Horse Eden : Criticism and help!

Year: 192 Season: Fall

$: 0

Forecast:

Afternoon Showers, Sleet Possible

Forecast:

Wed 01:44pm

Stables Online: 132

Unwanted Ones

01:40:40

Hundreds of cheap brood mares in my stables

Selling upgrade 160k

BlueBirdFalls

01:37:23 Blu

BBF Haver EWW KNN
All 20 Lc open to the public! Proven Wc producer, Always starts on the LBs! Would do really well with a decent mare!
up for 1k
-HEE Click-
----------
Broods:
-HEE Click-
----
Sales:
-HEE Click-

Fluffy's Cosy Home

01:36:37 Fluffy

Auction:
*World Class
*EEE
*PEE combo
*Colour
*Chimera
*Rares
-HEE Click-

I have:
*WWW/WW Straws
*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
-HEE Click-

Sungold Eventing

01:34:16 Gold

ISO top 20ABLB embryos/broods for 193/194. Can look at pre-made embryos

Will be sent to top stud+svenned. Can pay well - DM me please

Azure Estates

01:24:59 Lillie Pt 4

In need of a Quest stud? I've got a couple EEE-WEE Wb stallions Packed with color! Some homo as well! Tobiano, Splash Whites, Frame and better yet most dont have Sabino! Best part? They're breeding fees are under 1k ebs!
-HEE Click-

Green River Stables

01:20:48

AA mares for sale
-HEE Click-

3 Upgrades available
1mo - 100k
3mo - 175k
First come first serve, pm me :)

Sweet Valley

01:16:55 I Buy Brindles!!!!!!

-HEE Click-

Come And Join SVB! A random item will be gifted to everyone who joins as a welcome gift!

Port Royal Equines

01:05:45 ISH Bravery 4 Sale!

-HEE Click-
(I)SH straws! EWW+, Bravery, and retired ABLB.

-HEE Click-
New chonk set at auction!

-HEE Click-
EEE+ mares at brood. 4k. Some are w producers!

Glacier Bay Cove

01:00:35 Arctic Katz

Sherpa map in my store

Fantasy Horses

12:53:48 Bravery + AD ISH

Auction! Discounted Quality!
- ISH, TB, and WB!
- P+ rated
- EEE and Elite bravery!
- AD, SD, and bravery
- Wild captures, some maps used!
- Ages 2 & 3!
- Rare color like apricot and dapple grey!
- Mostly mares, a few stallions
- 1k to 2k ONLY!
- Ends on the 25th at 12pm GT!
-HEE Click-

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.

Rules Hide
You are in: Sales
View Main Chat

Unwanted Ones

01:40:40

Hundreds of cheap brood mares in my stables

Selling upgrade 160k

BlueBirdFalls

01:37:23 Blu

Fluffy's Cosy Home

01:36:37 Fluffy

Auction:
*World Class
*EEE
*PEE combo
*Colour
*Chimera
*Rares
-HEE Click-

I have:
*WWW/WW Straws
*Studs
*Items in my store
*Decors
*Sale horses
-HEE Click-

Sungold Eventing

01:34:16 Gold

ISO top 20ABLB embryos/broods for 193/194. Can look at pre-made embryos

Will be sent to top stud+svenned. Can pay well - DM me please

Azure Estates

01:24:59 Lillie Pt 4

Green River Stables

01:20:48

AA mares for sale
-HEE Click-

3 Upgrades available
1mo - 100k
3mo - 175k
First come first serve, pm me :)

Sweet Valley

01:16:55 I Buy Brindles!!!!!!

-HEE Click-

Come And Join SVB! A random item will be gifted to everyone who joins as a welcome gift!

Port Royal Equines

01:05:45 ISH Bravery 4 Sale!

-HEE Click-
(I)SH straws! EWW+, Bravery, and retired ABLB.

-HEE Click-
New chonk set at auction!

-HEE Click-
EEE+ mares at brood. 4k. Some are w producers!

Glacier Bay Cove

01:00:35 Arctic Katz

Sherpa map in my store

Fantasy Horses

12:53:48 Bravery + AD ISH

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.

Refresh

Forums

→ Horse Eden is a fun game! Sign Up Now! ←

Forums > Art Shops > Art Help

1 2

Criticism and help!

