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Gemstone Stable
08:30:45 Snow❆Gem
@shadow

Call the electrically company. The company around here fixes it faster if people call it in. Even with automatic signal sending boxes on the buildings. O.o
Dark Horse Eventing
08:30:00 Ebony
Thank you, @Snow Gem :)
JP Show Stables
08:29:13 
I used to work as a show secretary for major horse shows and had more than a few crazy people but I think my favorite was the lady who wanted to pay me but didn't like any of the options. Didn't want to pay by card because I could steal the number, didn't want to pay the 3% convenience fee, and didn't want to pay then because her trainer might add things to her bill (it was like a thursday or friday). Didn't want to leave an open check (written to the company, amount just not filled in) because I could write it for any amount and pocket the difference (IDK how... also she could have come back on sunday to write the amount out). Definitelty didn't want to pay cash. I was like... I genuinely don't know what you want me to do right now. She then sat outside the office for two hours watching me to see what shady things I did in my spare time.
Gemstone Stable
08:29:13 Snow❆Gem
@ebony

On players page, click 'Events and Games'. Its under 'Stable Info' box, which have the avatar, join date, and such.
Lynx Glory
08:27:45 ⛈ whisper/lynx
Skrangle
Loved your story that was funny xD
Shadow Mtn
08:24:03 
I manage vacation rentals now. I once had a gentleman call me at 4:45 am to tell me the power was out and asked what I planned on doing about it because if his wife woke at 5 and didn't have coffee waiting on her, there would be hell to pay. I asked him what he would like for me to do? was I supposed to find the issue, climb the pole, and reattach it? He didn't appreciate my sentiment but c'mon, woken out of dead sleep at that time of morning, my adrenaline spiked
Gemstone Stable
08:24:00 Snow❆Gem
@eury

O.o That Luigi guy was caught in a nearby county... I'm sure he was thinking about taking Amtrak or the Greyhound... Both have hubs in Altoona.
Dark Horse Eventing
08:21:50 Ebony
Hi everyone ... I have purchased some water balloons but now do I 'hurl' them at other players?
The Old Gods
08:19:17 Void Malign
I had a coworker get a case where the doctor wrote a letter that stated "This is why (guy who killed UHC CEO) did what he did." Pretty sure it got escalated as a death threat.
Rain Plains
08:15:47 Kelan/Rain
Entitled people are why i think everyone should be in retail for at least 6 months. The mentally ill or people on drugs are why I don't think anyone should be in retail. Best story I have involved a storage unit, 3 boxes of adult content, and a divorce
Skyward Stud
08:11:32 Skrangle
this is my favourite retail story of mine.

a customer came in after closing - Mon-Fri the deli closes at 8pm while the rest of the store closes at 9pm - and demands food. the deli was visibly closed, too. the lights were off and all the stuff in the case was covered in plastic, the seafood was put away, there were SIGNS UP ON THE DAMN CASE saying "we are closed go away".

I politely tell this lady that we're closed and she proceeds to argue with me. I was at the end of a 9 hour shift and was beyond exhausted at that point, so I had little patience for her nonsense. we argued for about 5 minutes before she goes "how will you compensate me for this inconvenience" and I very loudly said "we won't! we're closed! it sucks to suck!"

she goes to the manager on duty who's one of my closest friends to complain, and he goes "well... they *are* closed. it *does* suck to suck."
Shadow Mtn
07:58:26 
Have to chime in here, I worked for CVS. Had a drunk guy come in around closing, go to the restroom, and come out naked. Yep, as the day he was born. He said he thought he was home and going to take a shower.
Black Dragon Stable
07:58:01 BDS / Black / Stormy
I don't even have a degree. I got 'lucky' and got my foot in the door, but then the family friend who got me in retired and we also had a new director come in, and that's when it got really really bad.
Paradise Stables
07:52:07 Ariel / Tara
What breed is the most likely to be captured with tobiano?
Shroom
07:47:35 
Black, what's funny is I got my MLIS and thought I wanted to work in a library. I won't go near any public ones, at best I will work at a university library.
Minerva
07:41:57 Min
Gosh im glad im not customer facing haha. When I worked at a riding school I had a kid refuse to ride a pony because it was the wrong colour once- that didn't go down well funnily enough haha
Black Dragon Stable
07:33:01 BDS / Black / Stormy
Now I just get yelled at by stressed out managers and nod and nod and nod until they go away and then ignore whatever it was they were yelling at me about while they go yell at someone else after me.
Boulder Creek
07:29:54 
I'm glad the only ones I work with swish their tails and bang on the gate if I'm late with food.
Black Dragon Stable
07:29:06 BDS / Black / Stormy
Oh, I got the cops called on me because one of the mentally disabled got mad I told her she couldn't check out the stack of 20 DVDs she had (only 3) and she started screaming that I stole her wallet. Almost forgot about that one!
Black Dragon Stable
07:26:39 BDS / Black / Stormy
What's sad? At the time I lived in a town of 6000 people. In the midwest. In the middle of a cornfield where there was supposedly next to zero crime.

