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Mythological
04:48:22 Crowley
Loki matches her 🤣
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pandemoniu_m
04:47:54 pheezy
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Mythological
04:47:16 Crowley
Impressed.
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Mythological
04:45:32 Crowley
Oh...
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Breadcrumbs
04:41:44 
and gaining a bar is always a good sign
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CWY country
04:41:27 C
Another good girl <3
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Both my EEW and WEE did better than my WWW I got this month. XD
Moonlight Stud
04:41:05 Lee
*.* so shiny
Breadcrumbs
04:40:39 
Got a good wk 4 too
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Breadcrumbs
04:39:59 
Yay ♥
Riverstone Grove
04:39:49 Lee
Now I need to figure out an X account xD
Riverstone Grove
04:39:30 Lee
My wubbies and KNN are back in business!
Breadcrumbs
04:39:05 
nice one Lee Bee :D
CWY country
04:38:51 C
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<3 That's a good wk 4.
Riverstone Grove
04:38:42 Lee
*.*
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Lightfall
04:37:22 Lee
Ouh
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Shamrock Equines
04:37:20 Crowley
Yess
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Breadcrumbs
04:35:51 
so pretty
Moonlight Stud
04:35:26 Lee
I can work with that
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Arvalon Studs
04:28:39 Tosk's KNN
Yay. She looks super promising
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Kiwi Mountains
04:21:01 Kiwi
Will more than happily take that!
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Mythological
04:48:22 Crowley
Loki matches her 🤣
-HEE Click-
pandemoniu_m
04:47:54 pheezy
-HEE Click-
sobbing
Mythological
04:47:16 Crowley
Impressed.
-HEE Click-
Mythological
04:45:32 Crowley
Oh...
-HEE Click-
Breadcrumbs
04:41:44 
and gaining a bar is always a good sign
-HEE Click-
CWY country
04:41:27 C
Another good girl <3
-HEE Click-

Both my EEW and WEE did better than my WWW I got this month. XD
Moonlight Stud
04:41:05 Lee
*.* so shiny
Breadcrumbs
04:40:39 
Got a good wk 4 too
-HEE Click-
Breadcrumbs
04:39:59 
Yay ♥
Riverstone Grove
04:39:49 Lee
Now I need to figure out an X account xD
Riverstone Grove
04:39:30 Lee
My wubbies and KNN are back in business!
Breadcrumbs
04:39:05 
nice one Lee Bee :D
CWY country
04:38:51 C
-HEE Click-
<3 That's a good wk 4.
Riverstone Grove
04:38:42 Lee
*.*
-HEE Click-
Lightfall
04:37:22 Lee
Ouh
-HEE Click-
Shamrock Equines
04:37:20 Crowley
Yess
-HEE Click-
Breadcrumbs
04:35:51 
so pretty
Moonlight Stud
04:35:26 Lee
I can work with that
-HEE Click-
Arvalon Studs
04:28:39 Tosk's KNN
Yay. She looks super promising
-HEE Click-
Kiwi Mountains
04:21:01 Kiwi
Will more than happily take that!
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-HEE Click-

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Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 09:35 PM


~Savy~
 
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https://image.ibb.co/ejyrTS/Untitled.png
So this is my most recent image. I played with it for an hour or two, and besides the eyes, I am rather happy with it.
However, this is only my 5th or 6th piece, so I know there must be room for improvement. I am looking for suggestions to improve my style of art, as well as comments on the piece as a whole.
Please, constructive, reasonable suggestions only. I am still very new to the art world :P
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 10:57 PM


Hallucination Manor
 
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I would make the feet look more grounded in the grass if you want examples of what I mean you can PM me :D
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:10 PM


~Savy~
 
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I can see what you mean there. Adding some grass to the hooves would've helped.
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:14 PM

Former Stable
 
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Looove it. :D My advice would be using the eraser tool to clean up the lines on the legs! Also smudging the tail in the direction the hair would be going or creating individual strands (tedious though)
It looks amazing, what a great start. <3
Critiques/Tips March 11, 2018 11:36 PM


~Savy~
 
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I agree, the legs were looking a bit messy the more I looked at it. I attempted to draw individual strands, I just think the smudging went weird. Maybe I should go on more than one layer? I just find then it's tedious to smudge :P

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