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Savannah Stables
08:48:36 Dusty
Hummer
Hes trying to add an extra challenge for you
Hummingbird Meadows
08:48:26 Bird
I think 2. They are pieces of the border.
Glacier Bay Cove
08:48:09 Arctic Katz
How many puzzle pieces did he take, Hummer
MakeEm Fancy
08:47:49 Ally 💜
Im currently trying to train our puppy not to chew on my daughters toys. Its a challenge lol
Hummingbird Meadows
08:45:48 Bird
@Glacier, yes naughty Finley. I could try reaching out to the puzzle maker because they said they will replace missing pieces. Worth a shot.
Glacier Bay Cove
08:45:00 Arctic Katz
Oh, crap, naughty Finley
Hummingbird Meadows
08:43:49 Bird
Well, I just found a puzzle piece. It was chewed up and bent. =/
MakeEm Fancy
08:38:07 Ally 💜
I just tried pumpkin spice caramel chews and oh my goodness they are amazing :D
All Breeds
08:33:49 Fawn
Ugh those gorgeous blue eyes
Glacier Bay Cove
08:29:00 Arctic Katz
Just checked the hidden falls
Glacier Bay Cove
08:28:11 Arctic Katz
So adorable
Hummingbird Meadows
08:27:51 Bird
I can't stay mad at this face.
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The Fallen Rulers
08:24:00 Storm|RID/SD Lord
Hi all
Aquamarine
08:11:39 
I hope he's able to find the piecies
Aquamarine
08:10:29 
YIKES hummer
Glacier Bay Cove
08:08:26 Arctic Katz
Hope you are able to find the puzzle pieces
Hummingbird Meadows
08:07:23 Bird
I'm guessing he took them to a different part of the house
Glacier Bay Cove
08:07:05 Arctic Katz
Oh, no, Hummer
Hummingbird Meadows
08:03:51 Bird
Finley messed up part of my puzzle and now some of the pieces are missing. =\
KPH Equestrian
08:00:36 Rapcoon | Jester
arctic
no, you made it for you, it's not like you paid yourself from one account to make it for another of your accounts lol

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Savannah Stables
08:48:36 Dusty
Hummer
Hes trying to add an extra challenge for you
Hummingbird Meadows
08:48:26 Bird
I think 2. They are pieces of the border.
Glacier Bay Cove
08:48:09 Arctic Katz
How many puzzle pieces did he take, Hummer
MakeEm Fancy
08:47:49 Ally 💜
Im currently trying to train our puppy not to chew on my daughters toys. Its a challenge lol
Hummingbird Meadows
08:45:48 Bird
@Glacier, yes naughty Finley. I could try reaching out to the puzzle maker because they said they will replace missing pieces. Worth a shot.
Glacier Bay Cove
08:45:00 Arctic Katz
Oh, crap, naughty Finley
Hummingbird Meadows
08:43:49 Bird
Well, I just found a puzzle piece. It was chewed up and bent. =/
MakeEm Fancy
08:38:07 Ally 💜
I just tried pumpkin spice caramel chews and oh my goodness they are amazing :D
All Breeds
08:33:49 Fawn
Ugh those gorgeous blue eyes
Glacier Bay Cove
08:29:00 Arctic Katz
Just checked the hidden falls
Glacier Bay Cove
08:28:11 Arctic Katz
So adorable
Hummingbird Meadows
08:27:51 Bird
I can't stay mad at this face.
-Click-
The Fallen Rulers
08:24:00 Storm|RID/SD Lord
Hi all
Aquamarine
08:11:39 
I hope he's able to find the piecies
Aquamarine
08:10:29 
YIKES hummer
Glacier Bay Cove
08:08:26 Arctic Katz
Hope you are able to find the puzzle pieces
Hummingbird Meadows
08:07:23 Bird
I'm guessing he took them to a different part of the house
Glacier Bay Cove
08:07:05 Arctic Katz
Oh, no, Hummer
Hummingbird Meadows
08:03:51 Bird
Finley messed up part of my puzzle and now some of the pieces are missing. =\
KPH Equestrian
08:00:36 Rapcoon | Jester
arctic
no, you made it for you, it's not like you paid yourself from one account to make it for another of your accounts lol

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Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 07:57 PM

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(Added shadow; Thanks Brook xD)
So this is my favorite piece that I have done. I am currently a T3 artist and this is my first piece that I have painted on (war paint), done a proper mane for, and tried to make the horse blend with its surroundings (which not gonna lie is quite nice imo.) But I feel like there's just something missing. I hope you guys can help me figure it out. Critiques on the piece in general are obviously appreciated.

Edited at June 27, 2022 08:11 PM by Araminta Farms
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:04 PM


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I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:07 PM

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I actually forgot the shadow. *facepalm* I just went in to fix it, posting the edited version now since adding a shadow is very easy lol

Brook Mill Dressage said:
I'm not an artist. I have ZERO art abilities. I just thought I'd get that out of the way ;)
I think adding the shadow of the horse would really help so that it look more planted (I think). I hope this helps? Just the first think that came to me! Otherwise, it's quite good and the mane is quite nice :)


Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 08:12 PM

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There is potential here! The horse is the size of a titan right now. It is much too big for the background. The shadow you added does not line up with the horse either, and it's a little sharp for such chill lighting in my opinion. There are details lost by the smudging on the horse that you could definitely benefit from drawing back in. Those are the main things throwing the piece off, plus poor grounding.
Photo critiques? June 27, 2022 11:52 PM

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One thing that may help is adding highlight! If the sun is shining in front of the horse (causing the shadow to go behind him) Then you could add a highlight where the sun would hit the horse directly like his mane, top of face/ears, front of the legs(ish) and upper back!
Photo critiques? June 28, 2022 09:49 AM


Kuewi knn stable

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Additionally please use a more readable size and font for the credits - thanks ;)

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