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Gemstone Stable
08:30:45 Snow❆Gem
@shadow

Call the electrically company. The company around here fixes it faster if people call it in. Even with automatic signal sending boxes on the buildings. O.o
Dark Horse Eventing
08:30:00 Ebony
Thank you, @Snow Gem :)
JP Show Stables
08:29:13 
I used to work as a show secretary for major horse shows and had more than a few crazy people but I think my favorite was the lady who wanted to pay me but didn't like any of the options. Didn't want to pay by card because I could steal the number, didn't want to pay the 3% convenience fee, and didn't want to pay then because her trainer might add things to her bill (it was like a thursday or friday). Didn't want to leave an open check (written to the company, amount just not filled in) because I could write it for any amount and pocket the difference (IDK how... also she could have come back on sunday to write the amount out). Definitelty didn't want to pay cash. I was like... I genuinely don't know what you want me to do right now. She then sat outside the office for two hours watching me to see what shady things I did in my spare time.
Gemstone Stable
08:29:13 Snow❆Gem
@ebony

On players page, click 'Events and Games'. Its under 'Stable Info' box, which have the avatar, join date, and such.
Lynx Glory
08:27:45 ⛈ whisper/lynx
Skrangle
Loved your story that was funny xD
Shadow Mtn
08:24:03 
I manage vacation rentals now. I once had a gentleman call me at 4:45 am to tell me the power was out and asked what I planned on doing about it because if his wife woke at 5 and didn't have coffee waiting on her, there would be hell to pay. I asked him what he would like for me to do? was I supposed to find the issue, climb the pole, and reattach it? He didn't appreciate my sentiment but c'mon, woken out of dead sleep at that time of morning, my adrenaline spiked
Gemstone Stable
08:24:00 Snow❆Gem
@eury

O.o That Luigi guy was caught in a nearby county... I'm sure he was thinking about taking Amtrak or the Greyhound... Both have hubs in Altoona.
Dark Horse Eventing
08:21:50 Ebony
Hi everyone ... I have purchased some water balloons but now do I 'hurl' them at other players?
The Old Gods
08:19:17 Void Malign
I had a coworker get a case where the doctor wrote a letter that stated "This is why (guy who killed UHC CEO) did what he did." Pretty sure it got escalated as a death threat.
Rain Plains
08:15:47 Kelan/Rain
Entitled people are why i think everyone should be in retail for at least 6 months. The mentally ill or people on drugs are why I don't think anyone should be in retail. Best story I have involved a storage unit, 3 boxes of adult content, and a divorce
Skyward Stud
08:11:32 Skrangle
this is my favourite retail story of mine.

a customer came in after closing - Mon-Fri the deli closes at 8pm while the rest of the store closes at 9pm - and demands food. the deli was visibly closed, too. the lights were off and all the stuff in the case was covered in plastic, the seafood was put away, there were SIGNS UP ON THE DAMN CASE saying "we are closed go away".

I politely tell this lady that we're closed and she proceeds to argue with me. I was at the end of a 9 hour shift and was beyond exhausted at that point, so I had little patience for her nonsense. we argued for about 5 minutes before she goes "how will you compensate me for this inconvenience" and I very loudly said "we won't! we're closed! it sucks to suck!"

she goes to the manager on duty who's one of my closest friends to complain, and he goes "well... they *are* closed. it *does* suck to suck."
Shadow Mtn
07:58:26 
Have to chime in here, I worked for CVS. Had a drunk guy come in around closing, go to the restroom, and come out naked. Yep, as the day he was born. He said he thought he was home and going to take a shower.
Black Dragon Stable
07:58:01 BDS / Black / Stormy
I don't even have a degree. I got 'lucky' and got my foot in the door, but then the family friend who got me in retired and we also had a new director come in, and that's when it got really really bad.
Paradise Stables
07:52:07 Ariel / Tara
What breed is the most likely to be captured with tobiano?
Shroom
07:47:35 
Black, what's funny is I got my MLIS and thought I wanted to work in a library. I won't go near any public ones, at best I will work at a university library.
Minerva
07:41:57 Min
Gosh im glad im not customer facing haha. When I worked at a riding school I had a kid refuse to ride a pony because it was the wrong colour once- that didn't go down well funnily enough haha
Black Dragon Stable
07:33:01 BDS / Black / Stormy
Now I just get yelled at by stressed out managers and nod and nod and nod until they go away and then ignore whatever it was they were yelling at me about while they go yell at someone else after me.
Boulder Creek
07:29:54 
I'm glad the only ones I work with swish their tails and bang on the gate if I'm late with food.
Black Dragon Stable
07:29:06 BDS / Black / Stormy
Oh, I got the cops called on me because one of the mentally disabled got mad I told her she couldn't check out the stack of 20 DVDs she had (only 3) and she started screaming that I stole her wallet. Almost forgot about that one!
Black Dragon Stable
07:26:39 BDS / Black / Stormy
What's sad? At the time I lived in a town of 6000 people. In the midwest. In the middle of a cornfield where there was supposedly next to zero crime.

