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Horse Eden Eventing Game

Horse Eden Eventing Game

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10:44:58 Crowley

Gem
Didn't buy them on a website.

Gemstone Stable

10:44:02 Snow❆Gem

@myth

Oh, yes. Allergy. Does the website say what they are made out of?

Fossil's Dreams

10:43:37 PK or Fossil

I'm highly allergic to most of the metals

Fossil's Dreams

10:43:02 PK or Fossil

if they are cheap metal yep that's possible. I'd try to return them?

10:42:44 Crowley

Well I know they ain't sterling silver.

10:42:26 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Yeah my sister is allergic to anything that isn't silver or gold

Circle Star RIDs

10:42:17 Granny C

Mine don't actually bleed, but they do discharge and swell up due to my nickle allergy.

10:41:46 Lily/Alpine

Myth
I'm allergic to anything that isn't sterling silver

10:41:08 Crowley

Granny
Nope the are small studs.

10:40:45 Crowley

I think I'm allergic to them.

Circle Star RIDs

10:40:35 Granny C

Myth - are they maybe too heavy for your lobes ?

Gemstone Stable

10:39:53 Snow❆Gem

@myth

I don't use earrings, so I can't offer any other suggestions. :(

Gemstone Stable

10:39:26 Snow❆Gem

@PK

My gosh! And no meter sounds lovely. lol

10:39:21 Crowley

Gem
I cleaned them and they aren't misshaped.

Gemstone Stable

10:38:57 Snow❆Gem

@PK

I did that last week. Ended up being EEEs and a PEE. >.<

Fossil's Dreams

10:38:40 PK or Fossil

Snow
we still have NO rain. maybe today? I hate dragging the hose all over the yard but thank goodness we are not metered (yet)

Gemstone Stable

10:38:32 Snow❆Gem

@myth

What? Are they misshaped? Or do they need recleaned?

10:38:22 [1k+ brindles] Angel

-HEE Click-
I really love her color but that training is trash

Fossil's Dreams

10:37:53 PK or Fossil

crap I just found 4 mares in need of pulling the second embryo this month...oops!

Gemstone Stable

10:37:35 Snow❆Gem

@PK

Oh dear! >.< I've got a flu like thing. Plus side I don't have to weed. lol

Oh it finally rained some. After 2+ weeks.

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10:44:58 Crowley

Gem
Didn't buy them on a website.

Gemstone Stable

10:44:02 Snow❆Gem

@myth

Oh, yes. Allergy. Does the website say what they are made out of?

Fossil's Dreams

10:43:37 PK or Fossil

I'm highly allergic to most of the metals

Fossil's Dreams

10:43:02 PK or Fossil

if they are cheap metal yep that's possible. I'd try to return them?

10:42:44 Crowley

Well I know they ain't sterling silver.

10:42:26 [1k+ brindles] Angel

Yeah my sister is allergic to anything that isn't silver or gold

Circle Star RIDs

10:42:17 Granny C

Mine don't actually bleed, but they do discharge and swell up due to my nickle allergy.

10:41:46 Lily/Alpine

Myth
I'm allergic to anything that isn't sterling silver

10:41:08 Crowley

Granny
Nope the are small studs.

10:40:45 Crowley

I think I'm allergic to them.

Circle Star RIDs

10:40:35 Granny C

Myth - are they maybe too heavy for your lobes ?

Gemstone Stable

10:39:53 Snow❆Gem

@myth

I don't use earrings, so I can't offer any other suggestions. :(

Gemstone Stable

10:39:26 Snow❆Gem

@PK

My gosh! And no meter sounds lovely. lol

10:39:21 Crowley

Gem
I cleaned them and they aren't misshaped.

Gemstone Stable

10:38:57 Snow❆Gem

@PK

I did that last week. Ended up being EEEs and a PEE. >.<

Fossil's Dreams

10:38:40 PK or Fossil

Snow
we still have NO rain. maybe today? I hate dragging the hose all over the yard but thank goodness we are not metered (yet)

Gemstone Stable

10:38:32 Snow❆Gem

@myth

What? Are they misshaped? Or do they need recleaned?

10:38:22 [1k+ brindles] Angel

-HEE Click-
I really love her color but that training is trash

Fossil's Dreams

10:37:53 PK or Fossil

crap I just found 4 mares in need of pulling the second embryo this month...oops!

Gemstone Stable

10:37:35 Snow❆Gem

@PK

Oh dear! >.< I've got a flu like thing. Plus side I don't have to weed. lol

Oh it finally rained some. After 2+ weeks.

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November 21, 2017 11:01 PM

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http://funkyimg.com/i/2zyRe.jpg

I want to know how to improve my art further :3 Please critique!

November 22, 2017 11:54 AM

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OMG!! Love It!

November 22, 2017 04:31 PM

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Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!

November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

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The Wild Child said:
OMG!! Love It!

Rosiebud said:
Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!

Thanks <3

November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

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how do you make art?

November 22, 2017 04:38 PM

Andraste Equine

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Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)

November 22, 2017 04:53 PM

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Arven Equine said:
Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)

I was wondering what was missing! Something seemed a little out of place but I couldn't seem to find what. Thanks :)

November 22, 2017 05:23 PM

Hollow Tree Acres

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I agree with the color balance part, but I'd also fix the mane a bit. The hair width looks a bit large to me. Other than that, looks great! :)

November 22, 2017 05:25 PM

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I am no artist but maybe make the credits stand out less. Yes, make them readable but maybe for that piece make them grey or put them in the sky. Just an opinion. :)

November 22, 2017 09:03 PM

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I feel like the tail needs to be moe flowing and spread out more. But other than that it looks great!

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