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 Lucky
08:36:07 luvky
Ari
Rerolled her off snowflake appy (no clue why, i was just in a gamblingish mood hahah)
But yes! hoping i can snag some sort of item for her muma next RO

Ahh yeah bout the same over here. Exams are coming up and there's a fair bit of pressure but i'm managing
Sleepwalker Centre
08:35:07 Walker
Ally,
yeah!! he was basically not housetrained when I ended up with him, I had to keep him in my sight at all times or he would 100% make a mess somewhere for the first year at least

and ohh, that's an interesting mix! I love border collies, too
Dash and Duchess
08:34:46 DD | ~Squizard~
Luvky, Oooosges beautiful 🤩
MakeEm Fancy
08:34:13 Ally 💜
Oh yikes!
The Joker
08:33:58 Ari <3
Oh my gosh she's gorgeous! Aramis lines too, I love him <3

And I've been good! Busy and stressed but good things come from hard work :3
MakeEm Fancy
08:33:37 Ally 💜
My mom has a border collie and a Anatolian shepherd /Great Dane currently @Walker
Sleepwalker Centre
08:33:18 Walker
Ally,
it really is!! My first dachshund was a very weird rescue, I got him from somebody who "rescued" (this person wasn't really treating him much better) him from a wealthy woman who had something like 5-6 purebred small dogs of different breeds that she would leave alone all day while she was at work, letting them "go" inside the bathtube :/
The Joker
08:33:11 Ari <3
Thank you! Just hoping it takes first time around for my bank accounts' sake 😂
Lucky
08:33:00 luvky
I've been decent Ari, thanks for asking! Had a good ro too, my maiden girlie dropped a WWW :)
-HEE Click-
How have you been?
Dash and Duchess
08:32:36 DD | ~Squizard~
Arctic, yup! In T1 <3
Dash and Duchess
08:32:07 DD | ~Squizard~
Ari, he totally will!! Good luck!
Glacier Bay Cove
08:31:35 Arctic Katz
Does charm have an art gallery or shop
MakeEm Fancy
08:31:15 Ally 💜
Such a shame :( @Walker
Sleepwalker Centre
08:30:48 Walker
Ally,
that sounds very similar to how my dad ended up with some of his first rotties :c
The Joker
08:30:47 Ari <3
It really has :) how have you been?
Lucky
08:30:18 luvky
Hiya Ari, been a while huh haha
Dash and Duchess
08:29:40 DD | ~Squizard~
Luvky, Oh 100% >.> charm really is a miracle worker!
-
Arctic, thus is the lady with the charm arts!
-HEE Click-
MakeEm Fancy
08:29:18 Ally 💜
Im not sure on everything that happened but I think my dad rescued his from a guy that had him on a chain all the time. @Walker
Glacier Bay Cove
08:28:39 Arctic Katz
I want to see charm art
Sleepwalker Centre
08:28:21 Walker
Ally,
hey fancy that!! We had several, my dad has been rescuing them most of his life. Right now my parents have a gorgeous 3yo who is a bit of a handful but seems to have been treated fairly well before, as fair as rescues go!

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 Lucky
08:36:07 luvky
Ari
Rerolled her off snowflake appy (no clue why, i was just in a gamblingish mood hahah)
But yes! hoping i can snag some sort of item for her muma next RO

Ahh yeah bout the same over here. Exams are coming up and there's a fair bit of pressure but i'm managing
Sleepwalker Centre
08:35:07 Walker
Ally,
yeah!! he was basically not housetrained when I ended up with him, I had to keep him in my sight at all times or he would 100% make a mess somewhere for the first year at least

and ohh, that's an interesting mix! I love border collies, too
Dash and Duchess
08:34:46 DD | ~Squizard~
Luvky, Oooosges beautiful 🤩
MakeEm Fancy
08:34:13 Ally 💜
Oh yikes!
The Joker
08:33:58 Ari <3
Oh my gosh she's gorgeous! Aramis lines too, I love him <3