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Critique Ari July 13, 2022 06:58 PM


Quizzical Quarters
 
Posts: 2142
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Y'all, I have no idea what to improve on. Because I wanna improve everywhere. So I can't pick just one thing to focus on. I also am SO stuck between styles I want. Should I stick my more painty style, is that what y'all like? It's fun being more painty, but I absolutely love sharper styles that look a bit more "natrual" I guess, its just so pleasing to the eyes.

I'll post my gallery below so y'all can see my recents lately. I definitely need help/tips on eyes. They kill me to do. Be as harsh as you need, because that's the only way imma learn anything. Besides, Ari's a bitch I can take it :')

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Critique Ari July 13, 2022 07:04 PM

The Golden Horse
 
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i love all the styles XD it looks so cool!
the hair is also amazing and i don't even notice the eyes like at all...

Edited at July 14, 2022 12:31 AM by The Golden Horse
Critique Ari July 13, 2022 07:17 PM


Reindeers

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This isn't much of a 'critique', but your style is amazing, especially the hair! You've definitely improved from when I bought art from you some moons ago.
Critique Ari July 13, 2022 07:21 PM

Former Stable
 
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I really love your horse anatomy, it's really spot on! The only thing I have to critique is the hair, if you are going for realistic that will have to be an area to work on(looks kinds like vines more than hair). As I notice you do some semi-realistic which looks good, but my attention get caught on the hair that doesn't quite look right. You've done a couple really nice ones!

Edited at July 13, 2022 07:27 PM by Beans247
Critique Ari July 13, 2022 07:40 PM

Former Stable
 
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I'm not a HEE artist but something i've learned from drawing is your style is CONSTANTLY changing... you're trying new things (even without knowing it) each time you draw anything... look at your drawings and figure out what YOU like about them... make notes of what you like and what you want to change up your drawings are beautiful but your style is your own and its constantly changing you do something a bit different each time you draw lol... do what you like and figure out what you don't like if you have 2 ways you like to draw horses figure out what you like or don't like about the styles you use and see what you come up with by combining what you like from the two styles. Your art is really really beautiful though :) I looked at your gallery and its stunning :3

Critique Ari July 13, 2022 09:20 PM


Hollow Tree Acres
 
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I love more painted type looks. I don't like sharp art but also not super smudgy. I like softness. I prefer your current style to the style you practiced with your latest premade. As an artist though I'm constantly trying different things trying to work out my own techniques
Critique Ari July 13, 2022 10:24 PM


Tranquility
 
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Hollow Tree Acres said:
I love more painted type looks. I don't like sharp art but also not super smudgy. I like softness. I prefer your current style to the style you practiced with your latest premade. As an artist though I'm constantly trying different things trying to work out my own techniques


This. All of it. 100%. Thanks Hollow for writing it out so I didnt have too 😂.
No, part of the reason I love your art so much is your style, your unique touch! Sure, if you arent enjoying, that's ok too, it's your art so try something new! <3 Every time I see a piece of art done by you, I 100% know it's you without looking at credits! Personally, as an artist myself, that's what I strive for, uniqueness of "my" style. And you have literally done it perfectly!
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Some points I notice on your current style (so not the new one)
- the eyes, I only noticed them becuase you pointed them out on your post, and I LOVE eyes, I feel like they draw the entire piece together and I also love the way I do eyes. So, if you'd like, just pm me, and I can give you a "tutorial" so to speak, and you can help me becuase I've been wanting to plan one for a while, but you could help me test it out :D if you wanted to of course.
- I mean, I really dont have much other critique, on your very last piece, the shadows on the horse (near shoulder, ears, belly) were very unnecessarily sharp and contrasting so I would smudge them down or blur them down a bit
- also, on white markings (need to do a tutorial for them too so pm me!) I think if you copied them on another layer and take a rough watercolor eraser around the edges at a low opacity, it might help making them look more realistic
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:D Your awesome Ari!!
Critique Ari July 14, 2022 12:16 AM


Rolling in Hay
 
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Honestly I really love your style of hair and like what Hollow and Tranquility have both said that the painted look is awesome and is what makes your art unique. I also prefer your current style rather then the last piece you practised but everyone is different so others might like that style more. Not really much I can think to critique cause I'm not that great at doing that haha.
Critique Ari July 14, 2022 09:09 PM


Quizzical Quarters
 
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Thank you all so much!! It's greatly appreciated 💚

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