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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

Year: 193 Season: Fall

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Nightingales Ridge

02:54:40 Issy

Hi Loonyy

02:01:20 Loony/Loony Tune

Hey chat, How are ya’ll

01:16:07 Pera/ peral

12:21:26 pheezy

their art is gorgeous kiwi :0

12:13:07 Kiwi

It's so nerve-wracking waiting for the wk 4's.
I've got these two
-HEE Click-
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12:12:04 Fantasy | Fanta

I have to log off now, bye everyone! Have a great day!

12:11:49 Fantasy | Fanta

DD
Oh absolutely :')

Dash and Duchess

12:10:18 DD | ~Squizard~

Fantasy, thank you! I'm really begging RF TvT

12:09:33 Fantasy | Fanta

DD
Thank you! Same to you. I know what high hopes you have for your girl, I'll be sad with you if she doesn't do well :P

Dash and Duchess

12:08:30 DD | ~Squizard~

Fantasy, Ooo Zz and Appy! Good luck!

12:06:58 Fantasy | Fanta

DD and KPH
Same here >_<
-HEE Click-

Dash and Duchess

12:05:49 DD | ~Squizard~

Blaze, It's definitely been an adjustment lol, but good luck with gifyu! I used to always use postimg so it's been a struggle xD

12:04:20 Blaze

DD ~ I will have to check it out, I miss imgbb lol <3

Dash and Duchess

12:02:58 DD | ~Squizard~

KPH, Ooo good luck!! She's beautiful *^*
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Blaze, it is! I recommend it! <3

12:00:48 Blaze

DD <3
I heard Gifyu is good! And similar to imgbb

11:59:26 Rapcoon | Jester

DD
same >,>
-HEE Click-

Dash and Duchess

11:56:09 DD | ~Squizard~

Blaze, Ooof! That sucks >.> if you want to try and switch gifyu works great! <3

11:55:32 Blaze

Lens dump is making my want to jump off a cliff right now omfggg

Dash and Duchess

11:55:26 DD | ~Squizard~

Ooo i am getting so nervous for 4s coming up >.<
-HEE Click-

Glittercorn Magic

11:33:47 Diva`s Glitter Cave

There's copper ,golden, blood bay, mahogany and light bay

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Nightingales Ridge

02:54:40 Issy

Hi Loonyy

02:01:20 Loony/Loony Tune

Hey chat, How are ya’ll

01:16:07 Pera/ peral

12:21:26 pheezy

their art is gorgeous kiwi :0

12:13:07 Kiwi

It's so nerve-wracking waiting for the wk 4's.
I've got these two
-HEE Click-
-HEE Click-

12:12:04 Fantasy | Fanta

I have to log off now, bye everyone! Have a great day!

12:11:49 Fantasy | Fanta

DD
Oh absolutely :')

Dash and Duchess

12:10:18 DD | ~Squizard~

Fantasy, thank you! I'm really begging RF TvT

12:09:33 Fantasy | Fanta

DD
Thank you! Same to you. I know what high hopes you have for your girl, I'll be sad with you if she doesn't do well :P

Dash and Duchess

12:08:30 DD | ~Squizard~

Fantasy, Ooo Zz and Appy! Good luck!

12:06:58 Fantasy | Fanta

DD and KPH
Same here >_<
-HEE Click-

Dash and Duchess

12:05:49 DD | ~Squizard~

Blaze, It's definitely been an adjustment lol, but good luck with gifyu! I used to always use postimg so it's been a struggle xD

12:04:20 Blaze

DD ~ I will have to check it out, I miss imgbb lol <3

Dash and Duchess

12:02:58 DD | ~Squizard~

KPH, Ooo good luck!! She's beautiful *^*
-
Blaze, it is! I recommend it! <3

12:00:48 Blaze

DD <3
I heard Gifyu is good! And similar to imgbb

11:59:26 Rapcoon | Jester

DD
same >,>
-HEE Click-

Dash and Duchess

11:56:09 DD | ~Squizard~

Blaze, Ooof! That sucks >.> if you want to try and switch gifyu works great! <3

11:55:32 Blaze

Lens dump is making my want to jump off a cliff right now omfggg

Dash and Duchess

11:55:26 DD | ~Squizard~

Ooo i am getting so nervous for 4s coming up >.<
-HEE Click-

Glittercorn Magic

11:33:47 Diva`s Glitter Cave

There's copper ,golden, blood bay, mahogany and light bay

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July 31, 2018 01:01 AM

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https://s20.postimg.cc/q4cmq04nx/EC613344-_A996-4_F85-_B5_DD-7_B923095_A187.png

Wondering what I could do next time to improve.

I know the markings could use some work on the edges to make them a bit more realistic, but other thoughts?

July 31, 2018 01:03 AM

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Try making the edges of the hooves disappear into the grass. Right now, it looks like the horse is trotting on grass patterned concrete.

July 31, 2018 01:13 AM

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Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

July 31, 2018 04:08 AM

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RavenHale said:
Alright, is this any better?
https://s20.postimg.cc/fpbk1n34d/3_ECD0_EC1-_B3_AF-4_F07-9_C9_B-_A5_D2652_E3_E9_C.png

Yes it looks more like the the horse is part of the image

July 31, 2018 04:25 AM

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You could make the hair that you have drawn on thinner so they look more natural, in the tail especially they are quite thick and they dont taper at the end like normal hair does.

Still a very good piece though :)

July 31, 2018 09:20 AM

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After you finish the markings, use the smudging tool at about 50% with a small soft brush (around 2px) then go along the side of the marking pulling in an out slightly. It will make the marking look more blended into the horse instead of a sudden stop/beginning. Also the mane by the cheek looks short, I'd suggest making it slightly longer. Other than that, very nice :D

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