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FirstLightFarms
09:42:47 puck
oof fair enough
Savannah Stables
09:42:16 Dusty
No i get how it works im just still salty about a judge at our last show, i think hunters can be fun if you like that sort of thing though
FirstLightFarms
09:40:39 puck
Nah it's okay I used to be a hater too. But I've done a few clinics with judges and knowing what they look for and really understanding how much of an art it can be is really cool
Lady ranger
09:39:51 
Geek
Yeah I get that
Savannah Stables
09:39:21 Dusty
I need to stop being such a hunters hater sorry
Lady ranger
09:38:58 
Geek

I'm sorry I have to go Goodnight!!
Savannah Stables
09:38:56 Dusty
I would recommend you dont start now then. Im glad jumpers is going well though!
Transformers Acres
09:38:43 Geek, Eek
Lady

I'm just tired of them all at this point.
FirstLightFarms
09:37:26 puck
I've never really done the hunters before and Evie's doing so well in the jumpers, finally moving up to the .90s, I don't want to take her focus off that, so I'm having a lot of fun just playing around with the idea of it on Cliff. Though it's gonna take a lot of work to really get him hunter ready. And maybe a pelham
Lady ranger
09:36:46 
Geek

For real I would be too. I completely understand your situation, stuff like this has happened to me a few times too.
Savannah Stables
09:35:03 Dusty
Im sure if you cry hard enough they'll let yall in the lead line class?
I do think cliff would do great with an ammy in the 2' though, theres some tough ones out there!
I somehow do at least half of my warmup courses backwards but ive never gone off of the actual course...
Im also like kind of tired of hunters though i dont think i want to do more of that lol
Transformers Acres
09:35:00 Geek, Eek
Lady

I'm just done with this shit. Every damn time I say something, it's always twisted or taken out of context. I'm just gonna keep my mouth shut now.
Aura Show Horses
09:34:49 Peacock/ Pea
-HEE Click- Peacock Brindle !
Lady ranger
09:33:23 
Geek

Yeah it seem like you know your nephew well enough to be able to joke about that and yeah if he's is starting school he will be no help at all
FirstLightFarms
09:31:28 puck
I think the jumpers I could do lower, and there's a few open flat classes that I'm hoping to do Lux in next year, but nothing really in the hunters unless I exclusively did warmup classes and didn't actually compete. Which. Meh. 😂

That's still pretty damn cool!
Transformers Acres
09:30:50 Geek, Eek
Lady

I understand that my sister wants our brother over at her place, considering he starts school in August, but that kid ain't gonna help her with the damn baby. I help her with everything, literally. He always used to get to go out, I rarely get to go out as it is.
Savannah Stables
09:29:32 Dusty
For just your local org? Im also a professional but they have some classes where i can do under 2'6
I did our long stirrup until this year cause its our under 21 class for some reason 😭 ours is also 2'3 i dont know what we're on
and they just like will let me do green horse classes depending on the vibes and also maybe large pony who the fuck knows

no theyre evil but they like me lol
ive somehow convinced everyone i know how to ride after my horse came around and theres another evil pony that behaves exclusively for me and no one will believe me its just because im really quiet
Lady ranger
09:28:59 
Geek
Okay wow that's crazy like if your relationship is like that the I see no reason to flip out about the joke
Yeah I would be too I'm sorry
Transformers Acres
09:26:13 Geek, Eek
Lady

And my sister and I flip each other off, as a joke. So do me and my BILs sister. I flipped off my BILs sister, joking with her, she did it back. I do the same thing with my mom.

I'm so fucking pissed off, and hurt, that I could fucking scream and cry for a bit.
FirstLightFarms
09:25:31 puck
As a professional, the lowest I can compete is the 2'6, which is partly why I reaaaaaally want some adult ammy to lease him out to do the little 2' long stirrup I think he'd be so cute at it but also oh my god so true about the crying

Awh good ponies <3 the good ones are worth their weight in gold. The bad ones are on the FBI watchlist

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FirstLightFarms
09:42:47 puck
oof fair enough
Savannah Stables
09:42:16 Dusty
No i get how it works im just still salty about a judge at our last show, i think hunters can be fun if you like that sort of thing though
FirstLightFarms
09:40:39 puck
Nah it's okay I used to be a hater too. But I've done a few clinics with judges and knowing what they look for and really understanding how much of an art it can be is really cool
Lady ranger
09:39:51 
Geek
Yeah I get that
Savannah Stables
09:39:21 Dusty
I need to stop being such a hunters hater sorry
Lady ranger
09:38:58 
Geek

I'm sorry I have to go Goodnight!!
Savannah Stables
09:38:56 Dusty
I would recommend you dont start now then. Im glad jumpers is going well though!
Transformers Acres
09:38:43 Geek, Eek
Lady

I'm just tired of them all at this point.
FirstLightFarms
09:37:26 puck
I've never really done the hunters before and Evie's doing so well in the jumpers, finally moving up to the .90s, I don't want to take her focus off that, so I'm having a lot of fun just playing around with the idea of it on Cliff. Though it's gonna take a lot of work to really get him hunter ready. And maybe a pelham
Lady ranger
09:36:46 
Geek

