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07:38:48 Crowley

What?

07:37:53 Ivy / poison ivy

Storm

No, not that I am aware of

07:36:32

Hello chat, happy day/night, is there a premium restriction to the import custom horse image? I would be doing it if not.

Lavender Hollow

07:36:13 ⁕ ivy ⁕

Wylder and i had the best rant session about this 10 year old girl who was being out of pocket at practice today

Ironworks Equestria

07:19:13 Seven | Billy

True... sadly

07:18:43 Crowley

Something always happens to Yukon sadly.

Ironworks Equestria

07:16:58 Seven | Billy

I got worried, lol. I thought something happened to Yukon

07:15:55 The Coffee Purist

She's gorgeous

Lucky

07:15:50 luvky

Me too i think ☹️

07:15:10 Crowley

I missed Yukon 😭

Nighthawk Ranch

07:14:03 Eq

Her production is honestly so impressive -HEE Click- Passing on her frame like crazy too

07:08:51 noli,SH thief,bread

Columet

Ooohhh what a lovely girl

07:05:20 Sting

Thought that might have been one of your matches

07:04:53 [1k+ brindles] Angel

What? Lol

07:00:14 Sting

Good job Angel!

06:54:07 The Coffee Purist

lol sometimes you just know, no items no nothing:
-HEE Click-

Lucky

06:51:37 luvky

Yukon! Hi!

06:37:56 ZEZ - ZZ

Looks like a promising match to me Sage

06:26:31

Hey, how does this look I really like it
-HEE Click-

06:26:21 Yukon

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07:38:48 Crowley

What?

07:37:53 Ivy / poison ivy

Storm

No, not that I am aware of

07:36:32

Hello chat, happy day/night, is there a premium restriction to the import custom horse image? I would be doing it if not.

Lavender Hollow

07:36:13 ⁕ ivy ⁕

Wylder and i had the best rant session about this 10 year old girl who was being out of pocket at practice today

Ironworks Equestria

07:19:13 Seven | Billy

True... sadly

07:18:43 Crowley

Something always happens to Yukon sadly.

Ironworks Equestria

07:16:58 Seven | Billy

I got worried, lol. I thought something happened to Yukon

07:15:55 The Coffee Purist

She's gorgeous

Lucky

07:15:50 luvky

Me too i think ☹️

07:15:10 Crowley

I missed Yukon 😭

Nighthawk Ranch

07:14:03 Eq

Her production is honestly so impressive -HEE Click- Passing on her frame like crazy too

07:08:51 noli,SH thief,bread

Columet

Ooohhh what a lovely girl

07:05:20 Sting

Thought that might have been one of your matches

07:04:53 [1k+ brindles] Angel

What? Lol

07:00:14 Sting

Good job Angel!

06:54:07 The Coffee Purist

lol sometimes you just know, no items no nothing:
-HEE Click-

Lucky

06:51:37 luvky

Yukon! Hi!

06:37:56 ZEZ - ZZ

Looks like a promising match to me Sage

06:26:31

Hey, how does this look I really like it
-HEE Click-

06:26:21 Yukon

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

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January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

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January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites

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January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:

$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Yeah good point! Im just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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