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Rising Stars Stable
09:24:50 Willow ~ AA Breeder
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I need to get her some art....
Dash and Duchess
09:24:49 DD | ~Squizard~
Willow, I feel ya 🤣 currently at 2842 😭
Rising Stars Stable
09:21:48 Willow ~ AA Breeder
DD
XD I've been splashed so many times it's crazy
Dash and Duchess
09:20:54 DD | ~Squizard~
Willow, xD not my baby! I'll guard her with my life lol, she's the only one who got the imaginary life jacket when versa flooded my stables 😂 I'm still somehow at #1 most splashed :')
Rising Stars Stable
09:19:22 Willow ~ AA Breeder
DD
Stop tempting me to steal
Dash and Duchess
09:18:09 DD | ~Squizard~
I'm still never getting over her 🥹
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Rising Stars Stable
09:15:17 Willow ~ AA Breeder
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goodness, you're gorgeous
Rising Stars Stable
09:13:58 Willow ~ AA Breeder
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Hello pretty
Black Meadow Estate
09:12:25 Meadow
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Wait your telling me your sabino and this is my first time realizing that?
Black Meadow Estate
09:10:51 Meadow
Willow she really is i adore her
Valhalla Acreage
09:10:25 Eivor
Them little white spots
Valhalla Acreage
09:10:09 Eivor
She's also birdcatcher
Rising Stars Stable
09:09:54 Willow ~ AA Breeder
Meadow
Ooh, she's nice
Rising Stars Stable
09:08:07 Willow ~ AA Breeder
-HEE Click-
aww, look at her socks
Black Meadow Estate
09:06:22 Meadow
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Her line is doing so good I have decided to make her a personal brand
Dash and Duchess
09:05:59 DD | ~Squizard~
Willow, Ooo good luck on that one too!
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Eivor, crossing my fingers for ya that they'll be good! And lol, when I used to do ISH they hated me xD
Valhalla Acreage
09:04:29 Eivor
My ISH account is doing better than my AA account
Valhalla Acreage
09:04:14 Eivor
But the baby will be Sbsb so hopefully they don't mess up and give me a www
Rising Stars Stable
09:04:00 Willow ~ AA Breeder
-HEE Click-
Also crossing fingers for another WWW or WWE from embryos
Dash and Duchess
09:03:22 DD | ~Squizard~
Eivor, ah you're right elysium is SbSb, but at least he's got eprl too 👀

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Rising Stars Stable
09:24:50 Willow ~ AA Breeder
-HEE Click-
I need to get her some art....
Dash and Duchess
09:24:49 DD | ~Squizard~
Willow, I feel ya 🤣 currently at 2842 😭
Rising Stars Stable
09:21:48 Willow ~ AA Breeder
DD
XD I've been splashed so many times it's crazy
Dash and Duchess
09:20:54 DD | ~Squizard~
Willow, xD not my baby! I'll guard her with my life lol, she's the only one who got the imaginary life jacket when versa flooded my stables 😂 I'm still somehow at #1 most splashed :')
Rising Stars Stable
09:19:22 Willow ~ AA Breeder
DD
Stop tempting me to steal
Dash and Duchess
09:18:09 DD | ~Squizard~
I'm still never getting over her 🥹
-HEE Click-
Rising Stars Stable
09:15:17 Willow ~ AA Breeder
-HEE Click-
goodness, you're gorgeous
Rising Stars Stable
09:13:58 Willow ~ AA Breeder
-HEE Click-
Hello pretty
Black Meadow Estate
09:12:25 Meadow
-HEE Click-
Wait your telling me your sabino and this is my first time realizing that?
Black Meadow Estate
09:10:51 Meadow
Willow she really is i adore her
Valhalla Acreage
09:10:25 Eivor
Them little white spots
Valhalla Acreage
09:10:09 Eivor
She's also birdcatcher
Rising Stars Stable
09:09:54 Willow ~ AA Breeder
Meadow
Ooh, she's nice
Rising Stars Stable
09:08:07 Willow ~ AA Breeder
-HEE Click-
aww, look at her socks
Black Meadow Estate
09:06:22 Meadow
-HEE Click-
Her line is doing so good I have decided to make her a personal brand
Dash and Duchess
09:05:59 DD | ~Squizard~
Willow, Ooo good luck on that one too!
-
Eivor, crossing my fingers for ya that they'll be good! And lol, when I used to do ISH they hated me xD
Valhalla Acreage
09:04:29 Eivor
My ISH account is doing better than my AA account
Valhalla Acreage
09:04:14 Eivor
But the baby will be Sbsb so hopefully they don't mess up and give me a www
Rising Stars Stable
09:04:00 Willow ~ AA Breeder
-HEE Click-
Also crossing fingers for another WWW or WWE from embryos
Dash and Duchess
09:03:22 DD | ~Squizard~
Eivor, ah you're right elysium is SbSb, but at least he's got eprl too 👀

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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