Horse Eden : Constructive Criticism

04:52:42 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

I'm going to go draw, bye guys! see y'all soon

Gemstone Stable

04:52:11 Snow❆Gem

@bay

Many thanks! :D

Gemstone Stable

04:52:11 Snow❆Gem

My goodness, this internet is slow... >.>

Gemstone Stable

04:52:11 Snow❆Gem

@bay

Many thanks! :D

Gemstone Stable

04:52:11 Snow❆Gem

My goodness, this internet is slow... >.>

04:52:02 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

Angel
We both know I can't afford that. I'll have to wait a couple of hours

Gilded Roses

04:51:49 River / Brody

Somebody give me stock images for random manips ;-; I'm bored out of my mind.

Awesome Angels

04:50:59 Angel's angels (SA)

Rate her

04:47:58 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

-HEE Click-
I need to rate this 15+ map girl

04:46:18 Bird

I also have to buy them super early in the season or else they sell out. I just bought a pair of shoes for when it is snowing and wet.

Glacier Bay Cove

04:46:16 Arctic Katz

*Mailing out lots of packages of chocolate bars

04:45:34 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

Firefly
Ooh, that's pretty

04:45:25 Bird

@Gem, I have big feet that are narrow so they are hard to fit. All my shoes cost upwards of $100.

Gemstone Stable

04:44:39 Snow❆Gem

@bird

In the spring I needed new sneackers and I was eyeing up a $120 purple pair. (Just because I LOVE purple sneackers) Parents ended buying it for me... I was in a bit of a shock. lol

Glacier Bay Cove

04:44:30 Arctic Katz

Sending you lots of hugs, Gem

Firefly Forrest

04:44:16

-HEE Click-
here she is gown up

Crestwood Eq.

04:43:45 Ivy / poison ivy

did i hear chocolate?

04:43:44 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

Gem
No, but their is some yummy salted seaweed

Firefly Forrest

04:43:35

Oop wrong thing...

Firefly Forrest

04:43:06

-HEE Click-
This is her grown up...

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04:52:42 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

I'm going to go draw, bye guys! see y'all soon

Gemstone Stable

04:52:11 Snow❆Gem

@bay

Many thanks! :D

Gemstone Stable

04:52:11 Snow❆Gem

My goodness, this internet is slow... >.>

Gemstone Stable

04:52:11 Snow❆Gem

@bay

Many thanks! :D

Gemstone Stable

04:52:11 Snow❆Gem

My goodness, this internet is slow... >.>

04:52:02 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

Angel
We both know I can't afford that. I'll have to wait a couple of hours

Gilded Roses

04:51:49 River / Brody

Somebody give me stock images for random manips ;-; I'm bored out of my mind.

Awesome Angels

04:50:59 Angel's angels (SA)

Rate her

04:47:58 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

-HEE Click-
I need to rate this 15+ map girl

04:46:18 Bird

I also have to buy them super early in the season or else they sell out. I just bought a pair of shoes for when it is snowing and wet.

Glacier Bay Cove

04:46:16 Arctic Katz

*Mailing out lots of packages of chocolate bars

04:45:34 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

Firefly
Ooh, that's pretty

04:45:25 Bird

@Gem, I have big feet that are narrow so they are hard to fit. All my shoes cost upwards of $100.

Gemstone Stable

04:44:39 Snow❆Gem

@bird

In the spring I needed new sneackers and I was eyeing up a $120 purple pair. (Just because I LOVE purple sneackers) Parents ended buying it for me... I was in a bit of a shock. lol

Glacier Bay Cove

04:44:30 Arctic Katz

Sending you lots of hugs, Gem

Firefly Forrest

04:44:16

-HEE Click-
here she is gown up

Crestwood Eq.

04:43:45 Ivy / poison ivy

did i hear chocolate?

04:43:44 Willow ~ KNN Breeder

Gem
No, but their is some yummy salted seaweed

Firefly Forrest

04:43:35

Oop wrong thing...

Firefly Forrest

04:43:06

-HEE Click-
This is her grown up...

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January 8, 2018 05:39 PM

Former Stable

Posts: 0
#106539
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Hey! I'm just wondering where I can improve my art :) I haven't been doing for that long so any any help is appreciated!

This is my most recent piece:

https://horseeden.com/horse.php?id=15154277

Thanks!

January 8, 2018 05:49 PM

Wings Of Glory

Posts: 2670
#106543
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my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

January 8, 2018 10:58 PM

Casanova

Posts: 1522
#106696
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$Wings of Glory$ said:
my only thing i have to say is that the background looks a bit too blurry but otherwise i love this piece

Partly agree with this. Maybe try and make the horse clearer/sharper to match the little baby tree next to it? Overall a beautiful piece. Great work.

EDIT: Also, maybe try playing with the highlights on the horse? Just look at the light source.

Edited at January 8, 2018 11:02 PM by Oceane Elites