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Winter Curtain
11:43:11 Win | Water
Thanks ! Even though there is not a lot of chestnut in the parents genes.
Red Horizon Ranch
11:42:03 Red
He's so pretty Win
Winter Curtain
11:38:37 Win | Water
Look at this guy -HEE Click-
Winter Curtain
11:38:08 Win | Water
o
Sierra Views Stable
11:37:44 AZ
Win - it's a random one, you can't breed for it
Winter Curtain
11:35:00 Win | Water
How do you find mares chimeras for breeding ?
Sierra Views Stable
11:32:43 AZ
-HEE Click- new chimera <3
Dash and Duchess
11:32:06 DD | ~Squizard~
I'm honestly debating whether to give her favorite child featured privileges 🤔
-HEE Click-
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:30:25 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
you should
Halloween stable
11:29:26 
Does everyone wanna look at my featured horse he is very pretty I think I wanna keep him
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:28:27 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
:'(
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:28:21 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
I remember I made this awesome piece which was a white horse (good) with birds and tentacles reaching out and charging at this black horse with ravens and the tentacles (evil apparently) on a bridge with a waterfall in the background and I totally regret it
Dash and Duchess
11:25:40 DD | ~Squizard~
Peggy, yup I feel that 🥲
Dash and Duchess
11:25:23 DD | ~Squizard~
Oop I poofed earlier 😭
Winter Curtain
11:25:00 Win | Water
I have 34k more to breed, and try to get a brindle.
Pegasus Lane
11:24:05 Peggy (or) Peg
I also have an art piece I regret selling 🥲 You live and learn I guess
Halloween stable
11:14:40 
OMG I forgot I had these on my stable
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:10:49 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
not bad for a quick 30 min piece after three months :)
-Click-
Sunni
10:10:13 Sunni bunny
Just wanted to share that photo I snapped today.
I'll be back on in a second.
Sunni
10:08:21 Sunni bunny
-Click-

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Winter Curtain
11:43:11 Win | Water
Thanks ! Even though there is not a lot of chestnut in the parents genes.
Red Horizon Ranch
11:42:03 Red
He's so pretty Win
Winter Curtain
11:38:37 Win | Water
Look at this guy -HEE Click-
Winter Curtain
11:38:08 Win | Water
o
Sierra Views Stable
11:37:44 AZ
Win - it's a random one, you can't breed for it
Winter Curtain
11:35:00 Win | Water
How do you find mares chimeras for breeding ?
Sierra Views Stable
11:32:43 AZ
-HEE Click- new chimera <3
Dash and Duchess
11:32:06 DD | ~Squizard~
I'm honestly debating whether to give her favorite child featured privileges 🤔
-HEE Click-
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:30:25 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
you should
Halloween stable
11:29:26 
Does everyone wanna look at my featured horse he is very pretty I think I wanna keep him
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:28:27 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
:'(
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:28:21 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
I remember I made this awesome piece which was a white horse (good) with birds and tentacles reaching out and charging at this black horse with ravens and the tentacles (evil apparently) on a bridge with a waterfall in the background and I totally regret it
Dash and Duchess
11:25:40 DD | ~Squizard~
Peggy, yup I feel that 🥲
Dash and Duchess
11:25:23 DD | ~Squizard~
Oop I poofed earlier 😭
Winter Curtain
11:25:00 Win | Water
I have 34k more to breed, and try to get a brindle.
Pegasus Lane
11:24:05 Peggy (or) Peg
I also have an art piece I regret selling 🥲 You live and learn I guess
Halloween stable
11:14:40 
OMG I forgot I had these on my stable
RFS Thoroughbreds
11:10:49 Fern/fref/ferf/nerf
not bad for a quick 30 min piece after three months :)
-Click-
Sunni
10:10:13 Sunni bunny
Just wanted to share that photo I snapped today.
I'll be back on in a second.
Sunni
10:08:21 Sunni bunny
-Click-

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Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:52 AM


Golden Crest
 
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Hey everyone!

I am still learning the ropes of art and finding my style, so I would love some critique of my progress so far. Here are some pieces I have done with different themes, I would love if anyone experienced in the art field could please give me some pointers?

I really do thank you in advance and appreciate your time :)



Art Critique December 19, 2023 02:36 PM


Olive
 
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Though im not in the art field id like to say your style is unique in a way and really cute
But #1 The WIngs Need To be Blended Into The Body And The Color Match the Coat
#2 Your Eyes Need A Bit Of Work
#3 Try Blending your legs Into The Grass A Bit more or add a layer or grass ontop of it
#4 same thing
#5 I think the fawns lighting is a bit off
#6 its my favorite but try to blend the socket of the wing in a bit
Art Critique December 19, 2023 04:21 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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I agree with Olive, but the biggest thing is shadows and reflections <3 I don't know which app you use, but I love Krita.
I've been compiling my favorite tutorials for a while now, I'll edit in a bit with em<3
Edit: Here they all are, in no particular order :3
Roanies Manip Tutorial(Love this one!)
Hope these help<3

Edited at December 19, 2023 08:33 PM by KPH Equestrian
Art Critique December 20, 2023 02:45 PM


WildWillow
 
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The first things I notice are a lack of a shadow on the ground and a lack of depth (shadow/highlight) on your horses. I definitely recommend checking out the tutorials that KPH has listed. I think learning to place a shadow on the ground as well as add shadows and highlights to your horse, mane/tail, and wings will really take your art to a next level. :) I go over this in my tutorial (KPH linked to it).

I think another thing to pay attention to is the tone of your background compared to the horse. For example, the background of your last piece is very blue/green toned while your horse has more of a yellow tone. If your program has a Color Balance tool, you can use this to adjust the tone of your horse to match the same tones as your background. This can be super helpful to get your horse to "fit" in its background.
You can also adjust the tones of the "extras" in your art (antlers, wings, animals) to fit both your horse and the background.
It's amazing what difference the little details can make!

I think you really have down the other major foundation components to art - such as horse body prep and the beginnings of grounding. For your grounding, I would go in with a softer, translucent brush to erase legs so it blends easier into your background.
I really like your manes and tails - that last piece especially has some phenomenal hair action!

If you have any questions, my mailbox is always open!

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