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Palais de Lys
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EWE RID mares with colour and WWE-S AA mare. Ends the 26th.
Fluffy's Cosy Home
06:09:21 Fluffy
I have:
*WWW/WW Straws
*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
-HEE Click-
Dreamtime Farm
05:59:15 Dreamtime
SH PON AA for sale. Will take offers on sale barn horses. All rated, some fun colors and markings. Most are PEP or better rated.
Blossy
04:28:58 Coco
-HEE Click-
Half off all shop items
Valhalla Acreage
01:41:35 Eivor
-HEE Click-
Items and decor for sale all cheaper than current market returning buyers get 10% discount
Haunted Caverns
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Looking to buy an upgrade. I have 160k ready to send over. Please pm me
Boulder Creek
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Join the Pretty Pony Pageant in voting for you Favorite Pony in the Community Voting Classes!

Flower Festival:
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Beach Ride
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Port Royal Equines
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Birthday Girl
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SH Broodmares: -HEE Click-
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Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!
This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 05:49 PM


Wings Of Glory
 
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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 10:58 PM


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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites
Constructive Criticism January 8, 2018 11:07 PM

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Oceane Elites said:


$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece


Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.


Yeah good point! I’m just starting to add highlights and lowlights into my manips now ao hopefully that will be fixed soon xD

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