Horse Eden : Critiques?

12:23:52 Terici/Dino/Trish

My fingers are crossed for you! I hope she's nice to

Valhalla Acreage

12:21:12 Eivor

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I'm excited for this I'm using a blue glass on this pair

12:17:04 Chey / Star

Trish
I'm very nervous to breed her 😬
I will be svenning her as my first match so hopefully she is nice

12:13:53 Terici/Dino/Trish

I forgot shes 3 next year i cant wait to see how they do

Sunni

12:13:18 Sunni bunny

The match looks really good, and hopefully the cost will be colorful. I am excited for you XD

12:11:59 Chey / Star

Sunni
That's kind of what I was thinking
The match looks solid plus it has the chance for frame and tobi

Sunni

12:09:56 Sunni bunny

Star I think it's worth the gamble

12:08:49 Chey / Star

Do I risk throwing my maiden to a freshie?
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Sunni

12:07:06 Sunni bunny

Geek if it helps you cope, losing someone is all ways painful.
It takes time to heal, and drawing is a good coping mechanism.
Am sorry for your loss, but I all ways tell myself.
It was an honor to know them, and be their friend.

Transformers Acres

12:04:58 Geek, Eek

I'm drawing my recently deceased puppy. I'm not fine

Sunni

12:04:46 Sunni bunny

Cove the sleep is coming for you, haha

Glacier Bay Cove

12:04:24 Arctic Katz

Oops I meant Geek

Glacier Bay Cove

12:04:12 Arctic Katz

Send me a PM. I am falling asleep, Gerk

Sunni

12:03:18 Sunni bunny

She loved cuddling in my arm, but my hand is numb.

Glacier Bay Cove

12:03:18 Arctic Katz

I feel for you, Geek. What did your puppy look like

Sunni

12:02:54 Sunni bunny

Help I am trapped by a cat.

Moonrose Magic

12:00:43 🎀 Diva

I like the sort of melted caramel brindle look

Moonrose Magic

11:59:28 🎀 Diva

Brindle can't be bred for, breeding 2 brindle together gives like 0.01% more probability or so, otherwise its absolute luck

Dreamcatcher Farms

11:57:56

Chat my fake nails arent coming off help

Checkers Catch

11:55:37

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12:23:52 Terici/Dino/Trish

My fingers are crossed for you! I hope she's nice to

Valhalla Acreage

12:21:12 Eivor

-HEE Click-
I'm excited for this I'm using a blue glass on this pair

12:17:04 Chey / Star

Trish
I'm very nervous to breed her 😬
I will be svenning her as my first match so hopefully she is nice

12:13:53 Terici/Dino/Trish

I forgot shes 3 next year i cant wait to see how they do

Sunni

12:13:18 Sunni bunny

The match looks really good, and hopefully the cost will be colorful. I am excited for you XD

12:11:59 Chey / Star

Sunni
That's kind of what I was thinking
The match looks solid plus it has the chance for frame and tobi

Sunni

12:09:56 Sunni bunny

Star I think it's worth the gamble

12:08:49 Chey / Star

Do I risk throwing my maiden to a freshie?
-HEE Click-

Sunni

12:07:06 Sunni bunny

Transformers Acres

12:04:58 Geek, Eek

I'm drawing my recently deceased puppy. I'm not fine

Sunni

12:04:46 Sunni bunny

Cove the sleep is coming for you, haha

Glacier Bay Cove

12:04:24 Arctic Katz

Oops I meant Geek

Glacier Bay Cove

12:04:12 Arctic Katz

Send me a PM. I am falling asleep, Gerk

Sunni

12:03:18 Sunni bunny

She loved cuddling in my arm, but my hand is numb.

Glacier Bay Cove

12:03:18 Arctic Katz

I feel for you, Geek. What did your puppy look like

Sunni

12:02:54 Sunni bunny

Help I am trapped by a cat.

Moonrose Magic

12:00:43 🎀 Diva

I like the sort of melted caramel brindle look

Moonrose Magic

11:59:28 🎀 Diva

Brindle can't be bred for, breeding 2 brindle together gives like 0.01% more probability or so, otherwise its absolute luck

Dreamcatcher Farms

11:57:56

Chat my fake nails arent coming off help

Checkers Catch

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Wish*

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November 21, 2017 11:01 PM

Casanova

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http://funkyimg.com/i/2zyRe.jpg

I want to know how to improve my art further :3 Please critique!

November 22, 2017 11:54 AM

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OMG!! Love It!

November 22, 2017 04:31 PM

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Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!

November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

Casanova

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The Wild Child said:
OMG!! Love It!

Rosiebud said:
Why would you need to inprove you are SO good!!

Thanks <3

November 22, 2017 04:36 PM

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how do you make art?

November 22, 2017 04:38 PM

Andraste Equine

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Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)

November 22, 2017 04:53 PM

Casanova

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Arven Equine said:
Only thing I really noticed is that the horse needs some more red/orange/yellow midtones which you can adjust in Colour Balance. Just the slightest bit makes the horse seem more like it belongs. Nice work though :)

I was wondering what was missing! Something seemed a little out of place but I couldn't seem to find what. Thanks :)

November 22, 2017 05:23 PM

Hollow Tree Acres

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I agree with the color balance part, but I'd also fix the mane a bit. The hair width looks a bit large to me. Other than that, looks great! :)

November 22, 2017 05:25 PM

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I am no artist but maybe make the credits stand out less. Yes, make them readable but maybe for that piece make them grey or put them in the sky. Just an opinion. :)

November 22, 2017 09:03 PM