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10:39:10 Gold

ooo pretty :)

10:36:03 Rose

Thank you <3

Glacier Bay Cove

10:35:40 Arctic Katz

Very pretty

10:32:51 Rose

Pretty markings -HEE Click- <3

10:03:23 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Well we will see what happens monday then lol
Her mom is super strong in jumping so hopefully that passed on

10:01:57 Lily/Alpine

Echo, I think T3 is a good fit :)

10:01:32 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Mo
Yeah I have been keeping an eye on him but he needs more training

10:00:41 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Fawn
Yeah that is another reason I am still kind of bouncing around on her. Her week 8 is monday though

10:00:33 Ceci / (Call me) AL

I dont have an issue with it depending on w8 :)

10:00:15 Mo

Angel
There's this guy
-HEE Click-
but he hasn't trained enough to really see str/weakness

09:59:06 [1k+ brindles] Angel

What do you think AL
Do you think it is good enough you could consider letting me breed her to him? Or is it not worth the risk? Lol
-HEE Click-

09:59:04 Fawn

She went up Wk 4 so her Wk 8 would determine that

09:58:59 Ceci / (Call me) AL

If your mare is strong in jumping it doesnt look horrible

09:58:06 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Fawn
But does she cover him enough?

09:57:42 Fawn

Ely, they posted a link directly to their art shop :)

09:57:14 Ceci / (Call me) AL

I meant more that XC strengths are difficult to get away from LOL

09:57:08 anti gen ai

Cant even with G1 KNNs because you never know whatll happen

09:57:01 Echo | River

Here's some links for the art, stay at tier 3 or go down?
-Click-
-Click-

09:56:40 Fawn

Samurai isn't a bad choice actually. He's high up the DLB and he covers her weaknesses

09:56:36 [1k+ brindles] Angel

AL
Its dressage I am having an issue with lol

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10:39:10 Gold

ooo pretty :)

10:36:03 Rose

Thank you <3

Glacier Bay Cove

10:35:40 Arctic Katz

Very pretty

10:32:51 Rose

Pretty markings -HEE Click- <3

10:03:23 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Well we will see what happens monday then lol
Her mom is super strong in jumping so hopefully that passed on

10:01:57 Lily/Alpine

Echo, I think T3 is a good fit :)

10:01:32 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Mo
Yeah I have been keeping an eye on him but he needs more training

10:00:41 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Fawn
Yeah that is another reason I am still kind of bouncing around on her. Her week 8 is monday though

10:00:33 Ceci / (Call me) AL

I dont have an issue with it depending on w8 :)

10:00:15 Mo

Angel
There's this guy
-HEE Click-
but he hasn't trained enough to really see str/weakness

09:59:06 [1k+ brindles] Angel

What do you think AL
Do you think it is good enough you could consider letting me breed her to him? Or is it not worth the risk? Lol
-HEE Click-

09:59:04 Fawn

She went up Wk 4 so her Wk 8 would determine that

09:58:59 Ceci / (Call me) AL

If your mare is strong in jumping it doesnt look horrible

09:58:06 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Fawn
But does she cover him enough?

09:57:42 Fawn

Ely, they posted a link directly to their art shop :)

09:57:14 Ceci / (Call me) AL

I meant more that XC strengths are difficult to get away from LOL

09:57:08 anti gen ai

Cant even with G1 KNNs because you never know whatll happen

09:57:01 Echo | River

Here's some links for the art, stay at tier 3 or go down?
-Click-
-Click-

09:56:40 Fawn

Samurai isn't a bad choice actually. He's high up the DLB and he covers her weaknesses

09:56:36 [1k+ brindles] Angel

AL
Its dressage I am having an issue with lol

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January 29, 2023 11:14 AM

ShiningStar Stables

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This is one of my more recent pieces, and I want some critique on it! I really want to improve, so rip it apart!

January 29, 2023 06:25 PM

Rivendell Steeds

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Okay, so my major critique with this is the hair. White horses never have black hair. I recommend choosing a dark color from the horse's body and using that as the base color for the hair.

January 29, 2023 07:09 PM

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I know some great mane tutorials I can send you if you'd like. I've seen white horses with black hair on this game, I think the mane just has too many strands and not enough movement. I'd love to share the tutorials that helped me. Just PM me!

January 29, 2023 07:17 PM

Bellbird Estate

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I agree here

Rivendell Steeds said:

Okay, so my major critique with this is the hair. White horses never have black hair. I recommend choosing a dark color from the horse's body and using that as the base color for the hair.

also, I would lower the saturation so the horse doesn't have a green hue, since it's standing over ice not grass.

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