder
*know
Rising Stars Stable
10:07:42 Willow ~ AA Breeder
Green
I now, it's insane. I cleaned the whole house last week

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Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

Former Stable
 
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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!
This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:49 PM


Wings Of Glory
 
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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 10:58 PM


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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:


$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.


Yeah good point! IĀ’m just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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