And I've been good! Busy and stressed but good things come from hard work :3
MakeEm Fancy
08:33:37 Ally 💜
My mom has a border collie and a Anatolian shepherd /Great Dane currently @Walker
Sleepwalker Centre
08:33:18 Walker
Ally,
it really is!! My first dachshund was a very weird rescue, I got him from somebody who "rescued" (this person wasn't really treating him much better) him from a wealthy woman who had something like 5-6 purebred small dogs of different breeds that she would leave alone all day while she was at work, letting them "go" inside the bathtube :/
The Joker
08:33:11 Ari <3
Thank you! Just hoping it takes first time around for my bank accounts' sake 😂
Lucky
08:33:00 luvky
I've been decent Ari, thanks for asking! Had a good ro too, my maiden girlie dropped a WWW :)
-HEE Click-
How have you been?
Dash and Duchess
08:32:36 DD | ~Squizard~
Arctic, yup! In T1 <3
Dash and Duchess
08:32:07 DD | ~Squizard~
Ari, he totally will!! Good luck!
Glacier Bay Cove
08:31:35 Arctic Katz
Does charm have an art gallery or shop
MakeEm Fancy
08:31:15 Ally 💜
Such a shame :( @Walker
Sleepwalker Centre
08:30:48 Walker
Ally,
that sounds very similar to how my dad ended up with some of his first rotties :c
The Joker
08:30:47 Ari <3
It really has :) how have you been?
Lucky
08:30:18 luvky
Hiya Ari, been a while huh haha
Dash and Duchess
08:29:40 DD | ~Squizard~
Luvky, Oh 100% >.> charm really is a miracle worker!
-
Arctic, thus is the lady with the charm arts!
-HEE Click-
MakeEm Fancy
08:29:18 Ally 💜
Im not sure on everything that happened but I think my dad rescued his from a guy that had him on a chain all the time. @Walker
Glacier Bay Cove
08:28:39 Arctic Katz
I want to see charm art
Sleepwalker Centre
08:28:21 Walker
Ally,
hey fancy that!! We had several, my dad has been rescuing them most of his life. Right now my parents have a gorgeous 3yo who is a bit of a handful but seems to have been treated fairly well before, as fair as rescues go!

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Critique? August 8, 2017 04:08 PM


 Casanova
 
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Looking for critique on this art piece:
https://s2.postimg.org/4tsarxbjt/IMG_6779.jpg
** I know the front legs look crossed! If the hooves were showing I don't think it would be that way! **

Also looking for advice on tips and tricks!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:22 PM


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I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:23 PM


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Pyramid Equestrian said:
I'm no art expert but, the tail looks flat, there is no difference in color it is all the same color. Personally I would also like it longer. I would put a reflection in the water too, I know there are Lilly pads but there are still some areas where a reflection is needed. Lastly, the horse should also be a little smaller because the nose shouldn't be almost chopped off. Hope this helps :)


Thank you for the critique! I will go see what I can do to fix some of this :)
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:25 PM


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Im like the queen of critiques today hehe

Background
- I would select most of the background (from around the end of the horses tail and up) and blur it out a bit. It will draw more focus to the horse.
- It seems as though you just took the bg without editing it at all, which is fine, but I personally would have tainted it more of a blue-hue or something of the sorts. Remeber to experiment instead of just going right to the original BG!
- I would add a darkened, precise reflection to the water here. Duplicate the horse layer, position it behind the horse, and laying on the water, and then darken it, and lower the opacity. Then, erase all of the spots where the lilly pads are, and replace that with a very light shadow, so that there is a reflection on the visible water, and a light shadow on the lilly pads. :)

Horse
Lighting
The lighting in this photo is quite nice. Its not a super difficult bg to work with, and you definatley chose a great stock image to pair it with. Well done!

Horse Body
- Great job with the majority of the body, I really like the way you prepped its coat! Just right on smudging and such.
- As for where his legs meet the water, I would reccomend a clean cut instead of a fade into the water. in real life, thats how it would really work. I would also add ripples in the water where the legs meet (you can find ones that are ready to go on DA) to add some detail.
- The eye needs some work. The horse in question has a small eye in this photo, so you need to be very precise. You definatley have the right idea here, but remember, practice makes perfect!

Mane and Tail
- Mane looks fine to me, it seems that in this image the mane was roached (shaved) so you didnt have to worry about that.
- Tail needs a bit more expression. Grab a 1px brush in 100% smudge mode and fan it out a bit. remember to use curved lines with movement!

Accessory
- I like your idea here, but the flower needs to be smaller. I would also put some shadows around it to make it fit in the image better.


I hope this helps!
Critique? August 8, 2017 04:41 PM


 Casanova
 
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Thank you! I'll experiment with reflections (Not very experienced with shadows and reflections) and I'll edit the tail a bit more. I'll go see what I can do with the background and I'll see what I can do with the flower.

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