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Paradise Stables
02:11:33 Ariel / Tara
I both wish and don't wish it was lol
Dark Shadows Estate
02:06:47 Bazz
for some reason I thought it was the first today lol...
Boulder Creek
02:04:51 
My brain is melting slightly
Trying to sort out US eventing levels, with the dressage level equivalents - and then corelating that with British eventing.

and reminding myself the difference between shoulder-fore and shoulder-in, renvers and travers
WolfRunner Acres
02:04:45 
Thank you Lily
Greenheart Stables
01:55:45 Green|Gren|Grenlin
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Paradise Stables
01:51:03 Ariel / Tara
Lily, are you still here?
Paradise Stables
01:50:32 Ariel / Tara
Marsh, so cute!!
starmutt
01:44:45 marsh 🌈
tigors -Click-
Alpine Acres
01:35:49 Lily
WolfRunner
green means your horse is doing well in training and is at the same level as their rider, so yes it is good :)
Red means they have levelled up before their rider and need to be switched to a rider that is the same level as them
Sport Pony Island
01:32:00 
And my last brindle

-HEE Click-
Sport Pony Island
01:31:07 
Ye
Sport Pony Island
01:30:54 
Нуб she is a beauty
Sagewood Stables
01:30:44 
this is my first brindle :D
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Wild_Potatoes
01:29:44 
Woah
Sport Pony Island
01:29:31 
uhh, i love brindles, look at my featured one :) -HEE Click-
Wild_Potatoes
01:28:20 
-HEE Click-
This is my recent purchase
Sport Pony Island
01:27:48 
1/1, thanks
Wild_Potatoes
01:27:29 
Woah handsome!
Sport Pony Island
01:27:13 
Check out my latest purchase

-HEE Click-
Sport Pony Island
01:26:29 
Yo, nice potatoe :3

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Paradise Stables
02:11:33 Ariel / Tara
I both wish and don't wish it was lol
Dark Shadows Estate
02:06:47 Bazz
for some reason I thought it was the first today lol...
Boulder Creek
02:04:51 
My brain is melting slightly
Trying to sort out US eventing levels, with the dressage level equivalents - and then corelating that with British eventing.

and reminding myself the difference between shoulder-fore and shoulder-in, renvers and travers
WolfRunner Acres
02:04:45 
Thank you Lily
Greenheart Stables
01:55:45 Green|Gren|Grenlin
-HEE Click-
👀
Paradise Stables
01:51:03 Ariel / Tara
Lily, are you still here?
Paradise Stables
01:50:32 Ariel / Tara
Marsh, so cute!!
starmutt
01:44:45 marsh 🌈
tigors -Click-
Alpine Acres
01:35:49 Lily
WolfRunner
green means your horse is doing well in training and is at the same level as their rider, so yes it is good :)
Red means they have levelled up before their rider and need to be switched to a rider that is the same level as them
Sport Pony Island
01:32:00 
And my last brindle

-HEE Click-
Sport Pony Island
01:31:07 
Ye
Sport Pony Island
01:30:54 
Нуб she is a beauty
Sagewood Stables
01:30:44 
this is my first brindle :D
-HEE Click-
Wild_Potatoes
01:29:44 
Woah
Sport Pony Island
01:29:31 
uhh, i love brindles, look at my featured one :) -HEE Click-
Wild_Potatoes
01:28:20 
-HEE Click-
This is my recent purchase
Sport Pony Island
01:27:48 
1/1, thanks
Wild_Potatoes
01:27:29 
Woah handsome!
Sport Pony Island
01:27:13 
Check out my latest purchase

-HEE Click-
Sport Pony Island
01:26:29 
Yo, nice potatoe :3

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Newbie Critique October 13, 2024 04:32 PM


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This is the first piece I have ever done and was wondering if some more experienced artists could offer some tips and pointers? It would be really helpful to hear what people like and then what they think can be improved (a lot can I know lol). I think because so much needs improving, I'm a bit lost on where to start!
Newbie Critique October 14, 2024 04:20 PM


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I think this piece is really cute! Here are some pointers.
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1. Choose a better background. I love the theme, but I don't like how it's blurry. Personaly, I like the blur the background behind the horse, but it should be crisp and sharp on the ground by the horse.
2. The horse looks a little squished, like the perspective is off. If that was the stock, then I'd recommend choosing a different one, or if that was how you got it to horse avatar size, I'd recommend finding a different way.
3. I like how you remembered to add a shadow! That's really important to ground the piece. But you have to make sure to match the lighting of the background. Personally, although it's hard to tell, the light is coming from the left middle/top of the image. So the shadow should be on the opposite side, the bottom right hand corner.
4. Painting hair. This is something for future, my best recommendation is to follow one of the many tutorials for it! How well you do hair is honestly one of the biggest factors of what piece sells, along with how good quality your images are.
5. Eyes. Since this is a ghost theme it doesn't matter much and the dark eyes goes quite well with the piece. But usually you'd want to repaint the eye, there are a few tutorials you can find pinned to the top of this forum section!
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Overall this is an awesome first piece and a great start in your art journey! Feel free to reach out to me if you ever want more advice in the future/more specific advice.
Newbie Critique October 14, 2024 05:18 PM


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Thank you so much! This is really helpful and gives me some clear direction
:D

Sagebrush said:
I think this piece is really cute! Here are some pointers.
.
1. Choose a better background. I love the theme, but I don't like how it's blurry. Personaly, I like the blur the background behind the horse, but it should be crisp and sharp on the ground by the horse.
2. The horse looks a little squished, like the perspective is off. If that was the stock, then I'd recommend choosing a different one, or if that was how you got it to horse avatar size, I'd recommend finding a different way.
3. I like how you remembered to add a shadow! That's really important to ground the piece. But you have to make sure to match the lighting of the background. Personally, although it's hard to tell, the light is coming from the left middle/top of the image. So the shadow should be on the opposite side, the bottom right hand corner.
4. Painting hair. This is something for future, my best recommendation is to follow one of the many tutorials for it! How well you do hair is honestly one of the biggest factors of what piece sells, along with how good quality your images are.
5. Eyes. Since this is a ghost theme it doesn't matter much and the dark eyes goes quite well with the piece. But usually you'd want to repaint the eye, there are a few tutorials you can find pinned to the top of this forum section!
.
Overall this is an awesome first piece and a great start in your art journey! Feel free to reach out to me if you ever want more advice in the future/more specific advice.



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