January 31, 2025 05:20 AM

Dark Conspiracy

Posts: 196
#1288811
Give Award

Hello! Some of you already know me^^ it's me Dark! I've been making art for a long time and unfortunately worked on a very old, laggy iPad. Now that I have a new iPad, I'm open to learning!!

I am open to criticism and help!

I am also interested in:

how much is it worth?

Tier?

old art is in my gallery

Edited at January 31, 2025 05:29 AM by Dark Conspiracy

Criticism and help!

January 31, 2025 05:21 AM

Dark Conspiracy

Posts: 196
#1288812
Give Award

latest art to criticize

Edited at January 31, 2025 05:24 AM by Dark Conspiracy

Criticism and help!

January 31, 2025 10:38 AM

Gem

Posts: 5190
#1288878
Give Award

Hi!!!! I LOVE this piece!!!!! I saw it on Imp's stable a few days ago and was just blown away. I adore the contrast and the lighting and the drama. It's truly stunning and I would totally steal it. I had to stare for a bit to find anything to critique haha!!! ❤️

A few little things:

Looking at the jewelry on the tail, the cuffs should be casting a very small shadow on the horse to illustrate that they're not just markings. Along the same point, the cuff closer to the base of the tail, there is hair growing out of it. Logically I think the hair would be trapped inside the cuff? So maybe erase the few strands there. And if I'm totally misinterpreting it and they are meant to be markings, please ignore lol
As I mentioned, I adore the lighting. It makes it super dramatic and just gorgeous. The only spot I would adjust slightly is the chest/front shoulder. It seems unnaturally light when the direct light source is on the opposite side of the horse.
Because the background is so vibrant and green, I think it would make sense to have a bit more of that color incorporated/cast onto the horse. However, for this piece it feels like more of a stylistic choice and would work either way.
Last tiny thing, looking at where the tail docks to the horse's rump, I feel like the rump should be in front of the base of the tail. Meaning that there should be some sort of shading making a distinction between the two areas with shading rather than a direct connection. If this doesn't make sense I'd be happy to sketch what I mean.

Lots of love!!! ❤️

Criticism and help!

January 31, 2025 10:45 AM

Dark Conspiracy

Posts: 196
#1288880
Give Award

Thank you^^

First art on the new ipad - a lot of work go get better but ur tips are awesome as always^^

Gem!

oh and yea they are fur markings not jewelry but thank you!^^

Edited at January 31, 2025 10:48 AM by Dark Conspiracy

Criticism and help!

January 31, 2025 11:54 AM

Gem

Posts: 5190
#1288904
Give Award

Okay haha!! I would suggest maybe making the tail markings less shiny then so they don't look quite so metallic but they're still super cool :D

You're most welcome 🥰

Criticism and help!

February 8, 2025 04:46 AM

Dark Conspiracy

Posts: 196
#1292504
Give Award

new art for Criticism and price help!

Criticism and help!

February 8, 2025 11:15 AM

Gem

Posts: 5190
#1292573
Give Award

Easily 200k-300k+. I love them both 😍

I'm on my phone so I'm not going to type out anything long but the one thing I will say is to look at the mane in the red demon sky piece. In comparison to the forelock in the same piece and the hair in the vampire piece, the main feels very stiff. Which I understand is probably a result of the hair cuffs and the braided style but braids can still curve and flow, same with the hair exiting the cuff.
Absolutely amazing job with lighting and fitting the horses to their background. Just be careful you're not avoiding grounding by shading with black 😜

Completely beautiful, can't wait to see what you make next <3

Criticism and help!

February 8, 2025 11:19 AM

Dark Conspiracy

Posts: 196
#1292574
Give Award

Thank you for always being here XD^^
I only do the black for the vampire - the dark atmosphere is supposed to make it a little creepier ^^

and yeah - hair is my biggest problem ;C

Gem said:

Easily 200k-300k+. I love them both 😍

I'm on my phone so I'm not going to type out anything long but the one thing I will say is to look at the mane in the red demon sky piece. In comparison to the forelock in the same piece and the hair in the vampire piece, the main feels very stiff. Which I understand is probably a result of the hair cuffs and the braided style but braids can still curve and flow, same with the hair exiting the cuff.
Absolutely amazing job with lighting and fitting the horses to their background. Just be careful you're not avoiding grounding by shading with black 😜

Completely beautiful, can't wait to see what you make next <3

Edited at February 8, 2025 11:20 AM by Dark Conspiracy

Criticism and help!

February 8, 2025 11:21 AM