For real I would be too. I completely understand your situation, stuff like this has happened to me a few times too.
Savannah Stables
09:35:03 Dusty
Im sure if you cry hard enough they'll let yall in the lead line class?
I do think cliff would do great with an ammy in the 2' though, theres some tough ones out there!
I somehow do at least half of my warmup courses backwards but ive never gone off of the actual course...
Im also like kind of tired of hunters though i dont think i want to do more of that lol
Transformers Acres
09:35:00 Geek, Eek
Lady

I'm just done with this shit. Every damn time I say something, it's always twisted or taken out of context. I'm just gonna keep my mouth shut now.
Aura Show Horses
09:34:49 Peacock/ Pea
-HEE Click- Peacock Brindle !
Lady ranger
09:33:23 
Geek

Yeah it seem like you know your nephew well enough to be able to joke about that and yeah if he's is starting school he will be no help at all
FirstLightFarms
09:31:28 puck
I think the jumpers I could do lower, and there's a few open flat classes that I'm hoping to do Lux in next year, but nothing really in the hunters unless I exclusively did warmup classes and didn't actually compete. Which. Meh. 😂

That's still pretty damn cool!
Transformers Acres
09:30:50 Geek, Eek
Lady

I understand that my sister wants our brother over at her place, considering he starts school in August, but that kid ain't gonna help her with the damn baby. I help her with everything, literally. He always used to get to go out, I rarely get to go out as it is.
Savannah Stables
09:29:32 Dusty
For just your local org? Im also a professional but they have some classes where i can do under 2'6
I did our long stirrup until this year cause its our under 21 class for some reason 😭 ours is also 2'3 i dont know what we're on
and they just like will let me do green horse classes depending on the vibes and also maybe large pony who the fuck knows

no theyre evil but they like me lol
ive somehow convinced everyone i know how to ride after my horse came around and theres another evil pony that behaves exclusively for me and no one will believe me its just because im really quiet
Lady ranger
09:28:59 
Geek
Okay wow that's crazy like if your relationship is like that the I see no reason to flip out about the joke
Yeah I would be too I'm sorry
Transformers Acres
09:26:13 Geek, Eek
Lady

And my sister and I flip each other off, as a joke. So do me and my BILs sister. I flipped off my BILs sister, joking with her, she did it back. I do the same thing with my mom.

I'm so fucking pissed off, and hurt, that I could fucking scream and cry for a bit.
FirstLightFarms
09:25:31 puck
As a professional, the lowest I can compete is the 2'6, which is partly why I reaaaaaally want some adult ammy to lease him out to do the little 2' long stirrup I think he'd be so cute at it but also oh my god so true about the crying

Awh good ponies <3 the good ones are worth their weight in gold. The bad ones are on the FBI watchlist

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Art Critique c: August 7, 2024 04:45 AM


Twin Flames
 
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Hey everyone!

I am wanting to improve on my art so thoguht I would reach out to the community for some advice. I am looking for some in depth critique on anything and everything.

Some things I am currently trying to improve:
Lighting & hair ~ I also use Ibis Paint x

Feel free to pick the art apart :3 and thank you in advance <3

Here are some recent examples:


Edited at August 7, 2024 04:48 AM by Twin Flames
Art Critique c: August 13, 2024 02:53 AM


Twin Flames
 
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Another recent example :)

Art Critique c: August 17, 2024 09:32 AM


Cherry Creek Ranch
 
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I have no criticism, just came here to say these are AMAZING
Art Critique c: September 1, 2024 10:09 PM


Marigold Ridge
 
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First of all, I gotta say these are absolutely incredible!!! Your composition is on point and I love the horse in a bar!
As for advice, something that stood out to me were the horse's shadows. That sharp kind of shadow is what might happen if the horse were standing on a hard, reflective surface, not in a more nature-y landscape.
To determine where the shadows should lie, look at the surrounding bg and light sources for clues. For example, a horse standing in clear, still water would likely have a more defined shadow, possibly with part of its reflection, but the water would give it a kind of ripple affect. At other times, the shadow might not be more than a smudge, especially if there's very little light. If there is a very strong light source in the piece, the shadows would be longer and more defined, but would still have softer edges. I'd say for most of your examples, the shadow would mainly be a darkened smudge underneath the horse.
Something that might help is to see what your own shadow looks like at various times of the day and in various settings, and then apply it to your art.
Whoo! That was long, but I hope it's helpful!! Your lighting is overall very strong (especially in pieces 3 & 4 which I ADORE!!)
Do tell me if you've got other questions! You're doing awesome <333
Art Critique c: September 5, 2024 09:17 PM


KPH Equestrian
 
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First, I wanna say that I LOVE your body prep and the way you do hair! I think the most important thing is the darker shadows under the belly.
With some of these pieces, the lighting is more(for want of a better word) distilled, so the shadows should be softer. In the first piece(blue one), there's light in the water, which would be illuminating the belly slightly. Try lowering the opacity of your deeper shadow layer a bit and let the horse's detail show through ;)
The next piece(forest one) same thing- there isn't super strong lighting coming from anywhere in prticular, so the shadows will be much softer. Again, play with the opacity of your layers.
I really like the lighting in the blue/green piece(4th one), it matches the background very well<3
The next one, in water, same thing- light reflects off of water and back onto the horse, so not only would the shadows be lighter, there would be some subtle lighting over top of them.
Next one, the bartender, the lighting is spot on! Only thing I could think of is adding a shadow under the cup on his hindquarters, and possibly a reflection on the shiny countertop.

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