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Skyrim

12:55:05 Wynter/Ghostly

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WWE rated RID stallion up for breeding at 5k mush with no minimum breed requirement. He has produced many EEEs and EWEs.

Zodiac Stars

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Maleficents

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Sunni

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Question about the value of my WWW colt.

Neptunes Waters

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PEE 800. Would be a great show gelding

Mooncloud Magic

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WWW KNN freshie straws
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WWW LB knn mare embryos
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Selling W+ knn
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Elysium Opalus

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WC Braves
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March 11, 2018 09:35 PM

~Savy~

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#136184
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https://image.ibb.co/ejyrTS/Untitled.png

So this is my most recent image. I played with it for an hour or two, and besides the eyes, I am rather happy with it.

However, this is only my 5th or 6th piece, so I know there must be room for improvement. I am looking for suggestions to improve my style of art, as well as comments on the piece as a whole.

Please, constructive, reasonable suggestions only. I am still very new to the art world :P

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March 11, 2018 10:57 PM

Hallucination Manor

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I would make the feet look more grounded in the grass if you want examples of what I mean you can PM me :D

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March 11, 2018 11:10 PM

~Savy~

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I can see what you mean there. Adding some grass to the hooves would've helped.

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March 11, 2018 11:14 PM

Former Stable

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Looove it. :D My advice would be using the eraser tool to clean up the lines on the legs! Also smudging the tail in the direction the hair would be going or creating individual strands (tedious though)

It looks amazing, what a great start. <3

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March 11, 2018 11:36 PM

~Savy~

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I agree, the legs were looking a bit messy the more I looked at it. I attempted to draw individual strands, I just think the smudging went weird. Maybe I should go on more than one layer? I just find then it's tedious to smudge :P

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